Love in Obadai High
By: Mimi Tachikawa
Chapter 2
Okay I was being too harsh with 10 reviews. I had to continue it anyway. So here's chapter two. No dedication this time. Dig in!
"Gina! Hey Gina! Wait up!" Mimi huffed. A girl twirled her dirty blonde hair as someone called her name. "Hey Meems!" said Gina. "Hi what's up?" asked Mimi. "Nothing much! Today is Monday no homework due tomorrow why?" Gina asked. "Jess, Sora and I are going to the mall for shoe shopping you want to come?" "I'm in! Let's go!".
2 hrs later.
Sora Takenouchi stared into a window of a shop called Les Royales (A/N: Sorry the best classy name I could think of at the moment!). She was in deep thought. "What would I do to get those lovely diamond earings! Sure they may be one of the cheapest in the store but they sure are pretty.pretty expensive too..hmmm.maybe if I worked overtime in the flower shop and then I could get an afterschool job on Mondays.. No Thursdays. Wait Wed.. Arghhh i'm busy on that day too. weekends why waste them! Are these diamonds really wo." her thoughts were interrupted. "Yo Sora are you coming or what!?" yelled Jess. Sora smiled. "Coming" Sora rushed through he crowd to meet her friend.
As she crossed the road she bumped into Tai. "S-sora!" Tai stammered. "Hey Tai!" said Sora cheerfully. " I guess I'll be going now b-bye!" and with that Mr. Kamiya was gone. Sora frowned "That was strange." Sora rejoined her friends who were already loading Mimi's shopping bags into the trunk. "Mimi! Did you buy the whole store!?" exclaimed Sora. "Already did Daddy owns it." she said casually. Sora, Jess, and Gina sweatdroped. "Okay then let's go"
"Sora here's your house by!" "Huh? By!" Sora got out of the car. Gina continued driving. " Mimi is it just me or has Sora been acting a little dreamy?." Mimi sighed and didn't even twitch to turn around and reply to Gina. " It's just you" she said dreamily. "Mimi? You have been staring at that window from the time I dropped Jess off." Mimi blushed . "Have I?! It's nothing I haven't been thinking of anyone at all I swear!" "I never said you were thinking of anyone" said Gina."Huh! Oh what do you know here comes my house! Bye!" Mimi laughed nervously. "Do you need help with your bags?" asked Gina. "Not at all I handle it myself!" She said giving off another phony laugh. She rushed out of the car and unloaded the bags as fast as she bought them.
Gina drove on. "As long as I don't have to help with all those bags it's fine. People get stranger by the day." She added to herself silently.
So what do you think??? Was it too short? At least 2 new reviews. Good or flames. I'll have Chapter 3 up soon promise. With Sincerity, Mimi Tachikawa
By: Mimi Tachikawa
Chapter 2
Okay I was being too harsh with 10 reviews. I had to continue it anyway. So here's chapter two. No dedication this time. Dig in!
"Gina! Hey Gina! Wait up!" Mimi huffed. A girl twirled her dirty blonde hair as someone called her name. "Hey Meems!" said Gina. "Hi what's up?" asked Mimi. "Nothing much! Today is Monday no homework due tomorrow why?" Gina asked. "Jess, Sora and I are going to the mall for shoe shopping you want to come?" "I'm in! Let's go!".
2 hrs later.
Sora Takenouchi stared into a window of a shop called Les Royales (A/N: Sorry the best classy name I could think of at the moment!). She was in deep thought. "What would I do to get those lovely diamond earings! Sure they may be one of the cheapest in the store but they sure are pretty.pretty expensive too..hmmm.maybe if I worked overtime in the flower shop and then I could get an afterschool job on Mondays.. No Thursdays. Wait Wed.. Arghhh i'm busy on that day too. weekends why waste them! Are these diamonds really wo." her thoughts were interrupted. "Yo Sora are you coming or what!?" yelled Jess. Sora smiled. "Coming" Sora rushed through he crowd to meet her friend.
As she crossed the road she bumped into Tai. "S-sora!" Tai stammered. "Hey Tai!" said Sora cheerfully. " I guess I'll be going now b-bye!" and with that Mr. Kamiya was gone. Sora frowned "That was strange." Sora rejoined her friends who were already loading Mimi's shopping bags into the trunk. "Mimi! Did you buy the whole store!?" exclaimed Sora. "Already did Daddy owns it." she said casually. Sora, Jess, and Gina sweatdroped. "Okay then let's go"
"Sora here's your house by!" "Huh? By!" Sora got out of the car. Gina continued driving. " Mimi is it just me or has Sora been acting a little dreamy?." Mimi sighed and didn't even twitch to turn around and reply to Gina. " It's just you" she said dreamily. "Mimi? You have been staring at that window from the time I dropped Jess off." Mimi blushed . "Have I?! It's nothing I haven't been thinking of anyone at all I swear!" "I never said you were thinking of anyone" said Gina."Huh! Oh what do you know here comes my house! Bye!" Mimi laughed nervously. "Do you need help with your bags?" asked Gina. "Not at all I handle it myself!" She said giving off another phony laugh. She rushed out of the car and unloaded the bags as fast as she bought them.
Gina drove on. "As long as I don't have to help with all those bags it's fine. People get stranger by the day." She added to herself silently.
So what do you think??? Was it too short? At least 2 new reviews. Good or flames. I'll have Chapter 3 up soon promise. With Sincerity, Mimi Tachikawa
