Ok this is my first time writing this kind of story. I hope I do a good job! Would love feed back!! Thanks. On with my Kurama/Hiei story.
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The wind blew through my hair. Gazing, searching for the person who had been in my dreams every night for at least two years. Yes I had been gone a long time. Six months away from my friends and sister. It was time I needed to go over things in my mind. Yes he was happier now. He was able to let go of the past. Somewhat. Ok sometimes he still thought about it. But it didn't have the hold on me it once did. Muruko had told me her feelings. But I told her that I had feelings for another. I could not tell anyone how I felt or for who. I wanted to see if my feelings could be shared. If not I would forget about them. No I could never forget. Those green eyes had haunted me….
Just then on the street below I heard and felt the chi I had been searching for. The redhead was staring at the sky. Dreamy look upon his face. (what was he thinking?) I asked my self. Then I followed him. Four girls his human age ran up to him. Now I have to fight a need to jump down and declare for them to leave now. Or else. He talks to them. Laughter reaches my perch. He looks so happy down there. He belongs in this world now. I know that. Once again the redhead starts toward his home. I follow him. Wondering what to say to my friend.
I see him go inside. I know he will visit with his mother and step-father before going into his room. I jump on the tree right by his window. Memories rush back and take my breath away. I used to come here all the time. To visit with him. To be near him. Yes even then I loved him. Love I had never thought I, the forbidden child, would have such feelings. But they came and I fought them. I stare into his window from my tree. Thinking of all the times we shared.
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As I walked home my mind wanders. It drifts toward someone that I love. Someone I know that could not feel the same about me. I think of how we met. How we fought side by side. Trust one another so much that we were compatible. I think of days gone by when he would stop in to say hi or just to get out of the rain. I miss those days. But while a heavy sigh I know he chose to live with her. He is her heir after all. But could he feel more for her? No must not think about that. It would only depress me.
" Shuichi!!' voice called
I turn toward it. Kaede is coming toward me. Her friend follows her to me. We talk about things. I grow bored with the talk. I am nice and kind. Yes I am just like they want me to be. My heart aches and I struggle to stay focused. I laugh when I know it is warranted. all the while my thoughts stay on him. She leaves and I continue on.
I reach my house and go inside. My mother and step father are sitting at the table. They ask me how my day was. I lie. What else could I do? I could not tell them that I am heartbroken. Nor can I tell them about him. They never met him. Even though he spent lots of time here. He came when they were gone. Soon I escape to my room. My heart is heavy in my chest. I open my window. Just like I always did. Out of habit I guess. Maybe I wait for him to show.
I lay on my bed as hot tears fall from my eyes. I feel choked up. I no longer care to do my school work. I just wish I could die.
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As I sit in the tree my thoughts drift to when we first met. Then to when I last gazed upon him. In that time while his body grew as a human his gentle voice never changed. He was always the calm one. The first person I trusted in my life. The first person besides my sister I loved. I trusted him with my life countless times. Would do the same again. It is my heart that I am unsure to give. It is a had thing to get used to. Sharing how I feel with anyone. It has always been my nature to keep things quite not to tell anyone. I never told my own sister that I am her brother. Nor can I. I am afraid. Truly afraid of what they would say. If they told me they didn't love me it would kill me. It would be far worse than getting defeated by a demon. I keep myself well guarded not showing any signs of feeling.
My thoughts drift once again. I find myself reliving each time I though he would die. Twice. Twice he almost died. Each time I felt my heart break. Yes it broke even if it was frozen in my chest. seeing him being hurt shattered me. Yet I showed no one. I let everyone believe I am no more than friends with him. Yet it was then I had to face how I felt. To some degree I did. I remember my thoughts each time. The one thought that went around my mind the most was. Would I never hear him say again, "Hiei." or to see him smile and his eyes dance with amusement.
Soft crying reaches my ears. The sound is life a tidal wave. They sound as sad as I feel. I brush the sound away from my ears. Thinking that I should leave for now. That was when I recognized the voice. I felt a stab of pain shoot through my chest. Kurama was crying? Why? Now the sound was louder and had torment in it. like he was in a lot of pain. Not being able to stand not being near him. I jump onto his window sill. I see him laying in bed. His tears run down his face.
I jump in beside his bed and stare at his face. I am lost for words. That was when he noticed me. H brushed his tears aside and smiled at me. My heart gave a flutter at that. He sat up in his bed.
"Hiei, Have you come to visit? Or perhaps are you to stay awhile in this world?" He said with utter calm ness.
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Ok I got lots more to give ya!! I just need some reviews!! Come on now tell me what you think!!!!
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The wind blew through my hair. Gazing, searching for the person who had been in my dreams every night for at least two years. Yes I had been gone a long time. Six months away from my friends and sister. It was time I needed to go over things in my mind. Yes he was happier now. He was able to let go of the past. Somewhat. Ok sometimes he still thought about it. But it didn't have the hold on me it once did. Muruko had told me her feelings. But I told her that I had feelings for another. I could not tell anyone how I felt or for who. I wanted to see if my feelings could be shared. If not I would forget about them. No I could never forget. Those green eyes had haunted me….
Just then on the street below I heard and felt the chi I had been searching for. The redhead was staring at the sky. Dreamy look upon his face. (what was he thinking?) I asked my self. Then I followed him. Four girls his human age ran up to him. Now I have to fight a need to jump down and declare for them to leave now. Or else. He talks to them. Laughter reaches my perch. He looks so happy down there. He belongs in this world now. I know that. Once again the redhead starts toward his home. I follow him. Wondering what to say to my friend.
I see him go inside. I know he will visit with his mother and step-father before going into his room. I jump on the tree right by his window. Memories rush back and take my breath away. I used to come here all the time. To visit with him. To be near him. Yes even then I loved him. Love I had never thought I, the forbidden child, would have such feelings. But they came and I fought them. I stare into his window from my tree. Thinking of all the times we shared.
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As I walked home my mind wanders. It drifts toward someone that I love. Someone I know that could not feel the same about me. I think of how we met. How we fought side by side. Trust one another so much that we were compatible. I think of days gone by when he would stop in to say hi or just to get out of the rain. I miss those days. But while a heavy sigh I know he chose to live with her. He is her heir after all. But could he feel more for her? No must not think about that. It would only depress me.
" Shuichi!!' voice called
I turn toward it. Kaede is coming toward me. Her friend follows her to me. We talk about things. I grow bored with the talk. I am nice and kind. Yes I am just like they want me to be. My heart aches and I struggle to stay focused. I laugh when I know it is warranted. all the while my thoughts stay on him. She leaves and I continue on.
I reach my house and go inside. My mother and step father are sitting at the table. They ask me how my day was. I lie. What else could I do? I could not tell them that I am heartbroken. Nor can I tell them about him. They never met him. Even though he spent lots of time here. He came when they were gone. Soon I escape to my room. My heart is heavy in my chest. I open my window. Just like I always did. Out of habit I guess. Maybe I wait for him to show.
I lay on my bed as hot tears fall from my eyes. I feel choked up. I no longer care to do my school work. I just wish I could die.
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As I sit in the tree my thoughts drift to when we first met. Then to when I last gazed upon him. In that time while his body grew as a human his gentle voice never changed. He was always the calm one. The first person I trusted in my life. The first person besides my sister I loved. I trusted him with my life countless times. Would do the same again. It is my heart that I am unsure to give. It is a had thing to get used to. Sharing how I feel with anyone. It has always been my nature to keep things quite not to tell anyone. I never told my own sister that I am her brother. Nor can I. I am afraid. Truly afraid of what they would say. If they told me they didn't love me it would kill me. It would be far worse than getting defeated by a demon. I keep myself well guarded not showing any signs of feeling.
My thoughts drift once again. I find myself reliving each time I though he would die. Twice. Twice he almost died. Each time I felt my heart break. Yes it broke even if it was frozen in my chest. seeing him being hurt shattered me. Yet I showed no one. I let everyone believe I am no more than friends with him. Yet it was then I had to face how I felt. To some degree I did. I remember my thoughts each time. The one thought that went around my mind the most was. Would I never hear him say again, "Hiei." or to see him smile and his eyes dance with amusement.
Soft crying reaches my ears. The sound is life a tidal wave. They sound as sad as I feel. I brush the sound away from my ears. Thinking that I should leave for now. That was when I recognized the voice. I felt a stab of pain shoot through my chest. Kurama was crying? Why? Now the sound was louder and had torment in it. like he was in a lot of pain. Not being able to stand not being near him. I jump onto his window sill. I see him laying in bed. His tears run down his face.
I jump in beside his bed and stare at his face. I am lost for words. That was when he noticed me. H brushed his tears aside and smiled at me. My heart gave a flutter at that. He sat up in his bed.
"Hiei, Have you come to visit? Or perhaps are you to stay awhile in this world?" He said with utter calm ness.
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Ok I got lots more to give ya!! I just need some reviews!! Come on now tell me what you think!!!!