A New X-Man, Chapter 2
Disclaimer: I don't own the X-Men. The only thing I do own is Mary-Sue Helena, which is a sad, sad accomplishment indeed.
A/N: Hey! I know I said I was finished, but I lied! I felt like writing more on this; maybe it'll help me with my writer's block. Anyways, reviews!
Bri Yami-neko- (looks suspiciously at aforementioned notebooks) I'm kidding, really. Thank you so much, you were my first ever review (! starched-undergarments- (laughs maniacally and takes out bat) With pleasure. ninja- More positive feedback! I feel so loved! Ellina- Yeah, that's a popular one too, but there's been a HUGE influx of "I like you the way you are" Mary Sue stories. Grrrrrr. Thanks for the Kudos! Relwarc- Heh heh heh, same here. Apteryx- LOL ( StormHeart- (blush) Jaganashi- Yay! I inspired laughter! Hehe, cheers, mate!
On with the story.
I sighed with relief and pushed in the keyboard. As soon as I turned my back, something popped up on the computer out of the corner of my eye. I whipped around to see that "A New X-Man" had come back to the computer screen.
"What the hell?" I shrieked, pushing 'delete' over and over until a message popped up on the screen.
"Warning: Windows has performed a fatal error and will be shut down. Any document created in the past 48 hours will be terminated." I gave a little yelp of triumph. Thank God for typical Windows. So what if my Biology essay had probably been erased? I had gotten rid of Mary Sue Helena forever. I started the computer back up. I was going to have to do my report again. As soon as I got to the main screen, my heart stopped.
"A New X-Man (Document Recovered)" I let out an indignant string of curse words and slammed my fist on the computer desk. If I was going to get rid of Mary Sue Helena, I was going to have to complete the story. But if they thought I was going to complete it in typical Mary Sue fashion, they were mistaken.
Helena leaned in to kiss Kurt, and then pulled away, horrorstruck. "I can't!" she screamed, running off down the hall sobbing. "Right," I mumbled, "we were here." Helena ran into her room and shut the door, sobbing hysterically. Then, somehow she fell asleep. I nodded to myself. This was the part where she has a nightmare about her tragic past and her screams awake her love interest, who comes in to comfort her. But being the author, I can do what I want. So if I want the mansion's walls to be soundproof, it's done. "No, no!" screeched Helena, hyperventilating. "Stop! No! Mother! Father!" She let out an earsplitting scream. But everyone in the mansion was still fast asleep. I smiled sadistically as she thrashed around in her blankets, still screaming bloody murder. Her face was contorted and bright red. She was bound to lose her voice or something soon. She woke up, still screaming and looking rather annoyed at not being comforted by Kurt. She ran down the halls, still screaming, and knocking over everything she saw. I grinned at the computer screen. The soundproofing was working great. Finally, after breaking all the dishes in the kitchen, Helena figured out what she needed to do. She went into Kurt's room to scream. But something happened she wasn't counting on. Her voice gave out.
A/N: Umm, so, what did you think? Should I just end it here? Review if you want to, but if you flame me, leave your e-mail so I can send a thank-you virus. Have a nice day ( Deepest love and affection, Helena
Disclaimer: I don't own the X-Men. The only thing I do own is Mary-Sue Helena, which is a sad, sad accomplishment indeed.
A/N: Hey! I know I said I was finished, but I lied! I felt like writing more on this; maybe it'll help me with my writer's block. Anyways, reviews!
Bri Yami-neko- (looks suspiciously at aforementioned notebooks) I'm kidding, really. Thank you so much, you were my first ever review (! starched-undergarments- (laughs maniacally and takes out bat) With pleasure. ninja- More positive feedback! I feel so loved! Ellina- Yeah, that's a popular one too, but there's been a HUGE influx of "I like you the way you are" Mary Sue stories. Grrrrrr. Thanks for the Kudos! Relwarc- Heh heh heh, same here. Apteryx- LOL ( StormHeart- (blush) Jaganashi- Yay! I inspired laughter! Hehe, cheers, mate!
On with the story.
I sighed with relief and pushed in the keyboard. As soon as I turned my back, something popped up on the computer out of the corner of my eye. I whipped around to see that "A New X-Man" had come back to the computer screen.
"What the hell?" I shrieked, pushing 'delete' over and over until a message popped up on the screen.
"Warning: Windows has performed a fatal error and will be shut down. Any document created in the past 48 hours will be terminated." I gave a little yelp of triumph. Thank God for typical Windows. So what if my Biology essay had probably been erased? I had gotten rid of Mary Sue Helena forever. I started the computer back up. I was going to have to do my report again. As soon as I got to the main screen, my heart stopped.
"A New X-Man (Document Recovered)" I let out an indignant string of curse words and slammed my fist on the computer desk. If I was going to get rid of Mary Sue Helena, I was going to have to complete the story. But if they thought I was going to complete it in typical Mary Sue fashion, they were mistaken.
Helena leaned in to kiss Kurt, and then pulled away, horrorstruck. "I can't!" she screamed, running off down the hall sobbing. "Right," I mumbled, "we were here." Helena ran into her room and shut the door, sobbing hysterically. Then, somehow she fell asleep. I nodded to myself. This was the part where she has a nightmare about her tragic past and her screams awake her love interest, who comes in to comfort her. But being the author, I can do what I want. So if I want the mansion's walls to be soundproof, it's done. "No, no!" screeched Helena, hyperventilating. "Stop! No! Mother! Father!" She let out an earsplitting scream. But everyone in the mansion was still fast asleep. I smiled sadistically as she thrashed around in her blankets, still screaming bloody murder. Her face was contorted and bright red. She was bound to lose her voice or something soon. She woke up, still screaming and looking rather annoyed at not being comforted by Kurt. She ran down the halls, still screaming, and knocking over everything she saw. I grinned at the computer screen. The soundproofing was working great. Finally, after breaking all the dishes in the kitchen, Helena figured out what she needed to do. She went into Kurt's room to scream. But something happened she wasn't counting on. Her voice gave out.
A/N: Umm, so, what did you think? Should I just end it here? Review if you want to, but if you flame me, leave your e-mail so I can send a thank-you virus. Have a nice day ( Deepest love and affection, Helena