A/n Hey ppl! Didnt expect an update so soon huh? Well...read and review
plz. And can someone do me a favor? In your review, Explain how to use
things like sama and san plz.
oh yeah i have responses to me reviewers
Cherri Ookami *Goes to scary mode.* Interesting. *SMACK* Owwie! Fine! You know what to do. Continue. ^_^ Ja! Oh and whoever smacked me will die! *Runs with a mallet!* Get outta the way! Your review was.......*Scary Mode* Interesting. Tsukasa-magic Hey, this is REALLY good! Please write more very soon! I am and will.
ON WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!
.hack//ANVERIOUS
Chapter 1~~~Escape
The next day, everyone was surprised to see Lain show up for school. They had all heard about Bear falling into a coma, they were begining to think that there was a curse around her. However, they couldnt help but feel sorry for her, all knowing that she would have to go back to her alcaholic father. Before she fell into a coma whilst playing "The World," she had to cover up brusies with make-up so people wouldent think that she had an abusive father, but everyone knew. She had alwase kept to herself and didnt have many freinds. After the coma however, she was alot more open to people and had alot more freinds. Another strange sight that day was Katsumi, the toughest girl in school, crying on Subaru`s shoulder. Not known to many, Katsumi played the Haevy-Blade, Mimiru in "The World." The CC Corparation had shut "The World" down because Helba discarded the field "Net Slum" when they were attacked by Skeith. The CC corparation took advantage of this shut down time, to add feeling to "The World" aiming to up there sales more. The only person who had experinced feeling in "The World" before this was Tsukasa. "The World" had every feeling that ahuman can feel. Pain, Relief, Death, Love, Hate, Lust, Modesty were all experincable. When the game was back online, the sales went up as planned.
At school, everyone was avoiding Lain, Katsumi, and Subaru, who were very deppressed that day. There teachers didnt call on them, and the students didnt talk to them. After school, they walked home alone. Lain didnt want to go home because she knew her real father was waiting for her. Just the thought of seeing him sent a cold shiver down her spine. She knew that her father didnt care for her, as she was told that when she was in a coma, he had pulled the plug on her. He had technically tried to kill her. But, she had no choice. When she reached the house, she hesitated, fearing her drunk father within. After a half-minute, she took a step forward. Then another step, and another, and another, until she reached the peeling blue door. She lifted her hand up and knocked, dreading the awnser. Soon after, the knob turned and she saw her father. Sure enough, he had a half-empty beer bottle in his hand.
"Oh, its you. Get in here." He demanded cruelly. Lain walked in slowly and sat at the table.
"The movers brought your stuff in earlier. Its in your room." He said. "So that bastard step-father of yours got himself into a coma huh? What a idiot. A grown manlike him shouldent play games!" He began to laugh. Lain clenched her hand into a fist. She wanted to kill him for saying that about Bear.
"Bear is twice the man you will ever be, you filthy slime!" Lain screamed.
"What was that? That idiot who has a pitiful job and plays video games, is more a man than me? Thats so funny!" He laughed harder. Lain knew that Bear had a bad job, but they pulled though every month perfectly happy, with a little extra money to spare. It has been less than three minutes and she was already sick of him. She departed from the table without a word and entered her room, slamming her door and locking it behind her. She unpacked her computer and hooked it up, then unpacked "The World" and plugged the system into her computer. She pulled on the headset and started the game. Next thing she knew, she was no longer a girl. She was Tsukasa in Mac Anu, the water capital. She had escaped.
A/n: There you go chapter 1. Dont forget to reveiw!
oh yeah i have responses to me reviewers
Cherri Ookami *Goes to scary mode.* Interesting. *SMACK* Owwie! Fine! You know what to do. Continue. ^_^ Ja! Oh and whoever smacked me will die! *Runs with a mallet!* Get outta the way! Your review was.......*Scary Mode* Interesting. Tsukasa-magic Hey, this is REALLY good! Please write more very soon! I am and will.
ON WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!
.hack//ANVERIOUS
Chapter 1~~~Escape
The next day, everyone was surprised to see Lain show up for school. They had all heard about Bear falling into a coma, they were begining to think that there was a curse around her. However, they couldnt help but feel sorry for her, all knowing that she would have to go back to her alcaholic father. Before she fell into a coma whilst playing "The World," she had to cover up brusies with make-up so people wouldent think that she had an abusive father, but everyone knew. She had alwase kept to herself and didnt have many freinds. After the coma however, she was alot more open to people and had alot more freinds. Another strange sight that day was Katsumi, the toughest girl in school, crying on Subaru`s shoulder. Not known to many, Katsumi played the Haevy-Blade, Mimiru in "The World." The CC Corparation had shut "The World" down because Helba discarded the field "Net Slum" when they were attacked by Skeith. The CC corparation took advantage of this shut down time, to add feeling to "The World" aiming to up there sales more. The only person who had experinced feeling in "The World" before this was Tsukasa. "The World" had every feeling that ahuman can feel. Pain, Relief, Death, Love, Hate, Lust, Modesty were all experincable. When the game was back online, the sales went up as planned.
At school, everyone was avoiding Lain, Katsumi, and Subaru, who were very deppressed that day. There teachers didnt call on them, and the students didnt talk to them. After school, they walked home alone. Lain didnt want to go home because she knew her real father was waiting for her. Just the thought of seeing him sent a cold shiver down her spine. She knew that her father didnt care for her, as she was told that when she was in a coma, he had pulled the plug on her. He had technically tried to kill her. But, she had no choice. When she reached the house, she hesitated, fearing her drunk father within. After a half-minute, she took a step forward. Then another step, and another, and another, until she reached the peeling blue door. She lifted her hand up and knocked, dreading the awnser. Soon after, the knob turned and she saw her father. Sure enough, he had a half-empty beer bottle in his hand.
"Oh, its you. Get in here." He demanded cruelly. Lain walked in slowly and sat at the table.
"The movers brought your stuff in earlier. Its in your room." He said. "So that bastard step-father of yours got himself into a coma huh? What a idiot. A grown manlike him shouldent play games!" He began to laugh. Lain clenched her hand into a fist. She wanted to kill him for saying that about Bear.
"Bear is twice the man you will ever be, you filthy slime!" Lain screamed.
"What was that? That idiot who has a pitiful job and plays video games, is more a man than me? Thats so funny!" He laughed harder. Lain knew that Bear had a bad job, but they pulled though every month perfectly happy, with a little extra money to spare. It has been less than three minutes and she was already sick of him. She departed from the table without a word and entered her room, slamming her door and locking it behind her. She unpacked her computer and hooked it up, then unpacked "The World" and plugged the system into her computer. She pulled on the headset and started the game. Next thing she knew, she was no longer a girl. She was Tsukasa in Mac Anu, the water capital. She had escaped.
A/n: There you go chapter 1. Dont forget to reveiw!