This is my first fic so I would like it if I could get as many suggestions
as possible to help me make this a better. Also for the people who will
review please tell me whether or not to revive Aeris or Aerith depending on
which name you like better, because I can always add to the story.
Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to FF7, or their characters or, places ect... all I own is Xaen, Reverance, Warrent, Nobe, Smythe, and some others... Do I have to always put this in each chapter?
* (thought) * {(action)} ( author's note)
EX: *What to do now..?* {cough} ( well now that is a great example is it not?)
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Prologue
"Yesss!!!" a man in a sloppily adorned suit screamed. "Finally my work has paid off. I have created my own new materia!"
"Shall I put it in the machine now doctor?" asked a small man who seemed rather unexcited at the news. As if he had heard this too many times before.
"No, Smythe I would like to study it before actually trying to use it you imbecile." The doctor sat down at the table where his creation sat. He looked lovingly into the softly glowing orb. It contained many different colors and was by anyone's standards very beautiful. "Now, go and start calibrating the machine by the specifications I have written down." The doctor said as he handed Smythe a piece of paper.
"Yes, doctor Nobe." He said in a monotone voice as he left the room.
Nobe looked at his creation for hours, imaging all the things he hoped to accomplish with its power. He thought vaguely of money and fame, but quickly rid himself of that thought. He had only one goal in mind. To succeed at his fathers dream of world domination. He knew of course that this dream was characteristically evil, but none-the-less thought it to be the best thing to do. What else should one do with such power?
"Yes, on the eve of the 15th my plan will be put into action." He smiled to himself and thought. "Only one problem... How do I control... Oh well He will be happy anyway..."
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(Now for some small background info)
Once Midgar was destroyed by Meteor and Holy, Avalanche set up a new base in cosmo canyon. From the new base the original group took up some small job offers from Reeve. Reeve escaped Midgar alive with the surviving refugees. The jobs Avalanche took were all about stopping any lingering use of mako in the world. This story takes place about 4 months after the last job the group took.
Reeve, with some help from some surviving ShinRa executives and others, restarted the ShinRa Corporation, calling it Neo-ShinRa "Now without Mako!" Cloud and Tifa have a house in Kalm next door to Barret and Marlene, Cid and Shera finally married and are still living in Rocket Town, Cait Sith is currently located in Reeve's closet, and Yuffie and Vincent returned to their respective home towns. Nanakai, or Red XII, went back to Cosmo Canyon to manage the Avalanche base and protect his own homeland.
(Short chapter I know but I had to get some basics out of the way along with what I thought was a slight teaser.. not too good but for a first try I think it is ok. Oh please R&R but if you feel the need to comment about Grammar or mechanics, I don't mean to sound mean but, I don't care I'm just trying to get this story out of my head before I go insane : ) )
Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to FF7, or their characters or, places ect... all I own is Xaen, Reverance, Warrent, Nobe, Smythe, and some others... Do I have to always put this in each chapter?
* (thought) * {(action)} ( author's note)
EX: *What to do now..?* {cough} ( well now that is a great example is it not?)
~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~- ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-
Prologue
"Yesss!!!" a man in a sloppily adorned suit screamed. "Finally my work has paid off. I have created my own new materia!"
"Shall I put it in the machine now doctor?" asked a small man who seemed rather unexcited at the news. As if he had heard this too many times before.
"No, Smythe I would like to study it before actually trying to use it you imbecile." The doctor sat down at the table where his creation sat. He looked lovingly into the softly glowing orb. It contained many different colors and was by anyone's standards very beautiful. "Now, go and start calibrating the machine by the specifications I have written down." The doctor said as he handed Smythe a piece of paper.
"Yes, doctor Nobe." He said in a monotone voice as he left the room.
Nobe looked at his creation for hours, imaging all the things he hoped to accomplish with its power. He thought vaguely of money and fame, but quickly rid himself of that thought. He had only one goal in mind. To succeed at his fathers dream of world domination. He knew of course that this dream was characteristically evil, but none-the-less thought it to be the best thing to do. What else should one do with such power?
"Yes, on the eve of the 15th my plan will be put into action." He smiled to himself and thought. "Only one problem... How do I control... Oh well He will be happy anyway..."
~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~- ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-
(Now for some small background info)
Once Midgar was destroyed by Meteor and Holy, Avalanche set up a new base in cosmo canyon. From the new base the original group took up some small job offers from Reeve. Reeve escaped Midgar alive with the surviving refugees. The jobs Avalanche took were all about stopping any lingering use of mako in the world. This story takes place about 4 months after the last job the group took.
Reeve, with some help from some surviving ShinRa executives and others, restarted the ShinRa Corporation, calling it Neo-ShinRa "Now without Mako!" Cloud and Tifa have a house in Kalm next door to Barret and Marlene, Cid and Shera finally married and are still living in Rocket Town, Cait Sith is currently located in Reeve's closet, and Yuffie and Vincent returned to their respective home towns. Nanakai, or Red XII, went back to Cosmo Canyon to manage the Avalanche base and protect his own homeland.
(Short chapter I know but I had to get some basics out of the way along with what I thought was a slight teaser.. not too good but for a first try I think it is ok. Oh please R&R but if you feel the need to comment about Grammar or mechanics, I don't mean to sound mean but, I don't care I'm just trying to get this story out of my head before I go insane : ) )
