Okay, I just wanted to say a few words.
Ray:Don't you always?*groans*
*cough*Anyway, I just wanted to say that if you think anything is wrong with this story, tell me, and I'll try to do something about it.Everything but Ray's attitude, okay?
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Chapter 14/First signs of love
"Help!"Jacky screamed on top of her lungs.
She felt her hand slip away from the rock.She grabbed, but reached
nothing but air.
"Ohhh."She groaned as she looked down.She grabbed again, but it
was too late, she was already falling.
"AAAhhhh!"She shrieked, but something grabbed her hand.
That something grabbed on tight, and it was quite strong. It pulled
Jacky up, until she was panting on the ground.Her muscles ached, and
she was wordless.Using a lot of strength, she looked up.She found
herself looking face to face at Ray, him kneeling down, his fierce
eyes gazing into hers.She backed her head away.Too close for
comfort.
But she felt so weak.She almost collapsed on the ground, but ray
caught her. He sat down and wrapped his arms around Jacky's limp
shoulders.She pressed herself against him, shiverring, but not from
the cold.From terror.
For the first time Jacky felt something. She didn't feel lonely or sad,
what she felt, she could not describe.If she knew what it was, she
would have realized that she liked Ray, and liked him quite a lot. But
she was too shocked. Ray pressed her tighter against himself, as if
protecting her from the dark.
Her eyes began to feel weak. She slowly closed them, and fell into a
deep dreamless sleep.
Ray picked the sleeping girl up, and walking back looked at the
desk in the lab.He saw the record as well.
"That can't be.Jacky..." He quickly realized the truth.
Jacky used to have feelings, memories, and everything he had, but
lost it all.For once Ray wanted to do something about it. He never
really cared about Jacky.She was a strong blader, but who cared. But
in time he realized he liked her.Now Ray knew, he had to bring Jacky
back, but how?He quickly shook those thoughts out of his head,
Jacky is on her own!
Jacky opened her eyes.She was laying in her bed her covers pulled
up.well she couldn't call it, HER bed anymore.It wasn't exactly hers
in the first place.Ray was not laying in his bed though.It kind of
suprised Jacky, until she looked up. He was sitting in a chair, asleep,
his long bangs falling down over his chrome yellow eyes.He looked
so tired.
It was already eight in the morning.Jacky shook Ray by the
shoulders.
"Wake up!"She whispered.
Ray's eyes slowly began to open.He looked so tired.Jacky wanted to
pick him up, and put him back into bed, but she couldn't, for two
reasons.
#1She couldn't pick him up in the first place.
#2It was time to wake up.
"Ray, wake up!"
He finally opened his eyes, just as Tala came in.He was worried.
"Where's Kai?"Ray asked.
"That's the problem, I don't know!"
"What?!"Both Jacky and Ray shouted out.
"He dissapeared!"
Jacky thought for a moment.
"You bet he ran away?"
Tala shook his head.
"Couldn't have.He hates this place to much to stay.He'd rather go
with us."
"Yeah, you have a good point."
"Well we have to look for him."
They ran through the halls searching for Kai.Jacky ran along the dark
hallways filled with doors.Kai was behind one of them, but which?
She got startled by a sickening moan coming from the cells at the end
of the hall. There was a sick old man, but not Kai.She pulled out a
bunch of cookies she grabbed earlier, and stuffed them in the man's
cell.She would have freed him, but Jacky needed Kai's strangth.
Where could he be? She walked by the cells peeking inside. She
gasped as she saw a body sprawled out on the cold ground.Kai's
body. He was dead.Suddenly, his hand moved.
"Kai!"Jacky whispered.
She pulled him up, but he protested.He seemed to be sick.She pulled
him up on her back, but he was too heavy.
"Oh no!"She groaned.
Suddenly Ray and Tala came.
"What happened?"Tala pointed Kai.
For the first time, Jacky noticed the whip marks on his arms.His
muscleshirt was ripped in the stomach, and a blue bruise was seen.
"I'll carry him."Tala said, and with ease picked up Kai's body.
They started walking, when Jacky remembered.
"Wait!Ray come here!"
She walked to the cell where the old man was eating the cookies.
"What about him?"
"You're strong, can't you break it?"
"Why should I?"
"Are you chicken!?"
Ray blushed a little, and instantly jammed the bars apart so the man
could walk through.He placed him on his back, and they ran. But Tala
set off an alarm.
"We have to get out of here!Or we'll be killed!!"
They ran through the halls.
The old man fainted, and Kai was mumbling something. They
followed Tala's lead.They were at the door.
"Yes we've made it!"Jacky said.
Tala stopped ten steps away.
"I wouldn't say so."He said nervously.
He was right. Guards were surrounding them.There were about
twenty.They all had swords of some kind.And worst of all, they didn't look happy.....
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Will they be caught?What happened to Kai?And who is the mysterious old man? Review, and wait for the next chapter. Oh yes, I forgot to mention, the next chapter will seem a little srewed up, but you'll get the hang of it.Bye for now!
~Jacky~
Ray:Don't you always?*groans*
*cough*Anyway, I just wanted to say that if you think anything is wrong with this story, tell me, and I'll try to do something about it.Everything but Ray's attitude, okay?
*******************
Chapter 14/First signs of love
"Help!"Jacky screamed on top of her lungs.
She felt her hand slip away from the rock.She grabbed, but reached
nothing but air.
"Ohhh."She groaned as she looked down.She grabbed again, but it
was too late, she was already falling.
"AAAhhhh!"She shrieked, but something grabbed her hand.
That something grabbed on tight, and it was quite strong. It pulled
Jacky up, until she was panting on the ground.Her muscles ached, and
she was wordless.Using a lot of strength, she looked up.She found
herself looking face to face at Ray, him kneeling down, his fierce
eyes gazing into hers.She backed her head away.Too close for
comfort.
But she felt so weak.She almost collapsed on the ground, but ray
caught her. He sat down and wrapped his arms around Jacky's limp
shoulders.She pressed herself against him, shiverring, but not from
the cold.From terror.
For the first time Jacky felt something. She didn't feel lonely or sad,
what she felt, she could not describe.If she knew what it was, she
would have realized that she liked Ray, and liked him quite a lot. But
she was too shocked. Ray pressed her tighter against himself, as if
protecting her from the dark.
Her eyes began to feel weak. She slowly closed them, and fell into a
deep dreamless sleep.
Ray picked the sleeping girl up, and walking back looked at the
desk in the lab.He saw the record as well.
"That can't be.Jacky..." He quickly realized the truth.
Jacky used to have feelings, memories, and everything he had, but
lost it all.For once Ray wanted to do something about it. He never
really cared about Jacky.She was a strong blader, but who cared. But
in time he realized he liked her.Now Ray knew, he had to bring Jacky
back, but how?He quickly shook those thoughts out of his head,
Jacky is on her own!
Jacky opened her eyes.She was laying in her bed her covers pulled
up.well she couldn't call it, HER bed anymore.It wasn't exactly hers
in the first place.Ray was not laying in his bed though.It kind of
suprised Jacky, until she looked up. He was sitting in a chair, asleep,
his long bangs falling down over his chrome yellow eyes.He looked
so tired.
It was already eight in the morning.Jacky shook Ray by the
shoulders.
"Wake up!"She whispered.
Ray's eyes slowly began to open.He looked so tired.Jacky wanted to
pick him up, and put him back into bed, but she couldn't, for two
reasons.
#1She couldn't pick him up in the first place.
#2It was time to wake up.
"Ray, wake up!"
He finally opened his eyes, just as Tala came in.He was worried.
"Where's Kai?"Ray asked.
"That's the problem, I don't know!"
"What?!"Both Jacky and Ray shouted out.
"He dissapeared!"
Jacky thought for a moment.
"You bet he ran away?"
Tala shook his head.
"Couldn't have.He hates this place to much to stay.He'd rather go
with us."
"Yeah, you have a good point."
"Well we have to look for him."
They ran through the halls searching for Kai.Jacky ran along the dark
hallways filled with doors.Kai was behind one of them, but which?
She got startled by a sickening moan coming from the cells at the end
of the hall. There was a sick old man, but not Kai.She pulled out a
bunch of cookies she grabbed earlier, and stuffed them in the man's
cell.She would have freed him, but Jacky needed Kai's strangth.
Where could he be? She walked by the cells peeking inside. She
gasped as she saw a body sprawled out on the cold ground.Kai's
body. He was dead.Suddenly, his hand moved.
"Kai!"Jacky whispered.
She pulled him up, but he protested.He seemed to be sick.She pulled
him up on her back, but he was too heavy.
"Oh no!"She groaned.
Suddenly Ray and Tala came.
"What happened?"Tala pointed Kai.
For the first time, Jacky noticed the whip marks on his arms.His
muscleshirt was ripped in the stomach, and a blue bruise was seen.
"I'll carry him."Tala said, and with ease picked up Kai's body.
They started walking, when Jacky remembered.
"Wait!Ray come here!"
She walked to the cell where the old man was eating the cookies.
"What about him?"
"You're strong, can't you break it?"
"Why should I?"
"Are you chicken!?"
Ray blushed a little, and instantly jammed the bars apart so the man
could walk through.He placed him on his back, and they ran. But Tala
set off an alarm.
"We have to get out of here!Or we'll be killed!!"
They ran through the halls.
The old man fainted, and Kai was mumbling something. They
followed Tala's lead.They were at the door.
"Yes we've made it!"Jacky said.
Tala stopped ten steps away.
"I wouldn't say so."He said nervously.
He was right. Guards were surrounding them.There were about
twenty.They all had swords of some kind.And worst of all, they didn't look happy.....
*************************
Will they be caught?What happened to Kai?And who is the mysterious old man? Review, and wait for the next chapter. Oh yes, I forgot to mention, the next chapter will seem a little srewed up, but you'll get the hang of it.Bye for now!
~Jacky~
