A New X-Man: Chapter 6
Disclaimer: You know the drill. A/N: Hey everyone! Sorry for the no updates, I've been on vacation, and then school started. Pity me! Ahem. REVIEWS! Ayane: Hehehe. Jen: Thanks! I did have fun, all those crazy New Englanders. Roguehobbit: LOL, I agree with you there. That would be pretty traumatizing. Lady-q: (Joins you in evil laughter) Muahahahahahaahha! Cough cough. Hey, great idea, I'll use it for this chapter! Thanks! LeDiz: Yay! I'm being hailed! OK, I'm done. Thank you for all your nice reviews! I feel so loved! Silver Queen: Oh don't worry; she might just yet do that. Raven the Dark Angel: (Squeals and returns high-five.) Good to know I'm doing something right! Thank you so much! ONWARD TO THE LAST CHAPTER! THANKS TO ALL MY GREAT REVIEWERS, I LOVE YOU ALL! (big hug to all reviewers) Those of you who stuck with the story, great work! Those of you who just found it, great work to you too!
I was going to have to end it. Mary-Sue Helena was driving me completely insane. I couldn't eat or sleep without hearing her shrill voice in my head, shrieking about her tragic past. Plus I still had a biology report due the next day. I was going to have to end it in typical Mary-Sue fashion: rushed, corny, and completely illogical.
Mary-Sue Helena looked tearfully out on the city. "I have to end it," she whispered. She somehow used her infinite powers to open up a gateway to suck the earth into the bowels of hell.
I would have gone back to edit that sentence, but I couldn't anymore.
Anyways, the X-Men came running up to the top of the building. "Don't do it, Helena!" shouted Jean. "Helena, my sister, you mustn't! What have the humans done to you? You can tell me, I'm your sister!"
"Jean," said Helena, "the humans ruined my life. They." Unfortunately (or luckily), a fierce gust of wind drowned out Helena's voice, and also uprooted a small tree, which hit Jean in the head, knocking her off the building and into hell.
I stopped and pondered for a moment. No, I'd let Jean live. Sorry, Scott fans.
Jean did not fall into hell, but rather fell off the building on her head and was knocked out for the remainder of the story. "Nooooooooooooo!" yelled Helena. "My sister, oh, what have I done?"
"Helena, you have to stop it! You can't let the world end!" screamed Kurt.
"You're right, Kurt. I mustn't kill the humans; I forgive them for what they've done. I must jump into the vortex, because somehow that will stop it. Oh Kurt, I love you!" Helena and Kurt kissed deeply. As they kissed, it seemed like the stars and moons came closer and shined a little brighter; it seemed that the city was swirling around them. Which is because the were, as they were being sucked into hell. But Helena ignored them.
"Oh Mother!" she hugged Kitty. "I just want you to be proud of me!" As she burst into a long speech, the X-Men were getting a bit more anxious, as most of the city had been destroyed already. But I knew how to get rid of her. I whispered into Kurt's ear, and he grinned and nodded.
"Helena, I have one last request. Tell me about you're tragic past."
She jumped. As soon as everyone was sure she was gone, the survivors applauded. Finally, Kurt turned to me.
"Who are you?"
I hesitated. "Errr, I'm Helena's twin sister. My name is Helena."
"Wow, you're much prettier than old Helena. Are you a mutant? I bet you could be the most powerful one!" said Professor X. I smiled and blushed, then realized what I was doing. I couldn't start this again! I couldn't become a Mary Sue! I had to stop. If I could just stop typing. Maybe if I just wrote
THE END
Disclaimer: You know the drill. A/N: Hey everyone! Sorry for the no updates, I've been on vacation, and then school started. Pity me! Ahem. REVIEWS! Ayane: Hehehe. Jen: Thanks! I did have fun, all those crazy New Englanders. Roguehobbit: LOL, I agree with you there. That would be pretty traumatizing. Lady-q: (Joins you in evil laughter) Muahahahahahaahha! Cough cough. Hey, great idea, I'll use it for this chapter! Thanks! LeDiz: Yay! I'm being hailed! OK, I'm done. Thank you for all your nice reviews! I feel so loved! Silver Queen: Oh don't worry; she might just yet do that. Raven the Dark Angel: (Squeals and returns high-five.) Good to know I'm doing something right! Thank you so much! ONWARD TO THE LAST CHAPTER! THANKS TO ALL MY GREAT REVIEWERS, I LOVE YOU ALL! (big hug to all reviewers) Those of you who stuck with the story, great work! Those of you who just found it, great work to you too!
I was going to have to end it. Mary-Sue Helena was driving me completely insane. I couldn't eat or sleep without hearing her shrill voice in my head, shrieking about her tragic past. Plus I still had a biology report due the next day. I was going to have to end it in typical Mary-Sue fashion: rushed, corny, and completely illogical.
Mary-Sue Helena looked tearfully out on the city. "I have to end it," she whispered. She somehow used her infinite powers to open up a gateway to suck the earth into the bowels of hell.
I would have gone back to edit that sentence, but I couldn't anymore.
Anyways, the X-Men came running up to the top of the building. "Don't do it, Helena!" shouted Jean. "Helena, my sister, you mustn't! What have the humans done to you? You can tell me, I'm your sister!"
"Jean," said Helena, "the humans ruined my life. They." Unfortunately (or luckily), a fierce gust of wind drowned out Helena's voice, and also uprooted a small tree, which hit Jean in the head, knocking her off the building and into hell.
I stopped and pondered for a moment. No, I'd let Jean live. Sorry, Scott fans.
Jean did not fall into hell, but rather fell off the building on her head and was knocked out for the remainder of the story. "Nooooooooooooo!" yelled Helena. "My sister, oh, what have I done?"
"Helena, you have to stop it! You can't let the world end!" screamed Kurt.
"You're right, Kurt. I mustn't kill the humans; I forgive them for what they've done. I must jump into the vortex, because somehow that will stop it. Oh Kurt, I love you!" Helena and Kurt kissed deeply. As they kissed, it seemed like the stars and moons came closer and shined a little brighter; it seemed that the city was swirling around them. Which is because the were, as they were being sucked into hell. But Helena ignored them.
"Oh Mother!" she hugged Kitty. "I just want you to be proud of me!" As she burst into a long speech, the X-Men were getting a bit more anxious, as most of the city had been destroyed already. But I knew how to get rid of her. I whispered into Kurt's ear, and he grinned and nodded.
"Helena, I have one last request. Tell me about you're tragic past."
She jumped. As soon as everyone was sure she was gone, the survivors applauded. Finally, Kurt turned to me.
"Who are you?"
I hesitated. "Errr, I'm Helena's twin sister. My name is Helena."
"Wow, you're much prettier than old Helena. Are you a mutant? I bet you could be the most powerful one!" said Professor X. I smiled and blushed, then realized what I was doing. I couldn't start this again! I couldn't become a Mary Sue! I had to stop. If I could just stop typing. Maybe if I just wrote
THE END