A/N I own no characters from PotC : TCoTBP. I only own original characters
such as Alyssa.
Legolas- Thank you! Sorry it took so long to update, but here's the next chapter! Hope you enjoy it.
well- Let's see, no, I won't delete this. But, I will apologize for holding a gun to your head and forcing you to read it. Deeply sorry for that. And the simple fact that you don't have the balls to leave your name makes you disgust me.
koty m- LOL thanks! Here's the next chapter! Well, I don't quite live in Ireland YET LOL! Hopefully by this time next year I will be! Enjoy!
Issilhurro- Thank you! I'm glad that my story is at least close to the movie. I was in Dublin. Enjoy!
Carol Stevenson- Thanks, that was what I was going for! Jack is pretty sweet, lol, but a little too sweet, he's not quite in character. he will be moreso when I post with corrections. Enjoy!
CiCi- Well, I'm glad you found the story, and even gladder that you like it so far. Jack is my favorite character, too, partly because of the character and partly because Johnny Depp plays him so well. Enjoy!
Nika-Chan- Thank you. Glad you like it. Here's the next chapter, Enjoy!
JadaDora- Thank you, LOL. Poor Jack? This is nothing! Just wait til you see what I have in store MWAHAHA! LOL! Thanks for the constructive criticism! Enjoy!
Maiao Lilta- Thank you! We'll see LOL! It'll be okay though, trust me. Enjoy!
Fallen-Dreamer- Thanks so much! LOL! Aww, take it easy on 'well' lol. I guess I can't make you... On second thought, say whatever you like to 'well' lol! Thanks, enjoy!
MidnightFyre- Glad to see that you don't have too much time on your hands. I really admire your ability to so maturely read and review things you hate. It really proves you to be very adult. Hats off to you and you, you 250 pound overweight freak who had nothing better to do than sit on the computer and eat all day while acting like they have the slightest clue what they're talking about. Cheers, asshole.
Sanely Challenged- Wow. That is so awesome of you! 3 times in one hour? Wow. I'm glad you like it so much. I'm really very honored that you would put me on your favorites lists. I can only hope you keep enjoying it. Enjoy!!
Marching Angel- Thanks so much! Again, I'm very honored that you'd put my story on your favorites list! Thank you again!
(Nameless Reviewer)- Thank you. Yes, I'm 100% aware of the fact lol. I grew up on boats all the time. My father was a fisherman, so were most of my uncles. I was always on a boat. However, I'm having a hard enough time as it is with the characters I've got LOL. When you think about it, it is much more likely that just Jack would run the Black Pearl than being attacked by a bunchof skelletal pirates lol. Thanks.
XtremeNemesis- Thanks, Glad you like it. Here's the next chappy, Enjoy.
cerebral goddess- Thanks. Spelt to perfection! LOL. Glad you're liking it. You aren't the only Jack fan by any means! Enjoy, no more tears, luv! lol. Thanks so much *smiles back*
Noneedforaname- Thank you! Read it on your own time, by all means. I'm glad you found it. Awesome flick, eh? Enjoy!
LegolasLover2003- Glad you liked it! Neat, that you're planning something similar. Whoa! Sounds like a really fun time! Glad you enjoyed yourself! LOL! Hope you're all good singers! Awesome stuff, girl! Ireland was no less than I had expected. Beautiful as always. I was never bored. Glad you liked the chapter and I hope you enjoy the rest!
mistressofmetal- Thanks, always willing to give Jack some love lol. Barbossa will be explained, fear not! lol
Rhiannon- lol, Damn straight! Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Here's the next chappy, enjoy!
lilypad- Hey back, lol. I'm glad you like it AND the movie! Jack deserved someone! Enjoy!
XtremeSeaGazer- Thanks much! lol, honestly, I had no clue, I guessed! lol Here's the next chapter, enjoy!
Unknown Mistress- Wow, Thank you. Here's the next chapter, enjoy.
Tilly is still laughing- You aren't the only one laughing, your review amuses the hell outta me. If the story is so bad DON'T FUCKING READ IT! It doesn't take a fucking rocket scientist. I know when I don't like stories, I don't read them. It's really quite simple. Grow up, get a life and get over it, my dear, there has got to be something better to do with your time.
Dixiehnsnluver- LOL! I love you too! lol. Glad you like it and here's the next chapter, enjoy!
Sarah- Thanks for the encouragement? Seriously, though, know that the only things I will be changing in the story are (1) Jack's humor, he needs some, (2) descriptive detail, I need more and (3) now that I've seen the movie, I can add some crew in. That's it. So if you don't like it, don't read it.
Jasper- Well, I've heard it all before and it still blows my mind that you morons have nothing better to do with your time than read stories you despise so deeply. Keep in mind that I had written this far before I had even seen the movie and I plan to correct the characters (i.e. the "Keith Richardness" of Sparrow) when I have time now that I have seen it. If you don't like my OC, too bad. As for the "Christ-parallels," no. It was simply for a visual. It's easier for the human mind to visualize something when there is a comparison to make. All I can say is, do something more productive with your time.
Why is there no rum- LOL, great name! I loved that part of the movie! You are so great to say that! But, there is definitely some areas in need of correction, especially Sparrows humor. But thank you very much! I'm glad you like Alyssa, not many seem, to lol, not that I care what they think lol. Here's the next chappy, enjoy!
QueenOfTheDamned- Glad you LOVE it! lol. Here's the next chappy, enjoy!
Eamane-Calmcacil- LOL, Glad you like it. Here's the next chappy, Enjoy!
FrannieGurl2006- Glad you're liking it! The trip was marvellous, but I'm glad to be back! Here's the next chappy, enjoy.
whackjobwombat@yahoo.com- I think that anyone who would choose a name like whackjobwombat has no reason to expect their opinion to be respected or taken seriously.
Caitie78- Thanks so much! Glad you like it! LOL, Johnny and Orlando are both GRRREAT! Ireland is always gorgeous,. I had a blast. Here's the next chapter, enjoy!
Julia- Unlike most reviews which rudely say "YOU'RE DUMB! KILL YOUR OC! DOWN WITH YOUR FIC!" I can respect this review because you're simpley expressing your honest opinion and not being rude about it. Thanks for the compliments on my writing style and when I repost with corrections, I will be taking your review into consideration.
Capt. Jack Sparrow- Glad you like it. Yes, i wrote all of this so far before I had seen the movie, so when i repost with corrections, it will be changed up. Here's the next chapter.
ChelseaBloom- Thanks, glad you like it. Yes, I have now seen PotC and it was absolutely amazing! But when I wrote the first 7 chapters, I hadn't seen the movie.
Lainy the Daft- LOL Glad you like it! Look no longer, here's the next chapter! Enjoy!
Renee Sparrow- Thank you! LOL, I was exhausted when we got back from the trip, that's why it took so long to update. You will see how the name fits nto the story a little but down the road, lol. Enjoy!
Lara- Hey to you again! I saw it! AMAZING! Absolutley amazing. Here's what happens next in the story lol. Depp is a doll! Enjoy!
Bo- Thank you! I'm glad you found it again! Wow, DOESN'T strike you as a Mary Sue? Thanks so much, a lot of others disagree with you there lol. I appreciate it. Thanks again and enjoy!
A/N Wow, what a lot of (slightly mixed) reviews! Thanks to most of you, who seem to be liking it thus far. And to the others who don't, honestly, why do you read it, what sort of kick does it bring you? Anyways, Ireland was awesome. We're going back again on December 14th to get married on December 20th. It should be a hoot. I'm glad to be home, though, we didn't take our babies (dogs and cats) with us this time, but we will be next time, and I missed them sooo bad. When I got home, first thing I did was get on the floor and say 'HI!!' lol. We've got 7 cats and 6 dogs, so we've got quite a few. The cats will NOT be going to Ireland until/unless we move there. Our daughter was there with us, of course, and she likes it there a lot, so I wouldn't rule out the idea of moving sometime in the not so distant future. I know a lot of you are waiting patiently for the next chapter, and I appreciate your patience, but I can't type it up just yet. I have it written, just not typed. I will try to get that to you all by later today or sometime tomorrow. For now, it's back to work!! Bye, all!
Legolas- Thank you! Sorry it took so long to update, but here's the next chapter! Hope you enjoy it.
well- Let's see, no, I won't delete this. But, I will apologize for holding a gun to your head and forcing you to read it. Deeply sorry for that. And the simple fact that you don't have the balls to leave your name makes you disgust me.
koty m- LOL thanks! Here's the next chapter! Well, I don't quite live in Ireland YET LOL! Hopefully by this time next year I will be! Enjoy!
Issilhurro- Thank you! I'm glad that my story is at least close to the movie. I was in Dublin. Enjoy!
Carol Stevenson- Thanks, that was what I was going for! Jack is pretty sweet, lol, but a little too sweet, he's not quite in character. he will be moreso when I post with corrections. Enjoy!
CiCi- Well, I'm glad you found the story, and even gladder that you like it so far. Jack is my favorite character, too, partly because of the character and partly because Johnny Depp plays him so well. Enjoy!
Nika-Chan- Thank you. Glad you like it. Here's the next chapter, Enjoy!
JadaDora- Thank you, LOL. Poor Jack? This is nothing! Just wait til you see what I have in store MWAHAHA! LOL! Thanks for the constructive criticism! Enjoy!
Maiao Lilta- Thank you! We'll see LOL! It'll be okay though, trust me. Enjoy!
Fallen-Dreamer- Thanks so much! LOL! Aww, take it easy on 'well' lol. I guess I can't make you... On second thought, say whatever you like to 'well' lol! Thanks, enjoy!
MidnightFyre- Glad to see that you don't have too much time on your hands. I really admire your ability to so maturely read and review things you hate. It really proves you to be very adult. Hats off to you and you, you 250 pound overweight freak who had nothing better to do than sit on the computer and eat all day while acting like they have the slightest clue what they're talking about. Cheers, asshole.
Sanely Challenged- Wow. That is so awesome of you! 3 times in one hour? Wow. I'm glad you like it so much. I'm really very honored that you would put me on your favorites lists. I can only hope you keep enjoying it. Enjoy!!
Marching Angel- Thanks so much! Again, I'm very honored that you'd put my story on your favorites list! Thank you again!
(Nameless Reviewer)- Thank you. Yes, I'm 100% aware of the fact lol. I grew up on boats all the time. My father was a fisherman, so were most of my uncles. I was always on a boat. However, I'm having a hard enough time as it is with the characters I've got LOL. When you think about it, it is much more likely that just Jack would run the Black Pearl than being attacked by a bunchof skelletal pirates lol. Thanks.
XtremeNemesis- Thanks, Glad you like it. Here's the next chappy, Enjoy.
cerebral goddess- Thanks. Spelt to perfection! LOL. Glad you're liking it. You aren't the only Jack fan by any means! Enjoy, no more tears, luv! lol. Thanks so much *smiles back*
Noneedforaname- Thank you! Read it on your own time, by all means. I'm glad you found it. Awesome flick, eh? Enjoy!
LegolasLover2003- Glad you liked it! Neat, that you're planning something similar. Whoa! Sounds like a really fun time! Glad you enjoyed yourself! LOL! Hope you're all good singers! Awesome stuff, girl! Ireland was no less than I had expected. Beautiful as always. I was never bored. Glad you liked the chapter and I hope you enjoy the rest!
mistressofmetal- Thanks, always willing to give Jack some love lol. Barbossa will be explained, fear not! lol
Rhiannon- lol, Damn straight! Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Here's the next chappy, enjoy!
lilypad- Hey back, lol. I'm glad you like it AND the movie! Jack deserved someone! Enjoy!
XtremeSeaGazer- Thanks much! lol, honestly, I had no clue, I guessed! lol Here's the next chapter, enjoy!
Unknown Mistress- Wow, Thank you. Here's the next chapter, enjoy.
Tilly is still laughing- You aren't the only one laughing, your review amuses the hell outta me. If the story is so bad DON'T FUCKING READ IT! It doesn't take a fucking rocket scientist. I know when I don't like stories, I don't read them. It's really quite simple. Grow up, get a life and get over it, my dear, there has got to be something better to do with your time.
Dixiehnsnluver- LOL! I love you too! lol. Glad you like it and here's the next chapter, enjoy!
Sarah- Thanks for the encouragement? Seriously, though, know that the only things I will be changing in the story are (1) Jack's humor, he needs some, (2) descriptive detail, I need more and (3) now that I've seen the movie, I can add some crew in. That's it. So if you don't like it, don't read it.
Jasper- Well, I've heard it all before and it still blows my mind that you morons have nothing better to do with your time than read stories you despise so deeply. Keep in mind that I had written this far before I had even seen the movie and I plan to correct the characters (i.e. the "Keith Richardness" of Sparrow) when I have time now that I have seen it. If you don't like my OC, too bad. As for the "Christ-parallels," no. It was simply for a visual. It's easier for the human mind to visualize something when there is a comparison to make. All I can say is, do something more productive with your time.
Why is there no rum- LOL, great name! I loved that part of the movie! You are so great to say that! But, there is definitely some areas in need of correction, especially Sparrows humor. But thank you very much! I'm glad you like Alyssa, not many seem, to lol, not that I care what they think lol. Here's the next chappy, enjoy!
QueenOfTheDamned- Glad you LOVE it! lol. Here's the next chappy, enjoy!
Eamane-Calmcacil- LOL, Glad you like it. Here's the next chappy, Enjoy!
FrannieGurl2006- Glad you're liking it! The trip was marvellous, but I'm glad to be back! Here's the next chappy, enjoy.
whackjobwombat@yahoo.com- I think that anyone who would choose a name like whackjobwombat has no reason to expect their opinion to be respected or taken seriously.
Caitie78- Thanks so much! Glad you like it! LOL, Johnny and Orlando are both GRRREAT! Ireland is always gorgeous,. I had a blast. Here's the next chapter, enjoy!
Julia- Unlike most reviews which rudely say "YOU'RE DUMB! KILL YOUR OC! DOWN WITH YOUR FIC!" I can respect this review because you're simpley expressing your honest opinion and not being rude about it. Thanks for the compliments on my writing style and when I repost with corrections, I will be taking your review into consideration.
Capt. Jack Sparrow- Glad you like it. Yes, i wrote all of this so far before I had seen the movie, so when i repost with corrections, it will be changed up. Here's the next chapter.
ChelseaBloom- Thanks, glad you like it. Yes, I have now seen PotC and it was absolutely amazing! But when I wrote the first 7 chapters, I hadn't seen the movie.
Lainy the Daft- LOL Glad you like it! Look no longer, here's the next chapter! Enjoy!
Renee Sparrow- Thank you! LOL, I was exhausted when we got back from the trip, that's why it took so long to update. You will see how the name fits nto the story a little but down the road, lol. Enjoy!
Lara- Hey to you again! I saw it! AMAZING! Absolutley amazing. Here's what happens next in the story lol. Depp is a doll! Enjoy!
Bo- Thank you! I'm glad you found it again! Wow, DOESN'T strike you as a Mary Sue? Thanks so much, a lot of others disagree with you there lol. I appreciate it. Thanks again and enjoy!
A/N Wow, what a lot of (slightly mixed) reviews! Thanks to most of you, who seem to be liking it thus far. And to the others who don't, honestly, why do you read it, what sort of kick does it bring you? Anyways, Ireland was awesome. We're going back again on December 14th to get married on December 20th. It should be a hoot. I'm glad to be home, though, we didn't take our babies (dogs and cats) with us this time, but we will be next time, and I missed them sooo bad. When I got home, first thing I did was get on the floor and say 'HI!!' lol. We've got 7 cats and 6 dogs, so we've got quite a few. The cats will NOT be going to Ireland until/unless we move there. Our daughter was there with us, of course, and she likes it there a lot, so I wouldn't rule out the idea of moving sometime in the not so distant future. I know a lot of you are waiting patiently for the next chapter, and I appreciate your patience, but I can't type it up just yet. I have it written, just not typed. I will try to get that to you all by later today or sometime tomorrow. For now, it's back to work!! Bye, all!
