I usually leave authors notes to the end but I wanted to reply to "me" well
not me but the reviewer was called "me" anyway I think your right about my
accents. I usually write the whole thing in proper English then go back
over it adding in my own accent (I'm Scottish) but I think the accent is
getting a bit thick even for me and it's starting to sound unreal so I'm
going to tone it down just a little. Oh and gonny means going to. Thanks
luv Jiana!!!
Introductions
After a few hours in the Big Mojo house everyone was starting to get agitated but mainly bored, they had stuck to the original seating plans goodies to the left, baddies to the right and Sarina stuck in the middle with Remy and Mel. "So!" started Mel "You guys are the Brotherhood?" and you're the X-men?" she pointed to each group in turn.
"Well Sheila I'm not in the Brotherhood I'm in the Acolytes with Remy!" grinned the ginger guy sitting sprawled out over two seats his accent was like an extra from "neighbours" or "home and away".
"Whit's the difference?" Sarina asked Remy, she was rapidly regaining her strength and was working some of the knots out of her leg muscles, "must 'ave been the way ah wis lying!" she thought.
"The Acolytes are Magneto's favourites!" scowled the brown haired boy in knuckle-dusters, "I'm Avalanche by the way, but you can call me Lance!"
"I personally like to call him Pain-in-the-ass!" commented the pretty brunette sitting next to Rogue, "I'm Shadowcat, Kitty Pryde!"
"Firefly, Sarina Calquhoun!" (A/N Calquhoun is pronounced Cah-hoon) smiled Sarina shaking Kitty's hand. Sarina smiled Kitty seemed like a nice person, she wondered what her powers were, she was sure Scott had mentioned them.
"It-wasn't-that-last-week-Kitty-we-could-here-you-screamin'-his-name-from- down-stairs!!" Laughed the blonde speed demon, Kitty went pink to the tips of her ears and started to go after him.
"Pietro you man-whore stop like runnin' away!" shouted Kitty, she saw him heading towards her and grinned evilly, she phased her foot through a table and tripped him at the speed he was going he crashed into the breakfast bar leaving a dent.
Everyone just stared for a moment, Sarina's shoulders were shaking wit silent laughter, then she did the one thing she shouldn't have, she looked at Mel. When their eyes met they couldn't hold back their laughter, Sarina rolled off the couch and started to giggle hysterically, Mel doubled over gasping for breath as she laughed, it was contagious and soon the whole room was in fits of uncontrollable laughter.
Then like a chain reaction the Brotherhood and Acolytes realised they were LAUGHING at the same thing as the X-men, unforgivable, the relaxed mood in the room instantly sobered. "So who are the rest of y'?" asked Mel.
"Ah ken Scott, Jean, Rogue n' Remy!" smiled Sarina, "n' ah jist found met Kitty, Lance and Pietro! So who are you?" she pointed to the ginger headed boy.
"I'm Pyro, or St John!" he smiled lifting her hand to his lips and kissing her knuckles gently.
"You've obviously bin hangin' round wi' Remy to long!" commented Sarina.
"I am Nightcrawler but my friends call me Kurt, Kurt Vaghner!" Sarina resisted the urge to reach out and stroke his blue fur it looked so soft.
"You're the fuzzy blue elf that Scott is constantly shoutin' at when I'm on the phone tae 'im!" smiled Sarina.
"I am zat soldier!" he laughed.
The last person to introduce themselves was a boy the same age as Mel and Sarina, he had icy blue eyes, a baby face and dirty blonde hair, Sarina suppressed a smirk he was most definitely Mel's type. "I'm Bobby" he said confidently "but you can call me Ice man!"
"He's definitely givin' me the shivers!" Mel mumbled to Sarina, they shared a sly grin.
"Anybody up fo' a game o' cards?" asked Remy pulling a pack from his trench coat pocket, most of the Brotherhood and Acolytes agreed straight away and the game began. "Ok da game be Poker, five card draw, quick change, five dollar minimum!" Remy started to shuffle and the players gulped they knew he was good but loosing was better than boredom.
By the end of the first hour almost everyone had joined the game except Jean who mumbled something about the immoralities of gambling.
"Who says we make the game a wee bitty more interesting?" asked Mel an innocent look on her face, most of the others agreed, "Who's up f'r strip poker?" everyone stared at her wide mouthed.
"I'm in!" Bobby pulled his chair in closer to the table sitting up a little straighter.
"Me to!" grinned Kitty everyone looked at the valley girl in surprise, she blushed "I've always like, wanted to have a game!" she mumbled.
With Kitty in the others were quick to join with the exception of Rogue who looked as if she really would have joined, she seemed so sad Mel almost regretted mentioning it.
"I forbid you to play!" snapped Jean glaring at Sarina as if it was her fault that the X-men wanted to have a little fun.
"Y' forbid them tae play?" asked Sarina in disbelief, "Whit are y' their mother?" The X-men flinched away slightly from the two girls.
"No! I'm the senior X-man which means I've got a responsibility to them!" seethed Jean her hands clenched into fists.
"Oh come on!!! You're like whit? Two years older than them!! They're no idiots it's only a wee game o' poker!!" Sarina stood up to meet Jean's eyes in defiance she knew Jean had been dying to have a go at her since she had arrived.
"Here we go typical Sarina she shows up turns everything upside down and doesn't give a shit who she hurts in the process!" Jean took a step towards Sarina eyes flashing.
"Come on Jean let it aw out!" Sarina's eye welled slightly with tears.
"Your nothing but a selfish, spoiled little brat! You picked up the same charms as that stupid Cajun and now everyone just loves you well guess what its not working on me!" Jean had broken the sound barrier, Sarina was sure of it their was no way that her voice could go that high naturally.
Then something she had said struck her, and she smirked at Jean, exactly the same way Remy would have. "You know whit Jean y'r right ah do take after Remy, n' that's exactly why ah've only got one thing te say tae y'!" she grinned. And turned away from Jean and, totally Ace Ventura style started to make her ass sing "ASSHOLE AMIA BRING HER TO ME!!!" Jean just stared then stormed away, "Buh Bye!" smirked Sarina.
"Ok who's dealing!" asked Mel smiling.
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Ok that chapter was a little more serious than I thought next chapter is gonna be Romy and the poker game come on tell me what's not to like about the boys getting stripped no no I said nekid!! Justin Nelly moment!
Go on go on go on go on go on go on go on you know u want to review go on!!!
Introductions
After a few hours in the Big Mojo house everyone was starting to get agitated but mainly bored, they had stuck to the original seating plans goodies to the left, baddies to the right and Sarina stuck in the middle with Remy and Mel. "So!" started Mel "You guys are the Brotherhood?" and you're the X-men?" she pointed to each group in turn.
"Well Sheila I'm not in the Brotherhood I'm in the Acolytes with Remy!" grinned the ginger guy sitting sprawled out over two seats his accent was like an extra from "neighbours" or "home and away".
"Whit's the difference?" Sarina asked Remy, she was rapidly regaining her strength and was working some of the knots out of her leg muscles, "must 'ave been the way ah wis lying!" she thought.
"The Acolytes are Magneto's favourites!" scowled the brown haired boy in knuckle-dusters, "I'm Avalanche by the way, but you can call me Lance!"
"I personally like to call him Pain-in-the-ass!" commented the pretty brunette sitting next to Rogue, "I'm Shadowcat, Kitty Pryde!"
"Firefly, Sarina Calquhoun!" (A/N Calquhoun is pronounced Cah-hoon) smiled Sarina shaking Kitty's hand. Sarina smiled Kitty seemed like a nice person, she wondered what her powers were, she was sure Scott had mentioned them.
"It-wasn't-that-last-week-Kitty-we-could-here-you-screamin'-his-name-from- down-stairs!!" Laughed the blonde speed demon, Kitty went pink to the tips of her ears and started to go after him.
"Pietro you man-whore stop like runnin' away!" shouted Kitty, she saw him heading towards her and grinned evilly, she phased her foot through a table and tripped him at the speed he was going he crashed into the breakfast bar leaving a dent.
Everyone just stared for a moment, Sarina's shoulders were shaking wit silent laughter, then she did the one thing she shouldn't have, she looked at Mel. When their eyes met they couldn't hold back their laughter, Sarina rolled off the couch and started to giggle hysterically, Mel doubled over gasping for breath as she laughed, it was contagious and soon the whole room was in fits of uncontrollable laughter.
Then like a chain reaction the Brotherhood and Acolytes realised they were LAUGHING at the same thing as the X-men, unforgivable, the relaxed mood in the room instantly sobered. "So who are the rest of y'?" asked Mel.
"Ah ken Scott, Jean, Rogue n' Remy!" smiled Sarina, "n' ah jist found met Kitty, Lance and Pietro! So who are you?" she pointed to the ginger headed boy.
"I'm Pyro, or St John!" he smiled lifting her hand to his lips and kissing her knuckles gently.
"You've obviously bin hangin' round wi' Remy to long!" commented Sarina.
"I am Nightcrawler but my friends call me Kurt, Kurt Vaghner!" Sarina resisted the urge to reach out and stroke his blue fur it looked so soft.
"You're the fuzzy blue elf that Scott is constantly shoutin' at when I'm on the phone tae 'im!" smiled Sarina.
"I am zat soldier!" he laughed.
The last person to introduce themselves was a boy the same age as Mel and Sarina, he had icy blue eyes, a baby face and dirty blonde hair, Sarina suppressed a smirk he was most definitely Mel's type. "I'm Bobby" he said confidently "but you can call me Ice man!"
"He's definitely givin' me the shivers!" Mel mumbled to Sarina, they shared a sly grin.
"Anybody up fo' a game o' cards?" asked Remy pulling a pack from his trench coat pocket, most of the Brotherhood and Acolytes agreed straight away and the game began. "Ok da game be Poker, five card draw, quick change, five dollar minimum!" Remy started to shuffle and the players gulped they knew he was good but loosing was better than boredom.
By the end of the first hour almost everyone had joined the game except Jean who mumbled something about the immoralities of gambling.
"Who says we make the game a wee bitty more interesting?" asked Mel an innocent look on her face, most of the others agreed, "Who's up f'r strip poker?" everyone stared at her wide mouthed.
"I'm in!" Bobby pulled his chair in closer to the table sitting up a little straighter.
"Me to!" grinned Kitty everyone looked at the valley girl in surprise, she blushed "I've always like, wanted to have a game!" she mumbled.
With Kitty in the others were quick to join with the exception of Rogue who looked as if she really would have joined, she seemed so sad Mel almost regretted mentioning it.
"I forbid you to play!" snapped Jean glaring at Sarina as if it was her fault that the X-men wanted to have a little fun.
"Y' forbid them tae play?" asked Sarina in disbelief, "Whit are y' their mother?" The X-men flinched away slightly from the two girls.
"No! I'm the senior X-man which means I've got a responsibility to them!" seethed Jean her hands clenched into fists.
"Oh come on!!! You're like whit? Two years older than them!! They're no idiots it's only a wee game o' poker!!" Sarina stood up to meet Jean's eyes in defiance she knew Jean had been dying to have a go at her since she had arrived.
"Here we go typical Sarina she shows up turns everything upside down and doesn't give a shit who she hurts in the process!" Jean took a step towards Sarina eyes flashing.
"Come on Jean let it aw out!" Sarina's eye welled slightly with tears.
"Your nothing but a selfish, spoiled little brat! You picked up the same charms as that stupid Cajun and now everyone just loves you well guess what its not working on me!" Jean had broken the sound barrier, Sarina was sure of it their was no way that her voice could go that high naturally.
Then something she had said struck her, and she smirked at Jean, exactly the same way Remy would have. "You know whit Jean y'r right ah do take after Remy, n' that's exactly why ah've only got one thing te say tae y'!" she grinned. And turned away from Jean and, totally Ace Ventura style started to make her ass sing "ASSHOLE AMIA BRING HER TO ME!!!" Jean just stared then stormed away, "Buh Bye!" smirked Sarina.
"Ok who's dealing!" asked Mel smiling.
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Ok that chapter was a little more serious than I thought next chapter is gonna be Romy and the poker game come on tell me what's not to like about the boys getting stripped no no I said nekid!! Justin Nelly moment!
Go on go on go on go on go on go on go on you know u want to review go on!!!