Why Do Fools Fall In Love?

I chose a sacred star

Reaching my hand out afar

My shining light came to me

So happy and so carefree

We hid our feelings for each other

Never revealing our secret, such endless torture

Why do fools fall in love?

My bright light, my white dove

Now you've left

And I stopped your petty theft

We made our unknowingly vows

Under those colorful clouds

On the hill where we sat together many times

Watching the clouds pantomime

Why do fools fall in love?

For a while, you were mine

Putting on a tough act when you seemed so gentle and kind

Everything was too good to be true

I had believed that you would give up so much for me and was a fool

So I walked on and on to our beloved hill

Then you went in for the kill

You slashed my right shoulder

When I realized it was you, I was bewildered

You tricked me and left me to die

Boy you made me cry silently deep inside

And a new force started to arise

Why do fools fall in love?

I should have never opened up to emotions

Especially someone in my position

I knew very well that I wasn't supposed to love

But you were always there, my white dove

I panted and struggled with each step

Thinking things over with great depth

There you were, running on my left side

Then I re- felt that burning hatred growing deep inside

Inuyasha! I shouted

Time seemed to stop with those last few moments passing by

Then released an arrow to keep you bounded

I watched all our times together flashing before my eyes

And you glared at me as I watched you slowly die

I picked up the Shikon no Tama wondering

'Why do fools fall in love?'

Silently, I prayed that you went somewhere up above

I still loved you seconds before I died

But then hatred began to replace it inside

As I slipped into the nothingness of the other world

I still wondered, why do fools fall in love?

Don't people know that you can't keep a dove?

The bright shining light will disappear as well

Leaving one in the darkness to dwell

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Author's Note: Ok! That wasn't a very good poem, but hey! I actually managed to to make one, and I'm normally not good at poems. Plus, I think I was in a rhymt mood at the time. Yeps! This was made like 2-3 weeks ago and now, I decided to share it with a lot of people. Review Please!! Let me know what you would rate it from 1- 10. I know this isn't my best poem, but still, can you please give me your ratings on it? -_0 I won't get too hurt if you say 1.just be honest? Comment on it? Something that will assure me that people actually read this "so-so" poem and is willing to help me out on how good I write my poems?