This is a special author's note.. I realize that you think the ending
sucks, and if I were just a reader, and not the writer I would also. So, I
am writing this Author's Note to fill in what I accidentally left out, and
a preview of my new story (which the first chapter is up). I have had 3
main questions asked about the ending, and I am going to answer them now.
Q1) who stabbed Elizabeth? A1) Tom Baker was just released from Jail and stabbed her.
Q2) how did their kids die? A2) They were hit by a drunk driver. It shows that they died at the end when Jason meets with Elizabeth.
Q3) why did I end the story? A3) I was just going to torture you with the thought of her dying, but then I decided to let her die, and write a sequel, but then I decided to just write the plot of the sequel in another story, and ended Emotionless. I know Jason was selfish to commit suicide, but if you think of the ending it's kinda bittersweet. They died, but are together as a family in heaven. (not to push religion) It all kind of fell into place. I hope this helps.
Here is your preview of the story that's already up kinda.. But for those of you who haven't read it, or haven't REVIEWED!
-Jason swung the door open to a tearful Corinthos family.
"Have you seen the news?" Jason shook his head no.
"Turn it on. Pick any channel. It'll be on," Jason flicked the T.V. on and instantly his heart sunk. Running across the screen in bold letters was.
'Elizabeth Spencer Dead, Murder or Accident?'-
-"Laura asked if I wanted to say anything. And I do, if I can just figure out how. I feel so lucky to have had Elizabeth in my life. I guess what I wanted to tell you was Elizabeth saved my life. If you know me, you know that I have trouble saying how I feel. She literally picked me up off the ground from the snow and the ice, and took care of what hurt and watched over me at night a few years ago. And this is why it's not right that she's gone. Someone who--who saves a life should have an extra life. More time, not less. Elizabeth would walk into a room, and you just had to look in her direction. She had a light that radiated from her. When she helped me that one winter after we met, I opened my eyes and she was by my side. And the light from her reflected off the snow. She looked like an angel. She was an angel. I used to take her for rides on my bike, and she told me that the wind was so loud, that she couldn't think. That's what it's supposed to do. She painted a picture for me of what it looks like from my bike. She painted me the wind. I will always be in Elizabeth's dept. I will always love her, and miss her with all my heart. Elizabeth was my best friend, and my soul mate. That saying 'you don't know what you have until you lost it' is right. I'd give all my money, and all my power just to have her shoot a glare at me and then laugh, because she couldn't really stay angry at me," -
-Elizabeth couldn't move her arms, or legs. You couldn't tell she was moving. And unless you knew she had drunk that drug, you would think she was really dead. Her heart shattered as everyone spoke, but her eyes wouldn't open, and her mouth wouldn't work either. Jason never opened up that much and he would never know that she loved him with all her heart and soul. The priest finished the sermon and everyone came to look at her one more time. She listened to them whisper words to her.-
Okay, there are three little previews from chapter 1.. now go read WHAT MEANS THE MOST and review! Lol.. Thanks to all of those who read EMOTIONLESS and reviewed, they mean a lot to me. Thanks to Omally, and Sister of the Moon for their pep talks online. Thanks to those who read, but didn't review (I wish you would!) Thanks, and this is the end of Emotionless!
Q1) who stabbed Elizabeth? A1) Tom Baker was just released from Jail and stabbed her.
Q2) how did their kids die? A2) They were hit by a drunk driver. It shows that they died at the end when Jason meets with Elizabeth.
Q3) why did I end the story? A3) I was just going to torture you with the thought of her dying, but then I decided to let her die, and write a sequel, but then I decided to just write the plot of the sequel in another story, and ended Emotionless. I know Jason was selfish to commit suicide, but if you think of the ending it's kinda bittersweet. They died, but are together as a family in heaven. (not to push religion) It all kind of fell into place. I hope this helps.
Here is your preview of the story that's already up kinda.. But for those of you who haven't read it, or haven't REVIEWED!
-Jason swung the door open to a tearful Corinthos family.
"Have you seen the news?" Jason shook his head no.
"Turn it on. Pick any channel. It'll be on," Jason flicked the T.V. on and instantly his heart sunk. Running across the screen in bold letters was.
'Elizabeth Spencer Dead, Murder or Accident?'-
-"Laura asked if I wanted to say anything. And I do, if I can just figure out how. I feel so lucky to have had Elizabeth in my life. I guess what I wanted to tell you was Elizabeth saved my life. If you know me, you know that I have trouble saying how I feel. She literally picked me up off the ground from the snow and the ice, and took care of what hurt and watched over me at night a few years ago. And this is why it's not right that she's gone. Someone who--who saves a life should have an extra life. More time, not less. Elizabeth would walk into a room, and you just had to look in her direction. She had a light that radiated from her. When she helped me that one winter after we met, I opened my eyes and she was by my side. And the light from her reflected off the snow. She looked like an angel. She was an angel. I used to take her for rides on my bike, and she told me that the wind was so loud, that she couldn't think. That's what it's supposed to do. She painted a picture for me of what it looks like from my bike. She painted me the wind. I will always be in Elizabeth's dept. I will always love her, and miss her with all my heart. Elizabeth was my best friend, and my soul mate. That saying 'you don't know what you have until you lost it' is right. I'd give all my money, and all my power just to have her shoot a glare at me and then laugh, because she couldn't really stay angry at me," -
-Elizabeth couldn't move her arms, or legs. You couldn't tell she was moving. And unless you knew she had drunk that drug, you would think she was really dead. Her heart shattered as everyone spoke, but her eyes wouldn't open, and her mouth wouldn't work either. Jason never opened up that much and he would never know that she loved him with all her heart and soul. The priest finished the sermon and everyone came to look at her one more time. She listened to them whisper words to her.-
Okay, there are three little previews from chapter 1.. now go read WHAT MEANS THE MOST and review! Lol.. Thanks to all of those who read EMOTIONLESS and reviewed, they mean a lot to me. Thanks to Omally, and Sister of the Moon for their pep talks online. Thanks to those who read, but didn't review (I wish you would!) Thanks, and this is the end of Emotionless!