Here is the next chapter. Enjoy, my brave new world...
*******
Gimme Some Lovin'
Phase 2:
Denial
My integrity: tainted.
I am a writing ball of fire,
Waiting to burn,
Waiting to unleash,
Waiting to release.
My new friend, the little witch,
Comes out to say hello to me.
Such bad timing,
Yet circumstancial.
I guess I'm a really cool person,
Aren't I.?
Boy, I wish it were the reverse.
The world today...awful.
And Nina tells me
That if she lets someone spill
The beans,
I will be deleted
Like that Lain fella
Whose friend committed suicide
And turned into a computer.
Perverts...I'm surrounded by perverts.
Such is the life of a girl like me.
The day's lesson,
And I am oblivious to know
That Nina has found another
Solution for a problem.
Clairvoyant? No, she's not Miss Cleo.
Foresighted? No, she's not a horse.
Willing to do anything to make me happy?
Well, I didn't think of it that way...
I took this ring,
And it shocked the boys
Like a swig of white lightning.
Too much, too soon.
...damn you, Nina...
...you overdid it...
Wait a minute!
Did I just sense déjà vu?
My life gets twisted
Every day.
Curse.
The five-letter word of doom.
At last, an errand.
An opportunity for release.
Little did he know,
The errand-giver
Got the buzz,
Like all the other boys
Before.
Beep-beep, beep-beep, yeah...
I am the messenger
Of electrical doom.
How schizophrenic.
I tell my friend Kaji
That I will be meeting with the nurse,
And I fall, only to realize,
That when he held me,
He didn't get shocked.
And I fall into the bubble void
That had devolved so many girls
Into literal piles of goo.
Then again, he did.
After I got my bag back
A few hours later,
I look at him in the infirmary.
He looks so beautiful,
I feel like I want to
marry
him
right
now.
I get interrupted by Tsujiai-kun.
He sneaks a dirty glance at me.
I am a basket case.
The ring breaks.
I love those slits I leer
At Nina. Makes me feel loved,
No?
********
End Phase 2
Feedback. Love it, or lose it.
*******
Gimme Some Lovin'
Phase 2:
Denial
My integrity: tainted.
I am a writing ball of fire,
Waiting to burn,
Waiting to unleash,
Waiting to release.
My new friend, the little witch,
Comes out to say hello to me.
Such bad timing,
Yet circumstancial.
I guess I'm a really cool person,
Aren't I.?
Boy, I wish it were the reverse.
The world today...awful.
And Nina tells me
That if she lets someone spill
The beans,
I will be deleted
Like that Lain fella
Whose friend committed suicide
And turned into a computer.
Perverts...I'm surrounded by perverts.
Such is the life of a girl like me.
The day's lesson,
And I am oblivious to know
That Nina has found another
Solution for a problem.
Clairvoyant? No, she's not Miss Cleo.
Foresighted? No, she's not a horse.
Willing to do anything to make me happy?
Well, I didn't think of it that way...
I took this ring,
And it shocked the boys
Like a swig of white lightning.
Too much, too soon.
...damn you, Nina...
...you overdid it...
Wait a minute!
Did I just sense déjà vu?
My life gets twisted
Every day.
Curse.
The five-letter word of doom.
At last, an errand.
An opportunity for release.
Little did he know,
The errand-giver
Got the buzz,
Like all the other boys
Before.
Beep-beep, beep-beep, yeah...
I am the messenger
Of electrical doom.
How schizophrenic.
I tell my friend Kaji
That I will be meeting with the nurse,
And I fall, only to realize,
That when he held me,
He didn't get shocked.
And I fall into the bubble void
That had devolved so many girls
Into literal piles of goo.
Then again, he did.
After I got my bag back
A few hours later,
I look at him in the infirmary.
He looks so beautiful,
I feel like I want to
marry
him
right
now.
I get interrupted by Tsujiai-kun.
He sneaks a dirty glance at me.
I am a basket case.
The ring breaks.
I love those slits I leer
At Nina. Makes me feel loved,
No?
********
End Phase 2
Feedback. Love it, or lose it.
