Well, I'm here at the beach, and I was thinking about the story, and I realized that Rory isn't really acting like she's 18 or whatever, but younger, and that it's more likely that she'd get leukemia at a younger age; So now I'm thinking of doing a slight re-write, and make her younger, like maybe 16, but that's when the show started about though, and I want Jess to be there and she's going out with Dean; so anyways, I'm going to be doing a slight rewrite, and it's probably going to get a lot more AU than it is already..of course, the more I think about it, the more this story is bugging me; I'm not exactly sure what I want to do, but if you have any suggestions, tell me!