A/n: Hey ppl! Thanks for reviews! Ill respond to them now!
Good story. Great description.
You were asking about using sama and san. Both are suffixes used at the end of names. -Sama is of high respect, which would be like 'Master'. -San is respect to someone older, or like saying 'Mrs., Mr., or Ms.' -Chan is used for close friends, family
Anyway, great story, and I hope you update soon!
THANK YOU! I had no idea what they ment! Thanks alot!
I wonder what happened to Sora...Maybe he's in a coma or somethin' (Like Orca) An awesome chapter! Update soon!
Umm...I dunno. I think he is in a coma
Another awesome chapter. This really enjoyable to read. I'm still wondering though since you brought Skieth from the game series, are going to bring any of the characters from the game to. Any ways your doing an awesome job, please keep upt the excellent work. I hope you update really soon.
I might.....i dunno yet...hmm mabye
This story looks great. The story and plot seem really intresting. Since you brought Skieth from the game version, are you going to bring Kite, BlackRose, or any others from the game into this story. I think that would be awesome, because I would really like to see how you interact with characters from both series. Any ways it just a suggestion. Your doing an awesome job so far, and really hope you keep up the excellent work. I really hope you update real soon.
*above*
I HATE I HATE I HATE WHEN TSUKASA IS A GIRL!
Im sorry! I need to do that for later purposes! Plz dont stop reading _
Now on with the fic!!!!!! Yay new character!!! I still dont know what class to make him!!!!!! ^_^
Chapter 3: Meeting
Tsukasa reentered the capital of Mac Anu to find Subaru and Mimiru waiting for him.
"Tsukasa! Did we get a responce?" Mimiru asked eagerly.
"Our message was erased...." Tsukasa started.
"What!!?!?!?!" Mimiru exploded in a rage. "ERASED!!! WHY!?!!?
"However..." Tsukasa continued. Mimiru stopped ranting at the sound of this. "There was another message there. The writer instucted us to go to 'DELTA BURSTING PASSED OVER SEA OF SAND.'" They formed a party and entered the keywords. The three gold rings appered above there heads and fell down. As the rings fell, the trio dissapered to the desert of the designated area.
The three freinds entered a desert. Normally, in the old world, they wouldnt mind the heat, but because the new version of "The World" tempature is experiancable. They were luckily near the dungeon, witch was much cooler inside for some reason that was unknown. Mabye to make the level easier to survive. Anyway, they headed to the dungeon to cool off. They ran as fast as they could to the rarly appeling dungeon. As there were no magic portals in the way, they had no problem. As the group desended the griny stairs at the entrance, they saw the flames illuminating the room below. They arraived at the dreary underground, savoring the cooling air. All three were taking deep breaths of air to cool the lungs and clear them of sand. When they were done resting, they entered the room ahead of them. The walls spread into a large room upon entranceand had a walkway spreading from one side to the other. In a room like this, there should be a magic portal contaning a monster or a treasure chest, but there wasnt one. There was however a male heavyblade standing there.
"Hello." Was all he said. He was wearing black robes covering his whole body, his eyes shone of green and brown. His hair was long and grey, hanging low on his broad shoulderpads. He took a step forward and his footsteps made a stoft clank, revealing that the robes were not armor, and just show.
"Shall we get to buissness?" Subaru asked.
"What do you know about what happend to Sora?" Tsukasa asked almost immediatly. His next reply was one word.
"Skeith." He said, his voice darkened by greif and hatred.
"What!?" Tsukasa let out. "How do you know?" He asked. His reply was yet another word.
"Helba." He said. His anwsers were getting on Mimiru`s nerves as Subaru could tell seeing her face twist in annoyance and disgust.
"CAN YOU SAY ANYTHING MORE THAN ONE WORD!!!" Mimiru blurted out at the top of her lungs.
He grinned and said "No." At this, Mimiru unsheathed her sword and dashed at him. She swong the gigantic blade overhead and brung it down to his head. There was a clang of metal as two swords clashed. Mimiru looked at the other Heavy Blade across from her and saw that he was laughing.
"WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING???!?!" She screamed. This made him laugh louder.
"Of course I can speak more than one word! I was just egging you on!" He said and continued to laugh. Mimiru growled as she withdrew her sword. Placing it on her back, she took steps backward.
"What did Helba tell you?" Tsukasa asked, continuing the conversation. The Heavy Blade turned to Tsukasa, suddenly looking serious.
"Well, she told me what happend to Sora. He was.......put comatose by the monster called Skeith." He said, losing all cheerfullness in his voice.
"What!?" The three standing before him gasped in unison.
"It seems that the monster has a uniqe ability that not only kills the player, but puts the real life form in a coma." He said. "And the player cant move in escape because of that damned wand it carries. Anyway, what do you know about the vile beast?" He asked.
"It is after the girl Aura." Tsukasa said.
"Aura, the shining girl. I see." He said. He closed his eyes in thought. "I am sorry but I must leave." He said. "May I ask of your member adresses so I may contact you in the future?" He asked. Tsuksa, Subaru, and a reluctant Mimiru gave him there adress.
"Thank you. Here is mine if you need to contact me." He gave them all his adress. "Farewell!" He yelled as he ran out the door. The trio all looked at the adress in there hands.
Zaber.
A/n: REVIEW PLZ! I DIDNT WRITE THIS FOR NOTHIN!!!! thanks for reading it though!
Good story. Great description.
You were asking about using sama and san. Both are suffixes used at the end of names. -Sama is of high respect, which would be like 'Master'. -San is respect to someone older, or like saying 'Mrs., Mr., or Ms.' -Chan is used for close friends, family
Anyway, great story, and I hope you update soon!
THANK YOU! I had no idea what they ment! Thanks alot!
I wonder what happened to Sora...Maybe he's in a coma or somethin' (Like Orca) An awesome chapter! Update soon!
Umm...I dunno. I think he is in a coma
Another awesome chapter. This really enjoyable to read. I'm still wondering though since you brought Skieth from the game series, are going to bring any of the characters from the game to. Any ways your doing an awesome job, please keep upt the excellent work. I hope you update really soon.
I might.....i dunno yet...hmm mabye
This story looks great. The story and plot seem really intresting. Since you brought Skieth from the game version, are you going to bring Kite, BlackRose, or any others from the game into this story. I think that would be awesome, because I would really like to see how you interact with characters from both series. Any ways it just a suggestion. Your doing an awesome job so far, and really hope you keep up the excellent work. I really hope you update real soon.
*above*
I HATE I HATE I HATE WHEN TSUKASA IS A GIRL!
Im sorry! I need to do that for later purposes! Plz dont stop reading _
Now on with the fic!!!!!! Yay new character!!! I still dont know what class to make him!!!!!! ^_^
Chapter 3: Meeting
Tsukasa reentered the capital of Mac Anu to find Subaru and Mimiru waiting for him.
"Tsukasa! Did we get a responce?" Mimiru asked eagerly.
"Our message was erased...." Tsukasa started.
"What!!?!?!?!" Mimiru exploded in a rage. "ERASED!!! WHY!?!!?
"However..." Tsukasa continued. Mimiru stopped ranting at the sound of this. "There was another message there. The writer instucted us to go to 'DELTA BURSTING PASSED OVER SEA OF SAND.'" They formed a party and entered the keywords. The three gold rings appered above there heads and fell down. As the rings fell, the trio dissapered to the desert of the designated area.
The three freinds entered a desert. Normally, in the old world, they wouldnt mind the heat, but because the new version of "The World" tempature is experiancable. They were luckily near the dungeon, witch was much cooler inside for some reason that was unknown. Mabye to make the level easier to survive. Anyway, they headed to the dungeon to cool off. They ran as fast as they could to the rarly appeling dungeon. As there were no magic portals in the way, they had no problem. As the group desended the griny stairs at the entrance, they saw the flames illuminating the room below. They arraived at the dreary underground, savoring the cooling air. All three were taking deep breaths of air to cool the lungs and clear them of sand. When they were done resting, they entered the room ahead of them. The walls spread into a large room upon entranceand had a walkway spreading from one side to the other. In a room like this, there should be a magic portal contaning a monster or a treasure chest, but there wasnt one. There was however a male heavyblade standing there.
"Hello." Was all he said. He was wearing black robes covering his whole body, his eyes shone of green and brown. His hair was long and grey, hanging low on his broad shoulderpads. He took a step forward and his footsteps made a stoft clank, revealing that the robes were not armor, and just show.
"Shall we get to buissness?" Subaru asked.
"What do you know about what happend to Sora?" Tsukasa asked almost immediatly. His next reply was one word.
"Skeith." He said, his voice darkened by greif and hatred.
"What!?" Tsukasa let out. "How do you know?" He asked. His reply was yet another word.
"Helba." He said. His anwsers were getting on Mimiru`s nerves as Subaru could tell seeing her face twist in annoyance and disgust.
"CAN YOU SAY ANYTHING MORE THAN ONE WORD!!!" Mimiru blurted out at the top of her lungs.
He grinned and said "No." At this, Mimiru unsheathed her sword and dashed at him. She swong the gigantic blade overhead and brung it down to his head. There was a clang of metal as two swords clashed. Mimiru looked at the other Heavy Blade across from her and saw that he was laughing.
"WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING???!?!" She screamed. This made him laugh louder.
"Of course I can speak more than one word! I was just egging you on!" He said and continued to laugh. Mimiru growled as she withdrew her sword. Placing it on her back, she took steps backward.
"What did Helba tell you?" Tsukasa asked, continuing the conversation. The Heavy Blade turned to Tsukasa, suddenly looking serious.
"Well, she told me what happend to Sora. He was.......put comatose by the monster called Skeith." He said, losing all cheerfullness in his voice.
"What!?" The three standing before him gasped in unison.
"It seems that the monster has a uniqe ability that not only kills the player, but puts the real life form in a coma." He said. "And the player cant move in escape because of that damned wand it carries. Anyway, what do you know about the vile beast?" He asked.
"It is after the girl Aura." Tsukasa said.
"Aura, the shining girl. I see." He said. He closed his eyes in thought. "I am sorry but I must leave." He said. "May I ask of your member adresses so I may contact you in the future?" He asked. Tsuksa, Subaru, and a reluctant Mimiru gave him there adress.
"Thank you. Here is mine if you need to contact me." He gave them all his adress. "Farewell!" He yelled as he ran out the door. The trio all looked at the adress in there hands.
Zaber.
A/n: REVIEW PLZ! I DIDNT WRITE THIS FOR NOTHIN!!!! thanks for reading it though!