This is my first Fan Fiction so please review and tell me what u like and don't like. Sorry I put the "My Character" part at the top.My Character:

Name: Charlie Hollaway

Hacker Name: Chalk

Age: 15

Bio: Blue eyes, Bright Blonde hair in spikes, and Average height. Likes to wear black and red. Loves to play with his dog: Trip

History: Before Charlie could see his dad he was unplugged from the Matrix and with no support his mother gave him up to social services but he kept running away with never leaving a trace of his presence.

Clothing: Baggy Black Trousers with long pockets on both sides. A loose Black T-shirt with red sleeves and a 2 strap green backpack.

My Character:

Name: Trip

Hacker Name: Trip

Age: 4 (in dog years)

Bio: Had a white coat with black and brown spots covering most of the fur. Trip has amazing agility and intelligence.

History: Trip was abandoned and found in a cardboard box; Charlie picked him up and cared for him.

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Location: London, Main Street

Time: 9:10am, 1st January 2002

Charlie lay there up against the walls on the dead streets of the city. Everywhere was littered with rubbish from shops and then coated by the dead dried out leaves falling off the trees.

Charlie dragged himself up a bit higher after awaking from his sleep seeing that his dog; Trip was laying on his sleeping bag that he slept in.

Charlie: "Trip, Here boy"

The little puppy rose to its feet and ran across the sleeping bag to Charlie's face. Charlie slid Trip to the side and pushed his bag forward to pull himself out. They both sat in the corner for a while then Charlie stood up and walked to the curb, as he was walking a car zoomed by splashing water up all of Charlie's clothes since it had been raining heavily last night.

Charlie: "Fucking Bastard"

Charlie turned his head to the direction of the car but his eyes were attracted to a black motorbike. He saw a lady in tight leather and boots and with her hair brushed back. He then stared into the wind mirror and saw her wearing black glasses. She revved up the power and drove off. Charlie looked confused since he had the feeling the lady was watching him.

Charlie wiped himself down a bit then headed back to his corner. He packed up and started walking along the street staring into shops.

Charlie: "Come Trip"

Trip followed along his side, Charlie found himself outside a chip shop and decided to head in. He pulled out a couple of notes out of his black trousers will his dog wondered off into the eating area. Charlie decided it wasn't worth his money and turned to where Trip was.

Charlie: "TRIP!"

He heard little moaning sounds from the back room of the eating area. He pushed his way to the door and kicked the door open. Three men raised their fist ready to take him out. They lined up in a horizontal line. Selves surrounded them at both sides.

Charlie swung round his backpack and threw it at the centre guy.

Charlie: "Catch"

Charlie charged at the guy to his left before jumping and kicking him in the face. The guy from his right went for swing but before it struck Charlie, he ducked and swung his legs round to trip him up. The last guy who got the bag in the face stood up and threw the bag to Charlie, he pushed it to the side and waited. The man was extremely angry and pounded the floor as he ran at Charlie. Charlie dropped to the ground. Pushed his legs up and flung him over himself and into the door. A man behind the self came out holding Trip, slowly put him to the floor and backed off. Trip ran to Charlie and got picked up into his arms. Charlie walked out of the back storeroom and began to the outside door while everyone stared at him. Since the doors were glass he looked through, on the other side of the street he saw a black man in a long black leather coat and black shirt with a green tie. Also wearing black glasses hooked onto his nose. His hands were behind his back.

Charlie was stunned a fell back a bit. He closed his eyes and shook his head telling himself it wasn't real. He re-opened his eyes and the figure had gone.

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If you really want me to get rid of my character part at eh top I'll re-write it, ok?