Biiki: Sorry for the delay. Heh, I've been lazy, and I am running low on
ideas. Also, school sucks and I haven't been the happiest of people in the
world.
Inner Baka: That running low on ideas means.nearing end of story. O.o Also, Biiki, why are YOU here?
Biiki: Hm. I am here because Baka is still busy with Neji, and I am making sure Baka Neko doesn't come out again.
IB: W00T! Whenever Neko comes out, I have to work overtime!
Biiki: The only one that you get along with is Baka. I prefer to ignore you most of the time.
IB: *sigh* I'm so unloved.
Biiki: Anyways, today really sucked, so this chapter is kinda.blotchy.
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Review Response:
Lily day: I like leaving people hanging, it means they will come read it later, when a new chapter is up.
Morien Alexander: Glad you like. :D And thanks. I'm glad I am improving.
Bronze Eagle: YAY.erm.I don't have much to say."Thank you" is getting old. And blah blah blah
WuffieLuver: Portable mob, eh? I should get one.
:D : Telepathy.naw.their brains aren't that special.
Japime Gurl: Yeah, I also love it when Naruto kicks ass.
Lauren Williams: Heh, it's a classic line.
Mistress Yvette: *sighs* Uhm, I'm not sure about kisses, that is certainly something that probably won't show up in this fic. It could show up in a sequel, though. ^.^ And if there aren't any kisses, there won't be lemon. O.o Lemon could show up a couple of sequels from now.-.-' though I don't know if I could continue that long.
Red Rose: Was that really that odd? O.O i'm glad it surprised you. :D *ponders* I have a fun side story I could write.Oooo.
Sadistic Demon: Heh, bro's can be annoying. Chapters will be released every now and then. Damn, 10 will take a while. -.-' *fights with 10 some more*
sTaR SNipEr: Yeah, schools getting more and more annoying every day (except for Japanese class, that class only gets better and better *squeals*)
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Disclaimer: *rubs forehead* Do you really think I own Naruto?
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Word list/explanations:
Jutsu: technique
Ne: Hey
Dobe: Idiot, Blockhead, Dead last
Sharingan: This is an explanation for those that might not know. Sharingan is a technique that is passed down through members of the Uchiha family. And since Sasuke is an Uchiha, he has it. Sharingan is a technique that originates in the eye, it can see a lot faster than the normal human eye. It can also give the user the ability to copy people (even illusion and other such fun things)
Uchiha: A clan. Sasuke is part of it. They carry the Sharingan ability. They are one of the "noble" families.
Shuriken: A throwing weapon often shaped like a star. In this case, about 2 inches across with 4 points.
Katon: Ryuka no Jutsu: Fire element: Fire Dragon Technique. Sasuke uses this in combination with string, basically, he has the flames spark from his fingers (which are touching the thread), and then the flames follow the string to the opponent.
Nani: What? What the? Eh?!
Katana: Japanese sword.
Kunai: Throwing weapon. More like a small knife, shaped kind of like an arrow head.but much larger.
Taijutsu: There are 3 kinds of Justus, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijustu. Ninjutsu is ninja techniques which can include things such as breathing fire to creating giant dragons out of water. Genjutsu is illusionary techniques. They create illusions that can trick your opponent. Taijustu is physical techniques, like punching and kicking.
The last technique that Sasuke used I didn't name. It is a spoiler, and I don't know, you might be able to figure it out anyways. I already spoiled Narutos technique, so why should I spoil Sasukes? (it's not the same, though)
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"Speech"
*Thoughts*
-Point of view-
(authors notes/side notes)
............'s scene change
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Last chapter was mainly in Sasukes point-of-view. But, I want to clear up Sasuke and Narutos' communication by putting it in Naruto's point-of-view.
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-Narutos POV, 1st person-
I looked at his face. His pale skin was now riddled with scratches and had blood here and there. *It's not right*
I pulled my shirt up and began to wipe the blood off his face. There was a stinging in my eyes, but I refused to cry. I felt my muscles tighten.
Sakura plopped down beside me. "Sasuke." She whispered, she let some tears run down her cheeks.
I looked away from her and back at Sasuke, "Sasuke, You've gotta snap out of it, Sasuke."
I closed my eyes, still holding back the tears. Then I felt something. Something squeezed my hand and I looked down.
Sasuke squeezed my hand and I looked up to his face again, I saw some movement.
*Sasuke! You can do it!* I smiled, "You're strong! You can beat his jutsu!"
His eyes were rolling behind his closed eyelids and his mouth was moving, trying to form words. "tsu?........." He muttered, barely above a whisper, "Who's? ...ruto.ll me." (translation: Jutsu? Who's? Naruto, tell me!")
"Sasuke?" I whispered softly.
"Naruto." He mumbled quietly.
I smiled even more. "Sasuke! I hope I'm not just hallucinating!"
"You're not, dobe. What is this jutsu you are talking about?" he said so quietly.
I just blurted it all out. "Akashi is in your head! He is going to kill you through your mind! But.if you kill him in your mind, there is a chance the jutsu will be severed and he'll die back here!"
There was a short pause, and then he said quietly. "Ne, Naruto?"
"Yeah?" I asked.
"How are we communicating?"
"I don't know." Then there was an awkward silence.
After that silence, he muttered, "Dobe." And he squeezed my hand.
I squeezed back, "Asshole."
Then he went quiet again. I assumed he was doing whatever he had to do to beat the jutsu.
I felt Kakashi-sensei rest his hand on my shoulder, "How is he?" he asked.
I shook my head, "He'll be fine."
Kakashi messed up my hair, "I'm glad."
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-Sasukes POV, 1st person-
"You're goin' down" I smiled and got into a fighting stance.
Akashi looked amused. "Is that so?" He looked so relaxed, but I wouldn't let he laid back attitude deceive me.
*This fight may be tough, but I'll get him for sure.* I decided that maybe using Sharingan would be a good idea, so I activated it.
"Sharingan?" Akashi questioned, "You're an Uchiha?"
I smiled, "Never pick a fight with an Uchiha." I ran at him, but he moved to the side, so I threw a shuriken at him.
"Is that all you got, boy?" Akashi grinned as he dodged it.
I smiled as the shuriken moved around him, and I threw several more.
He dodged them all easily, "You can't be missing with those sharp eyes." Akashi thought aloud, "You must have a trick up your sleeve."
"Too late to notice." I pulled on the thin thread I attached to the shuriken, and the thread bound him.
"Nani?" He said as he felt his body being bound. "Not to bad, But."
I didn't allow him to finish, "Katon: Ryuka no Jutsu". I let the fire move up the string to Akashi.
After the flames diminished, I noticed he was gone. "Nani?" I looked around for him.
"Up here." He said from above, holding a katana. "I'm not that easy, boy." Then he disappeared, and reappeared behind me.
*So fast* I thought and ducked down as he swung his sword at me, and I rolled to the side as he tried to kick me.
*Be smart, Sasuke* I thought as I dodged a kunai that Akashi threw at me.
"Hey, boy. Is that all you can do? Dodge?" Akashi laughed as he ran up to me.
I drew a kunai quickly and blocked the sword that he swung at me. *He's good at using it single handedly and double handedly. And he's physically stronger than me.* I grunted with the effort of holding back his sword, *Even if my Sharingan gets used to his speed, will I be able to stop him?*
Akashi pressed down with his sword, and I brought up another kunai creating an "X" block with them.
Akashi stepped back, and then thrust his sword, throwing all this strength behind it, grazing my cheek.
I leapt away, and touched my cheek. It was bleeding pretty badly.
I thought of Rock Lees' taijutsu. *Maybe that'll work to at least trap him.*
Akashi ran at me again, but this time, as he got close I ducked down and kicked up, kicking his chin. He flew up in the air with the force. While he was in the air, I quickly kicked him to a tree, then threw several kunai at him, pinning him to the tree.
I stood several feet away and did several hand seals. A large amount of charka crackled in my hand, it was rather painful, but I bared it. I ran at him full speed and jabbed his chest. My hand went right through his chest and into the tree. I knew he was dead. I withdrew my hand.
I stood back and looked at him; he was stuck to the tree. I fell to my knees. *Now what?*
I everything got kind of blurry and I felt dizzy. Suddenly everything went black.
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Biiki: Sorry for the shortness.
I'm tired I thought that that's a nice ending. Leaves you in suspense
IB: I'm sure they don't mind.
Biiki: Sadly, this fic is coming to an end soon. Many tears.
IB: Maybe you will do a sequel?
Biiki: IB, listen, don't make the people beg. If you give them ideas, they'll..
IB: It's too late, I already gave them ideas.
Biiki: Damnit. Well, actually, I could. I love writing these fics, once "After the break" is done, I might decide to do a sequel.
IB: But they don't have to worry too much yet, you still have a couple more chapters to go.
Biiki: Yup. And with you, Baka, and.Neko.around I can do a lot more.
IB: And no fluff.
Biiki: Hardly any lovies, just a growing friendship. You know, they are only 12, they barely know what "love" is. But I am leaving their relationship open, so the reader can decide what is going on. It might satisfy to those non-yaoi people. Also, I am leaving room for the relationship to grow. Because, if I do a sequel, It will be just slightly older. Ya know, realizing things, hormones, stuff.
IB: Yeah. I see. (
Biiki: Also, people, I am currently struggling with Chapter 10, and, just a warning, it won't be as action packed as the past couple of chapters.
Inner Baka: That running low on ideas means.nearing end of story. O.o Also, Biiki, why are YOU here?
Biiki: Hm. I am here because Baka is still busy with Neji, and I am making sure Baka Neko doesn't come out again.
IB: W00T! Whenever Neko comes out, I have to work overtime!
Biiki: The only one that you get along with is Baka. I prefer to ignore you most of the time.
IB: *sigh* I'm so unloved.
Biiki: Anyways, today really sucked, so this chapter is kinda.blotchy.
..............
Review Response:
Lily day: I like leaving people hanging, it means they will come read it later, when a new chapter is up.
Morien Alexander: Glad you like. :D And thanks. I'm glad I am improving.
Bronze Eagle: YAY.erm.I don't have much to say."Thank you" is getting old. And blah blah blah
WuffieLuver: Portable mob, eh? I should get one.
:D : Telepathy.naw.their brains aren't that special.
Japime Gurl: Yeah, I also love it when Naruto kicks ass.
Lauren Williams: Heh, it's a classic line.
Mistress Yvette: *sighs* Uhm, I'm not sure about kisses, that is certainly something that probably won't show up in this fic. It could show up in a sequel, though. ^.^ And if there aren't any kisses, there won't be lemon. O.o Lemon could show up a couple of sequels from now.-.-' though I don't know if I could continue that long.
Red Rose: Was that really that odd? O.O i'm glad it surprised you. :D *ponders* I have a fun side story I could write.Oooo.
Sadistic Demon: Heh, bro's can be annoying. Chapters will be released every now and then. Damn, 10 will take a while. -.-' *fights with 10 some more*
sTaR SNipEr: Yeah, schools getting more and more annoying every day (except for Japanese class, that class only gets better and better *squeals*)
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Disclaimer: *rubs forehead* Do you really think I own Naruto?
...............
Word list/explanations:
Jutsu: technique
Ne: Hey
Dobe: Idiot, Blockhead, Dead last
Sharingan: This is an explanation for those that might not know. Sharingan is a technique that is passed down through members of the Uchiha family. And since Sasuke is an Uchiha, he has it. Sharingan is a technique that originates in the eye, it can see a lot faster than the normal human eye. It can also give the user the ability to copy people (even illusion and other such fun things)
Uchiha: A clan. Sasuke is part of it. They carry the Sharingan ability. They are one of the "noble" families.
Shuriken: A throwing weapon often shaped like a star. In this case, about 2 inches across with 4 points.
Katon: Ryuka no Jutsu: Fire element: Fire Dragon Technique. Sasuke uses this in combination with string, basically, he has the flames spark from his fingers (which are touching the thread), and then the flames follow the string to the opponent.
Nani: What? What the? Eh?!
Katana: Japanese sword.
Kunai: Throwing weapon. More like a small knife, shaped kind of like an arrow head.but much larger.
Taijutsu: There are 3 kinds of Justus, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijustu. Ninjutsu is ninja techniques which can include things such as breathing fire to creating giant dragons out of water. Genjutsu is illusionary techniques. They create illusions that can trick your opponent. Taijustu is physical techniques, like punching and kicking.
The last technique that Sasuke used I didn't name. It is a spoiler, and I don't know, you might be able to figure it out anyways. I already spoiled Narutos technique, so why should I spoil Sasukes? (it's not the same, though)
................
"Speech"
*Thoughts*
-Point of view-
(authors notes/side notes)
............'s scene change
...............
Last chapter was mainly in Sasukes point-of-view. But, I want to clear up Sasuke and Narutos' communication by putting it in Naruto's point-of-view.
................
-Narutos POV, 1st person-
I looked at his face. His pale skin was now riddled with scratches and had blood here and there. *It's not right*
I pulled my shirt up and began to wipe the blood off his face. There was a stinging in my eyes, but I refused to cry. I felt my muscles tighten.
Sakura plopped down beside me. "Sasuke." She whispered, she let some tears run down her cheeks.
I looked away from her and back at Sasuke, "Sasuke, You've gotta snap out of it, Sasuke."
I closed my eyes, still holding back the tears. Then I felt something. Something squeezed my hand and I looked down.
Sasuke squeezed my hand and I looked up to his face again, I saw some movement.
*Sasuke! You can do it!* I smiled, "You're strong! You can beat his jutsu!"
His eyes were rolling behind his closed eyelids and his mouth was moving, trying to form words. "tsu?........." He muttered, barely above a whisper, "Who's? ...ruto.ll me." (translation: Jutsu? Who's? Naruto, tell me!")
"Sasuke?" I whispered softly.
"Naruto." He mumbled quietly.
I smiled even more. "Sasuke! I hope I'm not just hallucinating!"
"You're not, dobe. What is this jutsu you are talking about?" he said so quietly.
I just blurted it all out. "Akashi is in your head! He is going to kill you through your mind! But.if you kill him in your mind, there is a chance the jutsu will be severed and he'll die back here!"
There was a short pause, and then he said quietly. "Ne, Naruto?"
"Yeah?" I asked.
"How are we communicating?"
"I don't know." Then there was an awkward silence.
After that silence, he muttered, "Dobe." And he squeezed my hand.
I squeezed back, "Asshole."
Then he went quiet again. I assumed he was doing whatever he had to do to beat the jutsu.
I felt Kakashi-sensei rest his hand on my shoulder, "How is he?" he asked.
I shook my head, "He'll be fine."
Kakashi messed up my hair, "I'm glad."
............
-Sasukes POV, 1st person-
"You're goin' down" I smiled and got into a fighting stance.
Akashi looked amused. "Is that so?" He looked so relaxed, but I wouldn't let he laid back attitude deceive me.
*This fight may be tough, but I'll get him for sure.* I decided that maybe using Sharingan would be a good idea, so I activated it.
"Sharingan?" Akashi questioned, "You're an Uchiha?"
I smiled, "Never pick a fight with an Uchiha." I ran at him, but he moved to the side, so I threw a shuriken at him.
"Is that all you got, boy?" Akashi grinned as he dodged it.
I smiled as the shuriken moved around him, and I threw several more.
He dodged them all easily, "You can't be missing with those sharp eyes." Akashi thought aloud, "You must have a trick up your sleeve."
"Too late to notice." I pulled on the thin thread I attached to the shuriken, and the thread bound him.
"Nani?" He said as he felt his body being bound. "Not to bad, But."
I didn't allow him to finish, "Katon: Ryuka no Jutsu". I let the fire move up the string to Akashi.
After the flames diminished, I noticed he was gone. "Nani?" I looked around for him.
"Up here." He said from above, holding a katana. "I'm not that easy, boy." Then he disappeared, and reappeared behind me.
*So fast* I thought and ducked down as he swung his sword at me, and I rolled to the side as he tried to kick me.
*Be smart, Sasuke* I thought as I dodged a kunai that Akashi threw at me.
"Hey, boy. Is that all you can do? Dodge?" Akashi laughed as he ran up to me.
I drew a kunai quickly and blocked the sword that he swung at me. *He's good at using it single handedly and double handedly. And he's physically stronger than me.* I grunted with the effort of holding back his sword, *Even if my Sharingan gets used to his speed, will I be able to stop him?*
Akashi pressed down with his sword, and I brought up another kunai creating an "X" block with them.
Akashi stepped back, and then thrust his sword, throwing all this strength behind it, grazing my cheek.
I leapt away, and touched my cheek. It was bleeding pretty badly.
I thought of Rock Lees' taijutsu. *Maybe that'll work to at least trap him.*
Akashi ran at me again, but this time, as he got close I ducked down and kicked up, kicking his chin. He flew up in the air with the force. While he was in the air, I quickly kicked him to a tree, then threw several kunai at him, pinning him to the tree.
I stood several feet away and did several hand seals. A large amount of charka crackled in my hand, it was rather painful, but I bared it. I ran at him full speed and jabbed his chest. My hand went right through his chest and into the tree. I knew he was dead. I withdrew my hand.
I stood back and looked at him; he was stuck to the tree. I fell to my knees. *Now what?*
I everything got kind of blurry and I felt dizzy. Suddenly everything went black.
...........
Biiki: Sorry for the shortness.
I'm tired I thought that that's a nice ending. Leaves you in suspense
IB: I'm sure they don't mind.
Biiki: Sadly, this fic is coming to an end soon. Many tears.
IB: Maybe you will do a sequel?
Biiki: IB, listen, don't make the people beg. If you give them ideas, they'll..
IB: It's too late, I already gave them ideas.
Biiki: Damnit. Well, actually, I could. I love writing these fics, once "After the break" is done, I might decide to do a sequel.
IB: But they don't have to worry too much yet, you still have a couple more chapters to go.
Biiki: Yup. And with you, Baka, and.Neko.around I can do a lot more.
IB: And no fluff.
Biiki: Hardly any lovies, just a growing friendship. You know, they are only 12, they barely know what "love" is. But I am leaving their relationship open, so the reader can decide what is going on. It might satisfy to those non-yaoi people. Also, I am leaving room for the relationship to grow. Because, if I do a sequel, It will be just slightly older. Ya know, realizing things, hormones, stuff.
IB: Yeah. I see. (
Biiki: Also, people, I am currently struggling with Chapter 10, and, just a warning, it won't be as action packed as the past couple of chapters.
