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"You must remember to stop acting like this!" Alia told the twins, her tone betraying her exasperation.
"Acting like what Aunt?" Ghanima questioned feigning innocence. They strode down the halls of the palace, the three of them, Alia, Ghani and Leto, who, at the moment, was trying to get his coat on, but could not for the life of him get the lapel to sit right.
"Ghani?" He pleaded, making his blue in blue eyes big and sad and unable to resist.
"Oh alright. But one day that wont work with someone, someone, is going to be able to tell you no," She joked, as they caught up to Alia.
"Father hated coats like these to, but I dare say he wouldn't care, so long as grandmother was there." Leto said to them, as they assembled on the palace steps, looking regal and utterly intangible.
"She is a Bene Gesserit! You know what she thinks of us! You must protect yourselves from her!" Alia intoned.
The large guild transport ship descended slowly and majestically before the gathered crowd, a hush settling over the populace. The heavy metal door opened to reveal Lady Jessica in all her splendor, followed closely by Gurney Halleck.
This was what the mob below the steps saw, this was what Alia and Ghanima and Stilgar saw. Leto saw something different.
He saw a girl, dressed in typical fremen clothing, a coppery-red aba (I think that's what they're called in the book), and a light sandy colored burnoose on her abundant dark brown locks. She was walking unnoticed out of the back hatch, where she quickly blended into the crowded court yard. Leto watched her, because he knew her. She was the rogue element of his dreams, his visions had not failed him.
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"You must remember to stop acting like this!" Alia told the twins, her tone betraying her exasperation.
"Acting like what Aunt?" Ghanima questioned feigning innocence. They strode down the halls of the palace, the three of them, Alia, Ghani and Leto, who, at the moment, was trying to get his coat on, but could not for the life of him get the lapel to sit right.
"Ghani?" He pleaded, making his blue in blue eyes big and sad and unable to resist.
"Oh alright. But one day that wont work with someone, someone, is going to be able to tell you no," She joked, as they caught up to Alia.
"Father hated coats like these to, but I dare say he wouldn't care, so long as grandmother was there." Leto said to them, as they assembled on the palace steps, looking regal and utterly intangible.
"She is a Bene Gesserit! You know what she thinks of us! You must protect yourselves from her!" Alia intoned.
The large guild transport ship descended slowly and majestically before the gathered crowd, a hush settling over the populace. The heavy metal door opened to reveal Lady Jessica in all her splendor, followed closely by Gurney Halleck.
This was what the mob below the steps saw, this was what Alia and Ghanima and Stilgar saw. Leto saw something different.
He saw a girl, dressed in typical fremen clothing, a coppery-red aba (I think that's what they're called in the book), and a light sandy colored burnoose on her abundant dark brown locks. She was walking unnoticed out of the back hatch, where she quickly blended into the crowded court yard. Leto watched her, because he knew her. She was the rogue element of his dreams, his visions had not failed him.