I still have a bit of Writers Block but not as bad, and it's all thanks to the reviewers! Here are my thanks!
~{Chapter 5}~
DarkAngel197: Thank you for the review, again! I'm glad you liked it! Hope you like this one to!
Queen of the Damned: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I know what you mean about the computer, I can't use Netscape on FF.N. It works on everything else but not FF.N. I'm using IE. Anyway, hope you like this chapter as well!
Lalaithiel1: Thanks! Fav chapter, eh? I thought it was a little sappy. Ah well. Glad you liked it!
QTpie-pippinsgurl: Thanks for reviewing again! Yeah, I know it was a little sad. I don't know what I did to make it all that sad. Ah well, as long as the reviewers are happy! Hope you like!
Cassie-bear01: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it! I'll make sure I have a nice quote on the bottom for ya! Hope you like this one!
Serpent of Light: Thanks! It dose? Well, Thanks! I want it to sound like it could happen; I really wish I were in Ebony's place right now. I may like Frodo but Haldir's #2 on my list! I wish Peter Jackson hadn't killed him! I'm tearing up just thinking about it. Better stop before the water works come on. Anyway, Thanks for the review and I hope you like this one!
Panny Savage: ~{Chapter 3}~ You really think it was funny? WOW! Thanks! Hope you like this one! ~{Chapter 5}~ I am? THANKS! Here's you and the other reviewers a new chapter!
Naomie: ~{chapter 2}~ I like that song too. The radio and CMT dosen't show it much anymore. Anyway, Thanks for the review!
~{My A/N}~
DarkAngel197: Thanks for the help! I really needed it. They're going to get to Lorien in the next chapter so Ebony will be talking to the Lord and Lady. Thanks again!
Naomie: Here's the chapter! You may be right about Haldir. You'll find out in this chapter! Thanks for the help!
Crazyfanfictionfanatic: Uh… I don't know how to respond to that one. Thanks for reviewing?
Serpent of Light: Thanks for helping! This chapter's kinda like that. Hope you like it.
Kiara Greenleaf: Thanks for the help! I like the first half of the idea. It's after the ring so I can't really have the Fellowship. But I do like the rest of it! Very much in fact. Thanks again!
FAeOfDaRkNeSs: I don't really like love triangle that much so I'm probable not going to do it but thanks for trying! I'm glad you like it!
Panny Savage: I don't think I'll try R just yet. I'm only 12. But you did just give me an idea for later on! Thank you!
That's all! Thank you everyone! I hope you all like this chapter! On with the story!
Title: Dark Beauty
Rated: PG-13
Reasons why it's rated: Language
Disclaimer: *people from the copyright place holding pink dresses walk slowly towards me* ALLRIGHT! ALLRIGHT! I'll say it! Just get those-those- THINGS away from me! I don' own LotR! It's J.J.R Tolkien's! But I want it! I want to go to Middle-Earth and fight orcs! HAPPY?!?!?! *Copyright people nod*
Summery: Yes, it's another 'Girl-Falls-Into-Middle-Earth' story. But I like them so I thought up this! It's about a 16 year old girl named Ebony Alamen. No Legomance! Promise.
Chapter 6: "You know Elvish?"
In the morning, about half an hour before the sun was to rise, Ebony woke up and looked around the small campsite. Rùmil was sleeping with his back against a tree, as will as Orophin. She noticed that their eyes were open and looked like they were in a trance. Elves sleep with their eyes open. She thought, remembering what she read off of the Internet. Haldir was sitting near the fire with his bow and arrows close by.
Ebony watched him and thought, I wonder why he helped me?
Haldir felt someone watching him and turned his head just a little. He saw Ebony laying on her side and watching him. He turned to face her and motioned for her to come over by the fire. She got up and sat down by him. She looked at him and smirked.
Haldir raised an eyebrow and said, "What are you smirking about, Lady Ebony?"
Ebony frowned and said, "No 'lady'. Just Ebony. Got it?" Haldir nodded and she continued, "I was smirking because last night you said that if I tried to run way I'd get my hands tied again. But low and behold, I'm still here. That means I don't get my hands tied." She said, smirking again.
Haldir nodded his head and said, "That is true."
Ebony suddenly got what she thought was a great idea. Let's try out some elvish! She thought about what to say for a moment, then about how to say it, then said, "Intya mani?"
Haldir looked at her and asked, "You know elvish?"
"Do you know what I said?" she asked back, a grin on her face.
"Yes. You said, 'Guess what'. What?" he asked, cocking his head again. (A/n: Another cute mental picture! ^__^ Hehe. Uh… 0__0 bye!)
"I saw, quoting myself, "the ugliest thing I have ever seen". It was around 4'5, grayish colored skin and was, as stated earlier, the ugliest thing I have ever seen. It was watching me a bit before I meet up with you guys, right before I sprained my wrist." She said, looking at her hand with a look that clearly said that she did not like having it sprained. "It ran off a little before I feel out of that damn tree."
Haldir looked at her in shock. That sounds like an orc, but surely an orc would have attacked her? "It sound like you saw an orc. Tell me, why did it run off?"
She shrugged and said, "It was probable because when I felt something watching me, I climbed up a tree." She then said, in an annoyed voice, "The same damn tree that I feel out of."
Haldir just shook his head with that faintly showing smile again and said, "You are a very unusual maiden."
"In what way?" Ebony said. He's kinda cute with that faint smile and…NO! You just met the guy! Bad Ebony! Bad! But he's so cute! No! Must not think that way! For all you know he could be married and have kids! But… No buts! Ebony thought, fighting with herself again. She stopped just in time to hear Haldir.
"In a number of ways. You talk like no maiden I have ever seen; you wear strange garments, and you have managed to trick the captain of the Lothlorien guard."
Ebony thought about this. She got up and said, "You're all right, Haldor. You're all right."
Haldir looked at her and said, "It's Haldir not Haldor."
"Whatever." She said back. She looked to the east and saw that it was turning a beautiful shade of pinks and purples and light blues. "Maa ie' i'- romen, Haldir." (Look at the sunrise, Haldir)
Haldir looked at the rising sun and yes indeed, it was beautiful, as was a sirten red eyed girl he knew.
What nether knew was that two blond haired elves were watching them, both thinking the same thing. Time for a little match making.
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Did you like it? I know it's short but I wanted to get it up as fast as I could. If there are any mistakes, tell me.
Thank you and R&R! Flames will be used to roast orcs and my anoying brother
Pippin: When's breakfast?
Aragorn: You already had it.
Pippin: we had one, yes. What about second breakfast? ~Aragorn walk away~
Merry: I don't think he knows about second breakfast Pip.
Pippin: Doesn't know about second breakfast? What about elevenses? Luncheon? Afternoon tea? Dinner? Super? He knows about them, don't he?
Merry: I wouldn't bet on it. ~Apple comes flying through the air and Merry catches it~ ~gives it to Pippin~ ~walks away~ ~another apple comes flying through the air and hits Pippin~ Pippin!
~Aragorn, Merry, and Pippin _ FotR~
