»Note« The story is based on The Bodyguard (1992), and is therefore characterized as fanfiction. I am processing the actual script here (including scenes that do not appear in the film) and have no rights to it, nor to the original characters. I only own author rights to the parts of the story I added. The scenes I'm including here are true events that I've adapted to fit the story.
I'm not a native English speaker, but I'd like to improve my knowledge of the language while working on the story. But I will try my best to always be understandable. I would be happy if there were improvements that would correct me. Above all, I see the correct use of the article and the distinction between British and US English as the main problem. I'm also generally interested in style and creative writing. Basically, I'm interested in suggestions on all areas, including supplementary scenes.
I myself follow different approaches and I'm not sure about the effect on the reader, so I'm quite ready for changes.
I see another problem in my tendency to convoluted sentence. In light of an easier reading, I'm grateful for improvements here as well.
Also, the story has been fundamentally altered as far as the threat to Rachel Marron is concerned. The action will also be relocated to Great Britain. Of course, the setting could just as well be the USA. Even if I move the plot to Great Britain, the inspiration is more to be found in the political situation in Germany.
Basically, three characters are changed:
1. Fletcher Marron becomes Ashley Marron because I find a girl easier to process.
2. Nicki Marron, is being expanded into the more powerful persona of Nicki Soleì. Rachel's sister, married to an influential French industrialist, who nevertheless doesn't get on well with her.
3. Frank Farmer - Surprise! He's not a bodyguard, he compares himself to Rachel, more like an assassin. He is actually a commando soldier from the SRR (Special Reconnaissance Regiment) and in this way describes Rachel only simplified his area of responsibility in the military.
I will insert numbering at the appropriate place in the text if I want to note certain explanations or doubts regarding the course of history. Please consider this as a starting point for discussion.
I will insert numbering at the appropriate place in the text if I want to note certain explanations or doubts regarding the course of history. Please consider this as a starting point for discussion.
Although I had contacted the operators of this site with a few questions that are in addition to the guidelines, I still didn't get an answer even after days. So I'll just start writing and hope I don't do anything wrong.
Would be nice. if people can already answer this text that they understand my English. So I know I can move on or let it go.
