Thankyou to my reviewers!
Snowflakey- You flatter me beyond words. I still think yours is better. ;) There is strange significance behind the Title. she wishes for a world where she is accepted. but is it worth it? That type of thing.
Krissyfz: I'm glad you like my alarm thing. thankyou for checking my story out! You should continue urs too!
KapOfPipers: Thanx again for reviewing. and the support
Heather: My Chapters are getting longer, no?
Spoiler: I'm human.. Nuff said.
I had another chapter up but I decided to take another route instead with my story. the other one was well. too fast and boring and obnoxious.
Well. here it goes.
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The next day Lily got lost on the way to her first class. Double Potions. with Slytherin. She stepped into class and quickly snuck to the back of the room to the only remaining seat. Professor Spitte, a greasy man with a snarling expression on his otherwise attractive face, didn't seem to notice her come in but did notice the two boys who came in after her. "Mr. Black and Mr. Potter" he spat nastily. "It seems as if you two already began to set your standards for the new school year. Dententions! Both of you." One of the boys, the one with the extremely messy black hair, opened his mouth as if to protest but was interrupted when Spitte said, "No excuses! Ten points from Gryffindor." The both boys rushed into seats in the front row making faces. "-each."
That class was horrible. It ended up that the seat that Lily had taken was surrounded by Slytherins, (how was she to know?), who throughout the entire class kept whispering comments about her. "What is it?" "I believe it's a Mudblood" "Ooh! I've heard of those!" "My father says that they're trash" "Really? It doesn't smell like trash." "What would happen if I touch it?" "Look how stupid it is! It doesn't even realise we're talking about it." Lily had been trying to ignore them but after failing miserably she jumped up as the bell rang. Heading to lunch Lily vowed, 'Let's just see who's stupid when I become the top of all my classes.'
Later that day Lily had transfiguration with the Ravenclaws and Charms with the Hufflepuffs. Those classes passed without incident. but Lily didn't notice. She was too busy making sure that no one would ever have a reason to call her stupid again. Not realizing that no matter what she did nothing would ever stop the Slytherins from picking on her. by the time she would realize that it would be too late.
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Better, no?
Tell me whacha think!! Gimme some luv!!! (you know what I mean. REVIEW!!!)
Snowflakey- You flatter me beyond words. I still think yours is better. ;) There is strange significance behind the Title. she wishes for a world where she is accepted. but is it worth it? That type of thing.
Krissyfz: I'm glad you like my alarm thing. thankyou for checking my story out! You should continue urs too!
KapOfPipers: Thanx again for reviewing. and the support
Heather: My Chapters are getting longer, no?
Spoiler: I'm human.. Nuff said.
I had another chapter up but I decided to take another route instead with my story. the other one was well. too fast and boring and obnoxious.
Well. here it goes.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *- - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - -
The next day Lily got lost on the way to her first class. Double Potions. with Slytherin. She stepped into class and quickly snuck to the back of the room to the only remaining seat. Professor Spitte, a greasy man with a snarling expression on his otherwise attractive face, didn't seem to notice her come in but did notice the two boys who came in after her. "Mr. Black and Mr. Potter" he spat nastily. "It seems as if you two already began to set your standards for the new school year. Dententions! Both of you." One of the boys, the one with the extremely messy black hair, opened his mouth as if to protest but was interrupted when Spitte said, "No excuses! Ten points from Gryffindor." The both boys rushed into seats in the front row making faces. "-each."
That class was horrible. It ended up that the seat that Lily had taken was surrounded by Slytherins, (how was she to know?), who throughout the entire class kept whispering comments about her. "What is it?" "I believe it's a Mudblood" "Ooh! I've heard of those!" "My father says that they're trash" "Really? It doesn't smell like trash." "What would happen if I touch it?" "Look how stupid it is! It doesn't even realise we're talking about it." Lily had been trying to ignore them but after failing miserably she jumped up as the bell rang. Heading to lunch Lily vowed, 'Let's just see who's stupid when I become the top of all my classes.'
Later that day Lily had transfiguration with the Ravenclaws and Charms with the Hufflepuffs. Those classes passed without incident. but Lily didn't notice. She was too busy making sure that no one would ever have a reason to call her stupid again. Not realizing that no matter what she did nothing would ever stop the Slytherins from picking on her. by the time she would realize that it would be too late.
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Better, no?
Tell me whacha think!! Gimme some luv!!! (you know what I mean. REVIEW!!!)