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Return of the Prince
"Father," Vegeta yelled out as he entered the throne room of the grand palace, "I have finally returned to take my place beside, as the prince of all saiyans." Vegeta had fought his way up the tower of the castle to find his father, he had eliminated all that stood in his way. Hundreds of troops had flooded the way up, Vegeta had found them to be minor stepping stones up the way.
"Vegeta, no it can't be you, Freiza and all of his troops were wiped out." His father exclaimed.
"Oh but father it is me, and Freiza was killed ten years ago. I had already rebelled against him, and even tried to help kill him." Vegeta boasted.
"No, my son would never had betrayed Freiza, and he would have destroyed Freiza himself, not tried to help. No my son was much stronger than you."
"Father, this planet was destroyed by Freiza, only four known saiyans were off planet..." He was cut short.
"First, this planet is here, and if you are telling the truth who were these four that survived?" The king asked of his son. After, what seemed like hours to Vegeta, explaining about the destruction of the planet, Raditz, Nappa, Freiza, the Androids, Cell, Buu, and most importantly, the only other live saiyan, as of one week ago, Goku, his father seemed to understand.
"Two of the half-saiyans are here along with me and should be along shortly." Vegeta put in.
"Well, bring them here, oh wait, you won't have the chance." The king started laughing as his top fighters began to come into the room. They filed around the room in a circle, Trunks and Gohan happened to be among them. It turns out that the suits they stole were a pattern only made for the top warriors of the king's elite. "These are my strongest the most elite of the fighting force here on the planet Vegeta. They will kill you imposter. Well I've never seen you two before, get up here and fight." He said pointing to Trunks and Gohan. The two stepped forward and looked around not sure of what to do. "Well, what are you waiting for, attack the intruder." The two started powering up and then shot towards Vegeta, with Trunks lagging behind because he didn't want to attack his father.
"What are you fools doing, I am the one who brought you to the place of your origins and now you are going to attack me." Vegeta yelled, dodging the first swing by Gohan.
"Yep, pretty much." Gohan said back, taking another missed swing at Vegeta. Trunks stopped and flew into the air, well into the heights of the cathedral style ceiling, and started to charge a blast, very slowly. Vegeta was still just dodging Gohan's fists and throwing a few of his own. The two continued to battle as the such, until Vegeta got tired of the pitiful fight and took a step back and began to power up, as the golden swirls came up around him all of the warriors in the room began to tremble as their scanners began to explode on their faces. The swirls came up from his feet and then around his entire body until his energy exploded into the golden super saiyan aura that they were so used to. The elites flew into the walls, plastered to them, indenting the walls, and even flying straight through them. The king just stood in awe at what he had just witnessed, this intruder had just went above any level of power he had ever witnessed. Gohan looked at Vegeta and simply shook his head before shooting straight to super saiyan, instead of savoring the astonishment of the stunned saiyans.
The two took turns powering up until Vegeta had to go to level two in order to go any further, Gohan continued to power up in normal super level, staying just above Vegeta's power. Gohan eventually went level two and blew straight past Vegeta's power, the two instead of taking turns just fully powered up, their powers were almost equal at that point, but Gohan could exceed beyond that level, though he didn't want to at the moment. Trunks was still in the air powering up the ball of energy.
The two great powers lunged head-on into each other, the two clashed each throwing and blocking a punch, inter-locking themselves in a fighting strike for a moment before breaking apart and flipping backwards from the other. They stared at each other before lunging at one another again. Vegeta pulled his hand up under Gohan block and flipped it up, palm towards his face and launched an immense blast into his face, sending him sprawling back onto the floor. Gohan laid on the floor for a moment before jumping directly back onto his feet and throwing a blast into Vegeta's chest along with the spring of his jump. It hit Vegeta square and knocked the wind from his lungs, forcing him to dip down onto one knee to catch his breath. While he was down Gohan rushed at him and punt kicked him back into the wall through his face. He shot through it, leaving a giant hole. He burst back in an instant and delivered a punch that sent Gohan through the wall. Now very little was left holding up the top of the tower. The king was beginning to worry about a collapse. The two shot at each other and began to deliver punch after punch, block after block. They were going fast enough that the king could no longer see them, Trunks was following them and lost grip on the energy ball he was holding, the king yelled at him and he threw his hand to one side, making it shoot off on that bearing and blast one of the remaining walls away. The top of the tower broke the remaining wall under it's weight and fell through the floor until it had crashed the king's tower down into the bottom floor of the palace, which collapsed after all the rubble shot out and broke all support.
Gohan, Vegeta, and Trunks all powered down, looked at each other, and blandly stated "Damn" before bursting out in laughter, in the distance they could hear the roar of all the saiyans on the planet gathering their power against them.
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