Hi!! I hop that you enjoyed the first chapter!!! (I try to leave it at
suspense)
Disclaimer: I don't own it!!!! ONLY A COPY OF THE GAME!! There I said it!
Now I'll write the story.
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Last sentence of last chapter: Then a soft hand grabbed my wrist and
started to pull me up.
I sputtered and coughed as I was brought to the surface. I grabbed onto the dock and pulled myself up.
When I was lying on the dock, I saw a beautiful girl.
She had short brown hair, soft brown eyes, and a blue dress on with an apron. She looked worried.
"Are you OK?" she asked in a concerned voice, she tried to wipe off some of the sand on her baby blue sleeve.
I nodded my head, salt water sloshed around in my stomach. Then I fainted.
Next thing I knew I was lying in a bed. The sheets were the same color as the girl's clothes.
I took a chance to look around the room before the girl entered the room, wiping her hands with a towel.
She noticed that I had awakened and threw the towel onto a rocking chair in the room.
"You OK?" she asked again. "Please tell me the truth this time."
"Yes, I'm fine." I answered and started to get out of bed.
She helped me to my feet and led me into another room.
Fancy wallpaper was on the walls; a shiny wooden counter with a glass shelf built in, and a cash register sat on top.
I peered through the glass. The sights in there were mouth watering.
I saw pies that were packed with juicy fruit, cakes that were coated with icing, and cookies in pretty pink wrapping.
I heard chair legs pushing against the tile.
I looked up and the girl had pulled out a chair for me at a table. I grinned my usual toothy grin and leaped into the chair at the table.
The girl pushed my chair in; I was feeling like a two-year-old with her treating me like this.
She hurried to the back room and brought out a fluffy piece of cake.
I great fully took it and dug in with a fork she gave me.
The girl seated herself across from me and introduced herself.
"Hi! I'm Elli! Who might you be?"
"I'm Drew." I said through a mouthful of Elli's delicious chocolate cake.
Elli giggled and then continued. "Oh yeah, I remember you. I saw you when you went to stay at your Grandpa's. You also hung out with Karen." She frowned at this.
I blushed, all of a sudden remembering that small (well really big) promise that I had made to Karen a long time ago.
I had every desire to break it.
While shoving more cake into my mouth to interrupt my thoughts, I could tell Elli was watching me. It felt creepy, like she was reading my mind.
Elli got up and got herself a sliver of verryberry pie. She took dainty bites and I licked frosting off of the corners of my mouth.
I checked my watch. It was almost 7:00!
"Well, it's pretty late." I exclaimed, getting up.
"OK." Elli said, and she cleared our plates.
While I was walking out the door, I called back "Thank you!"
"Bye." I hear Elli say in a soft whisper.
I went out the door and into the starry night.
As I looked up, I noticed that I could see WAY more stars twinkling in the sky than I could in the city.
I wandered back to the farm and went into the house, getting one last look at the stars.
When I was inside, I saw a puppy lying on the bed.
A note was attached to the red bandana around the puppy's neck.
Dear Drew, the note said: This is a pup that I found wandering around the farm one day. I would like for you to take care of him. He sleeps a lot now, but I know that someday he could win the Annual Dog Race for you. From, Mayor Thomas
I put the note down and picked up the puppy.
"You sleep a lot huh?" I asked the snoozing dog. "Well then the perfect name for you would be Snoozer."
The dog grumbled in his slumber and I chuckled.
I placed Snoozer on the floor and climbed into bed.
"Goodnight." I said before writing in my new diary and falling asleep. #$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$# I hope you liked this chapter! Please, PLEASE review. I want to know how terrible or good my story is. (my boyfriend is sick!! ~sob~)
I sputtered and coughed as I was brought to the surface. I grabbed onto the dock and pulled myself up.
When I was lying on the dock, I saw a beautiful girl.
She had short brown hair, soft brown eyes, and a blue dress on with an apron. She looked worried.
"Are you OK?" she asked in a concerned voice, she tried to wipe off some of the sand on her baby blue sleeve.
I nodded my head, salt water sloshed around in my stomach. Then I fainted.
Next thing I knew I was lying in a bed. The sheets were the same color as the girl's clothes.
I took a chance to look around the room before the girl entered the room, wiping her hands with a towel.
She noticed that I had awakened and threw the towel onto a rocking chair in the room.
"You OK?" she asked again. "Please tell me the truth this time."
"Yes, I'm fine." I answered and started to get out of bed.
She helped me to my feet and led me into another room.
Fancy wallpaper was on the walls; a shiny wooden counter with a glass shelf built in, and a cash register sat on top.
I peered through the glass. The sights in there were mouth watering.
I saw pies that were packed with juicy fruit, cakes that were coated with icing, and cookies in pretty pink wrapping.
I heard chair legs pushing against the tile.
I looked up and the girl had pulled out a chair for me at a table. I grinned my usual toothy grin and leaped into the chair at the table.
The girl pushed my chair in; I was feeling like a two-year-old with her treating me like this.
She hurried to the back room and brought out a fluffy piece of cake.
I great fully took it and dug in with a fork she gave me.
The girl seated herself across from me and introduced herself.
"Hi! I'm Elli! Who might you be?"
"I'm Drew." I said through a mouthful of Elli's delicious chocolate cake.
Elli giggled and then continued. "Oh yeah, I remember you. I saw you when you went to stay at your Grandpa's. You also hung out with Karen." She frowned at this.
I blushed, all of a sudden remembering that small (well really big) promise that I had made to Karen a long time ago.
I had every desire to break it.
While shoving more cake into my mouth to interrupt my thoughts, I could tell Elli was watching me. It felt creepy, like she was reading my mind.
Elli got up and got herself a sliver of verryberry pie. She took dainty bites and I licked frosting off of the corners of my mouth.
I checked my watch. It was almost 7:00!
"Well, it's pretty late." I exclaimed, getting up.
"OK." Elli said, and she cleared our plates.
While I was walking out the door, I called back "Thank you!"
"Bye." I hear Elli say in a soft whisper.
I went out the door and into the starry night.
As I looked up, I noticed that I could see WAY more stars twinkling in the sky than I could in the city.
I wandered back to the farm and went into the house, getting one last look at the stars.
When I was inside, I saw a puppy lying on the bed.
A note was attached to the red bandana around the puppy's neck.
Dear Drew, the note said: This is a pup that I found wandering around the farm one day. I would like for you to take care of him. He sleeps a lot now, but I know that someday he could win the Annual Dog Race for you. From, Mayor Thomas
I put the note down and picked up the puppy.
"You sleep a lot huh?" I asked the snoozing dog. "Well then the perfect name for you would be Snoozer."
The dog grumbled in his slumber and I chuckled.
I placed Snoozer on the floor and climbed into bed.
"Goodnight." I said before writing in my new diary and falling asleep. #$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$#$# I hope you liked this chapter! Please, PLEASE review. I want to know how terrible or good my story is. (my boyfriend is sick!! ~sob~)