A Gunman's Tears
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Authors note: Hey all! This would be my first Trigun story. Its kinda a half Songfic and half short-story. It's much loner than a Songfic but it does have the lyrics. I suggest you download 'Standing at the edge of the Earth' by Blessid Union of Souls now so it's finished downloading by the time you get to the lyrics part. This is an AU Vash/Meryl story and there is some Wolfwood/Milly in it too. If you don't like a pairing then tough, and don't read it ^.^;; I'm saying wolfwood never died, and it's right after they beat Legato. So enjoy!
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The town was quiet as they all stood at the cliff, suddenly coming alive from their hypnotized state from Legato. Meryl and Milly cringed in pain as they were being beaten until everything stopped and a gunshot rang through the air. Meryl quickly stood up, looking over to where Legato and Vash where, only to see the tall blonde man standing, the other lying on the ground.
"Oh Vash." Meryl said sadly, seeing the gunman stand, clutching his gun as tears rolled down his cheeks.
"I.I killed him.she's gone.I killed her too..no.." Vash mumbled through sobs, he had done it.he had killed Legato. Did he have a choice? If he didn't the townspeople would've have beaten Meryl and Milly to death.
Milly stood up, watching the situation carefully, but just as she was going to see Vash her eyes spotted Meryl as she slowly approached him and decided to help the townspeople instead.
"V-vash?" Meryl approached and stood beside him, placing a hand on his shoulder softly. Her gaze fell to Legato, a haunting smile on his lips still remained even after death, that bastard made Vash shoot.he knew what Vash thought of killing.
"Stay back." He suddenly spoke up somewhat harshly, turning his back to Meryl and holding his gun closer to his chest.
"Vash.It isn't your fault.you had no other choice" Her voice softened, feeling hurt that he was being so cold towards her. She knew it wasn't his fault, so why couldn't he see that?
"I killed him. I KILLED HIM!" He yelled and fell to the ground on his knees, gripping the ground with his hands as he gritted his teeth in pain. Meryl saw the small tears fall to the dirt, leaving wet spots.
"Im..sorry.." Meryl took a breath and knelt down in front of him, and when he looked up she smacked him across the cheek with tears forming in her own navy grey eyes
"Snap out of it! He -meant- for this to happen, he wanted you to think you killed him to you would live with the pain. He killed himself..and used you to do it! What do I have to say to get that message across to you!?" She stared at him, awaiting a response of any kind. Meryl nearly died as his sad eyes watched her in disbelief, she had slapped him before, but why was he looking at her like this?
"Meryl." he began to speak, then paused to think about what he was going to say.
Meryl froze, this was it, she could hear it now [Just stay away from me! I've held my anger from the beginning but enough is enough...I never want to see you again...and I don't care about your mission. If you come near me again I will shoot you..]
".Your right.I'm sure it was a trick..But still..I killed him. There is no- excuse for killing someone..I don't have the right.." Looking up his aqua eyes still brimmed with tears, it broke Meryl's heart to see him like this, she never liked to see him sad.
"It's not your fault..it was mine. If I hadn't forced Milly to come and follow you, we wouldn't have been used as hostages. Things might have been different. So just blame it on me, and we should get going back to the village..We still have to tend to Wolfwood's injuries. And then after ill buy you some dounuts, how does that sound?' Meryl put on her best smile, trying to cheer Vash up, even a little. She stood up and offered a hand to him
"You are not to blame..but thank you for that offer, and we should get going back" Vash placed on a small smile and took her hand as she helped him up off the ground.
"Meryl! Mr. Vash!" They both turned their heads to see a happy Milly jumping up and down "The town offered us a huge supper for helping them and getting rid of Mr. Legato. And there's going to be Pudding!!" She squeaked and began to follow the rest of the people down to the town.
"We better not keep her waiting.especially if there's pudding involved!" Meryl laughed and looked up at Vash before beginning to walk back to town, when all of a sudden a hand grabbed her wrist and a pair of strong arms wrapped around her waist
"Why take the long way?" Vash grinned and jumped from the cliff, jumping from rock to rock down to the bottom while Meryl screamed all the way down. Once they reached the bottom vash placed her down with a laugh
"Oh come on..that wasn't that bad was it?" Poor Vash never noticed the glint of anger in the frightened woman's eyes before a huge mallet was whipped out and slugged him into the nearest building.
"Never.Do.That.Again." Meryl hissed, breathing heavily before stomping back to the house that they left Wolfwood in.
"Oooooowie.who knew she was afraid of heights?" Vash cringed as he flopped from his spot on the wall to the ground.
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Wolfwood slowly awoke to the sound of his door opening, cracking an eye open he spotted Milly bringing him some soup.
Hearing something move, Milly turned around to see Wolfwood watching her with a smile, she shot him back an equally, if not more warm smile.
"Hello Mr. Wolfwood! I'm glad you're feeling better, I brought you some soup" She smiled and placed the steaming bowl onto the table beside the bed. "Do you need anything? Bandages changed?" She offered, looking over the wound on his shoulder.
"Well.." He grinned but then paused, remembering something "Where's Vash?"
"Oh, He's fine. Last time I saw him he was lying twitching on the ground near a building. He carried Meryl down the cliff, and she's deathly afraid of heights." Milly nodded merrily.
Wolfwood couldn't help but laugh [Oh yeah Vash...your a real ladies man.] "Too bad..I would have liked to see that" he grinned at Milly, who was eyeing the soup hungrily.
"You can have some if you want..im not hungry just yet" He offered and smiled when she squeaked and jumped up and began eating some of the soup. He could tell just by her reaction Meryl must have made it, he remembered eating her food when they where at the house with the kids.
After finishing half of the soup Milly stopped and sat on the bed with Wolfwood with a smile, cheeks slightly flushed "Thank you so much Mr. Wolfwood.but I'll get some more when I go back downstairs."
"You're welcome Milly." Wolfwood looked around the room, it wasn't much but he knew it would be their temporary home for them until something happened.
The room became silent as the pair remained unmoving. [Look at her.She's amazing, a little over happy but that's what makes Milly, well.Milly. If I ever die.I hope I go to heaven, because ill know she will be there. Wait.Is that a noodle?] He raised a brow as a tiny noodle, most likely from the soup, remained unnoticed in her bottom lip.
[Should I tell her?...or...remove it myself..] A light grin appeared on Wolfwood's lips as he struggled to sit up in the bed. This caught the attention of Milly as she turned to look at him with a worried look.
"You shouldn't be moving just yet Mr. Wolfwood..Your injuries.." She placed her hand on his shoulder to steady him [What is he doing? He's going to re- open his wounds..]
"I'm all right.but." Leaning forward her pressed his lips to hers, placing his hand behind her head and let her long silky hair run through his fingers before pulling back.
".Mr.Wolfwood." Milly said in a daze, head tilted slightly to the side.
Wolfwood felt his cheeks redden as he stammered "Uhh.you had a noodle on your lip."
A blush appeared on Milly's cheek as she smiled, laughing slightly "Why thank you very much then for removing the noodle. I don't know what I would have done without you Mr.Wolfwood!"
"Well its not easy being a hero.." He laughed nervously when something caught his attention, Milly was walking over to his bag on the table across the room.
"Milly..What are you doing?" He asked suspiciously, watching her return with the 'Portable' Confession box and sitting back down on the bed. Digging through her pockets she deposited a coin in the roof and placed it on her head.
"Are you open today Mr. Wolfwood?" A wide smile played on her lips as she looked in his direction, since she was unable to see with the box covering her eyes.
"Uh, why yes I am.."
"Then I have a confession to make!" Milly said cheerfully, and then became slightly serious "Well.There's this guy..And he's really nice! He buys me pudding and it makes me happy. We even once had a fake kid, I thought that was fun, and I was glad to be able to help Moore but the guy I like looked embarrassed. Then we've been spending all this time together and I really like him now..I don't know what to do..Can you help me Mr.Wolfwood?" Milly spoke, laughing nervously under the box. [Hmm..I wonder if he knows I was talking about him..I hope he doesn't think that "the Guy" is someone else!]
Wolfwood blinked while his jaw hung freely in the air, He had never really liked that box much until now. "Milly.I never knew you felt the same as I did.." He smiled and hugged her tightly, bringing her body close to his own.
Milly gasped and took off the confession box "How did you know it was you? I never said your name!?"
Wolfwood sweat dropped and laughed "Lets just say it was a lucky guess" He grinned and kissed her once more, this time a little more passionately.
After they parted she smiled lovingly at him, resting her head on his unwounded shoulder "I have an important question to ask you.."
"Anything Milly.."
"Are you a Psychic?"
Wolfwood smacked his forehead and fell back onto the bed, accidentally taking milly with him as they were soon tangled in the sheets
"Was it something I said?" Milly smiled and traced a finger down his jaw line before being pulled down for another kiss
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"Where is Milly? I thought she was bringing Wolfwood some soup.." Meryl finished cooking the rest of dinner before heading upstairs to see what was taking Milly so long to return.
Walking down the hall she passed hers and Milly's bedroom and headed to the spare bed room where Wolfwood was supposedly sleeping. Cracking open the door she covered her mouth from laughing when she spotted her friends tangled in the sheets like two butterflies in a spiders web kissing. With a happy smile for her friend she quietly shut the door when the hairs on the back of her neck raised as hot air played on her neck. Snapping her head around she spotted vash with a mock glare plastered on his face
"What are you doing?" he asked when Meryl covered his mouth with her hand and dragged him downstairs quickly
"Shh! Milly and Wolfwood finally got together! Don't ruin the moment"' and with that she turned her attention back to the soup. Taking it off the stove and pouring it into 2 bowls, leaving the 3rd one empty, since Milly was..Well..Occupied.
"Really? About time.." Vash laughed and sat down at the table, watching Meryl look down at the soup in pure boredom while keeping an almost mechanical stirring pace.
[She looks so lonely.you can see it in her eyes. Is it because Milly has Wolfwood now? Hmmm.] Vash wondered, unaware that his staring was noticed.
"What are you looking at? Is there something wrong?" Meryl asked, brow raised as vash jumped in his seat and stammered out apologies.
"Uhhh its nothing. When is the soup going to be ready soon? I sure am hungry" he placed on a happy-go-lucky smile and walked over to Meryl, looking over her shoulder with a wide grin on his lips.
Meryl felt a blush trail across her cheeks, with a panicked thought she lowered her head so the gunman would not be able to see what was displayed on her cheeks. "It's ready! How about you go get the table set or something..?" she replied hastily, wanting nothing more that for him to leave for a few moments to allow the blushing to fade away.
Vash's brow raised with suspicion, she was hiding something.but what? He turned his head to the side and tried to see her face, but Meryl kept moving it the opposite direction so Vash could not see. He frowned and hopped to the other side of her to hopefully catch a quick glimpse at her face, but she quickly turned to the other side.
"Meryl!" He breathed out and grabbed her face with his hands, turning it gently to face him. His eyes widened slightly to see a now deep blush tinted along her cheeks, making the short woman look adorable in his eyes.
"Awww.how cute!" He smiled broadly and chuckled, unaware of Meryl's twitching eyebrow as she turned away from him and stormed outside without a word.
"M-meryl?" Vash gulped, boy was he in for it now.
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Meryl's feet pounded at the dusty earth as she stomped out onto the deck. Taking a moment to cool down; she let out a long held sigh, the smell of gunpowder and oil still lingered on her cheeks where momentarily Vash's hands were.
"I'm such a fool." she said as she fell back onto the hanging bench, listening to the soft creaks as it rocked back and forth from her weight and the slight breeze. Closing her eyes she sat in silence as the warm summer's wind played through her dark navy locks, a sensation of calm washed over her being.
"Love is for the people with pure hearts.someone like Milly. She's so kind and always happy..She deserves love.." Meryl paused, opening her eyes and gazing out to the desert wasteland in front of the house as the sand swirled in the air creating almost magical patterns. A light smile played on her lips as the beautiful shades of the second sun appeared on the horizon as it began to set, changing the sand into sparkling specks of gold.
With a small sad chuckle she whispered out "..And it's just not for me." Meryl began to blink more quickly, trying to hold back the oncoming tears "Come on Meryl.your not allowed to cry.." she growled at herself for such a weakness.
Unfortunately for Meryl, she never quite noticed the clunking of large boots coming out onto the porch until it was too late.
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Authors note: Whoa.I didn't think it would be this long.well I'm going to separate this into two chapters, or maybe even 3. I don't know if I should continue.this is my first Trigun fic so it must suck. If I get a few good reviews ill continue and Constructed criticism is welcome too! Well tata for now!
**READ**
Authors note: Hey all! This would be my first Trigun story. Its kinda a half Songfic and half short-story. It's much loner than a Songfic but it does have the lyrics. I suggest you download 'Standing at the edge of the Earth' by Blessid Union of Souls now so it's finished downloading by the time you get to the lyrics part. This is an AU Vash/Meryl story and there is some Wolfwood/Milly in it too. If you don't like a pairing then tough, and don't read it ^.^;; I'm saying wolfwood never died, and it's right after they beat Legato. So enjoy!
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The town was quiet as they all stood at the cliff, suddenly coming alive from their hypnotized state from Legato. Meryl and Milly cringed in pain as they were being beaten until everything stopped and a gunshot rang through the air. Meryl quickly stood up, looking over to where Legato and Vash where, only to see the tall blonde man standing, the other lying on the ground.
"Oh Vash." Meryl said sadly, seeing the gunman stand, clutching his gun as tears rolled down his cheeks.
"I.I killed him.she's gone.I killed her too..no.." Vash mumbled through sobs, he had done it.he had killed Legato. Did he have a choice? If he didn't the townspeople would've have beaten Meryl and Milly to death.
Milly stood up, watching the situation carefully, but just as she was going to see Vash her eyes spotted Meryl as she slowly approached him and decided to help the townspeople instead.
"V-vash?" Meryl approached and stood beside him, placing a hand on his shoulder softly. Her gaze fell to Legato, a haunting smile on his lips still remained even after death, that bastard made Vash shoot.he knew what Vash thought of killing.
"Stay back." He suddenly spoke up somewhat harshly, turning his back to Meryl and holding his gun closer to his chest.
"Vash.It isn't your fault.you had no other choice" Her voice softened, feeling hurt that he was being so cold towards her. She knew it wasn't his fault, so why couldn't he see that?
"I killed him. I KILLED HIM!" He yelled and fell to the ground on his knees, gripping the ground with his hands as he gritted his teeth in pain. Meryl saw the small tears fall to the dirt, leaving wet spots.
"Im..sorry.." Meryl took a breath and knelt down in front of him, and when he looked up she smacked him across the cheek with tears forming in her own navy grey eyes
"Snap out of it! He -meant- for this to happen, he wanted you to think you killed him to you would live with the pain. He killed himself..and used you to do it! What do I have to say to get that message across to you!?" She stared at him, awaiting a response of any kind. Meryl nearly died as his sad eyes watched her in disbelief, she had slapped him before, but why was he looking at her like this?
"Meryl." he began to speak, then paused to think about what he was going to say.
Meryl froze, this was it, she could hear it now [Just stay away from me! I've held my anger from the beginning but enough is enough...I never want to see you again...and I don't care about your mission. If you come near me again I will shoot you..]
".Your right.I'm sure it was a trick..But still..I killed him. There is no- excuse for killing someone..I don't have the right.." Looking up his aqua eyes still brimmed with tears, it broke Meryl's heart to see him like this, she never liked to see him sad.
"It's not your fault..it was mine. If I hadn't forced Milly to come and follow you, we wouldn't have been used as hostages. Things might have been different. So just blame it on me, and we should get going back to the village..We still have to tend to Wolfwood's injuries. And then after ill buy you some dounuts, how does that sound?' Meryl put on her best smile, trying to cheer Vash up, even a little. She stood up and offered a hand to him
"You are not to blame..but thank you for that offer, and we should get going back" Vash placed on a small smile and took her hand as she helped him up off the ground.
"Meryl! Mr. Vash!" They both turned their heads to see a happy Milly jumping up and down "The town offered us a huge supper for helping them and getting rid of Mr. Legato. And there's going to be Pudding!!" She squeaked and began to follow the rest of the people down to the town.
"We better not keep her waiting.especially if there's pudding involved!" Meryl laughed and looked up at Vash before beginning to walk back to town, when all of a sudden a hand grabbed her wrist and a pair of strong arms wrapped around her waist
"Why take the long way?" Vash grinned and jumped from the cliff, jumping from rock to rock down to the bottom while Meryl screamed all the way down. Once they reached the bottom vash placed her down with a laugh
"Oh come on..that wasn't that bad was it?" Poor Vash never noticed the glint of anger in the frightened woman's eyes before a huge mallet was whipped out and slugged him into the nearest building.
"Never.Do.That.Again." Meryl hissed, breathing heavily before stomping back to the house that they left Wolfwood in.
"Oooooowie.who knew she was afraid of heights?" Vash cringed as he flopped from his spot on the wall to the ground.
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Wolfwood slowly awoke to the sound of his door opening, cracking an eye open he spotted Milly bringing him some soup.
Hearing something move, Milly turned around to see Wolfwood watching her with a smile, she shot him back an equally, if not more warm smile.
"Hello Mr. Wolfwood! I'm glad you're feeling better, I brought you some soup" She smiled and placed the steaming bowl onto the table beside the bed. "Do you need anything? Bandages changed?" She offered, looking over the wound on his shoulder.
"Well.." He grinned but then paused, remembering something "Where's Vash?"
"Oh, He's fine. Last time I saw him he was lying twitching on the ground near a building. He carried Meryl down the cliff, and she's deathly afraid of heights." Milly nodded merrily.
Wolfwood couldn't help but laugh [Oh yeah Vash...your a real ladies man.] "Too bad..I would have liked to see that" he grinned at Milly, who was eyeing the soup hungrily.
"You can have some if you want..im not hungry just yet" He offered and smiled when she squeaked and jumped up and began eating some of the soup. He could tell just by her reaction Meryl must have made it, he remembered eating her food when they where at the house with the kids.
After finishing half of the soup Milly stopped and sat on the bed with Wolfwood with a smile, cheeks slightly flushed "Thank you so much Mr. Wolfwood.but I'll get some more when I go back downstairs."
"You're welcome Milly." Wolfwood looked around the room, it wasn't much but he knew it would be their temporary home for them until something happened.
The room became silent as the pair remained unmoving. [Look at her.She's amazing, a little over happy but that's what makes Milly, well.Milly. If I ever die.I hope I go to heaven, because ill know she will be there. Wait.Is that a noodle?] He raised a brow as a tiny noodle, most likely from the soup, remained unnoticed in her bottom lip.
[Should I tell her?...or...remove it myself..] A light grin appeared on Wolfwood's lips as he struggled to sit up in the bed. This caught the attention of Milly as she turned to look at him with a worried look.
"You shouldn't be moving just yet Mr. Wolfwood..Your injuries.." She placed her hand on his shoulder to steady him [What is he doing? He's going to re- open his wounds..]
"I'm all right.but." Leaning forward her pressed his lips to hers, placing his hand behind her head and let her long silky hair run through his fingers before pulling back.
".Mr.Wolfwood." Milly said in a daze, head tilted slightly to the side.
Wolfwood felt his cheeks redden as he stammered "Uhh.you had a noodle on your lip."
A blush appeared on Milly's cheek as she smiled, laughing slightly "Why thank you very much then for removing the noodle. I don't know what I would have done without you Mr.Wolfwood!"
"Well its not easy being a hero.." He laughed nervously when something caught his attention, Milly was walking over to his bag on the table across the room.
"Milly..What are you doing?" He asked suspiciously, watching her return with the 'Portable' Confession box and sitting back down on the bed. Digging through her pockets she deposited a coin in the roof and placed it on her head.
"Are you open today Mr. Wolfwood?" A wide smile played on her lips as she looked in his direction, since she was unable to see with the box covering her eyes.
"Uh, why yes I am.."
"Then I have a confession to make!" Milly said cheerfully, and then became slightly serious "Well.There's this guy..And he's really nice! He buys me pudding and it makes me happy. We even once had a fake kid, I thought that was fun, and I was glad to be able to help Moore but the guy I like looked embarrassed. Then we've been spending all this time together and I really like him now..I don't know what to do..Can you help me Mr.Wolfwood?" Milly spoke, laughing nervously under the box. [Hmm..I wonder if he knows I was talking about him..I hope he doesn't think that "the Guy" is someone else!]
Wolfwood blinked while his jaw hung freely in the air, He had never really liked that box much until now. "Milly.I never knew you felt the same as I did.." He smiled and hugged her tightly, bringing her body close to his own.
Milly gasped and took off the confession box "How did you know it was you? I never said your name!?"
Wolfwood sweat dropped and laughed "Lets just say it was a lucky guess" He grinned and kissed her once more, this time a little more passionately.
After they parted she smiled lovingly at him, resting her head on his unwounded shoulder "I have an important question to ask you.."
"Anything Milly.."
"Are you a Psychic?"
Wolfwood smacked his forehead and fell back onto the bed, accidentally taking milly with him as they were soon tangled in the sheets
"Was it something I said?" Milly smiled and traced a finger down his jaw line before being pulled down for another kiss
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"Where is Milly? I thought she was bringing Wolfwood some soup.." Meryl finished cooking the rest of dinner before heading upstairs to see what was taking Milly so long to return.
Walking down the hall she passed hers and Milly's bedroom and headed to the spare bed room where Wolfwood was supposedly sleeping. Cracking open the door she covered her mouth from laughing when she spotted her friends tangled in the sheets like two butterflies in a spiders web kissing. With a happy smile for her friend she quietly shut the door when the hairs on the back of her neck raised as hot air played on her neck. Snapping her head around she spotted vash with a mock glare plastered on his face
"What are you doing?" he asked when Meryl covered his mouth with her hand and dragged him downstairs quickly
"Shh! Milly and Wolfwood finally got together! Don't ruin the moment"' and with that she turned her attention back to the soup. Taking it off the stove and pouring it into 2 bowls, leaving the 3rd one empty, since Milly was..Well..Occupied.
"Really? About time.." Vash laughed and sat down at the table, watching Meryl look down at the soup in pure boredom while keeping an almost mechanical stirring pace.
[She looks so lonely.you can see it in her eyes. Is it because Milly has Wolfwood now? Hmmm.] Vash wondered, unaware that his staring was noticed.
"What are you looking at? Is there something wrong?" Meryl asked, brow raised as vash jumped in his seat and stammered out apologies.
"Uhhh its nothing. When is the soup going to be ready soon? I sure am hungry" he placed on a happy-go-lucky smile and walked over to Meryl, looking over her shoulder with a wide grin on his lips.
Meryl felt a blush trail across her cheeks, with a panicked thought she lowered her head so the gunman would not be able to see what was displayed on her cheeks. "It's ready! How about you go get the table set or something..?" she replied hastily, wanting nothing more that for him to leave for a few moments to allow the blushing to fade away.
Vash's brow raised with suspicion, she was hiding something.but what? He turned his head to the side and tried to see her face, but Meryl kept moving it the opposite direction so Vash could not see. He frowned and hopped to the other side of her to hopefully catch a quick glimpse at her face, but she quickly turned to the other side.
"Meryl!" He breathed out and grabbed her face with his hands, turning it gently to face him. His eyes widened slightly to see a now deep blush tinted along her cheeks, making the short woman look adorable in his eyes.
"Awww.how cute!" He smiled broadly and chuckled, unaware of Meryl's twitching eyebrow as she turned away from him and stormed outside without a word.
"M-meryl?" Vash gulped, boy was he in for it now.
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Meryl's feet pounded at the dusty earth as she stomped out onto the deck. Taking a moment to cool down; she let out a long held sigh, the smell of gunpowder and oil still lingered on her cheeks where momentarily Vash's hands were.
"I'm such a fool." she said as she fell back onto the hanging bench, listening to the soft creaks as it rocked back and forth from her weight and the slight breeze. Closing her eyes she sat in silence as the warm summer's wind played through her dark navy locks, a sensation of calm washed over her being.
"Love is for the people with pure hearts.someone like Milly. She's so kind and always happy..She deserves love.." Meryl paused, opening her eyes and gazing out to the desert wasteland in front of the house as the sand swirled in the air creating almost magical patterns. A light smile played on her lips as the beautiful shades of the second sun appeared on the horizon as it began to set, changing the sand into sparkling specks of gold.
With a small sad chuckle she whispered out "..And it's just not for me." Meryl began to blink more quickly, trying to hold back the oncoming tears "Come on Meryl.your not allowed to cry.." she growled at herself for such a weakness.
Unfortunately for Meryl, she never quite noticed the clunking of large boots coming out onto the porch until it was too late.
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Authors note: Whoa.I didn't think it would be this long.well I'm going to separate this into two chapters, or maybe even 3. I don't know if I should continue.this is my first Trigun fic so it must suck. If I get a few good reviews ill continue and Constructed criticism is welcome too! Well tata for now!
