Disclaimer: I don't own the known LotR characters (Legolas, Aragorn
etc...you know what I mean) nor the story, places etc. of LotR. That all
belongs to J.R.R. Tolkien. Neither do I own any part of the movie...but I
guess you knew that already didn't you?
Summary: Again one of those 'Girl gets dropped into M.E.' fics. Two girls wake up in everybody`s favourite world and have no clue how they got there. They have to set in there because nobody knows how to bring them homeand a visit at Rivendell brings along some surprises. Somebody wants to find out about true love. H/OC; Elrohir/OC +Elladan/OC; perhaps L/OC
Author's Note: Hello everybody! This is my first FanFic and my first LotR Fic so please bear with me. I am totally aware that these kind of fic (Girl falls into ME- yadahh, yaddahh...) isn't new, but rather often used. But like I said please bear with me for I like them this way and I promise to make it a little more different ; ....one cannot do more than try. I would be very happy if I got some reviews or/ and critics. I can't make it better when no one tells me what I do wrong. Okay?
P.S. I appologize for possible grammatical mistakes as well errors in language...English is not my mother tongue so I am not that good at it.
1. Chapter: Fear and Confusion
As soon as she came back to the land of the living after a night of restful sleep Em knew that something wasn't right. And not, like 'I'm going to be late'-not right, but *really* not right. *Well that sounds pathetic.* she thought to herself while she tried to figure out why she felt so out of place. That was when she took notice of the rustleling leaves and happy chirping of birds around her. Her eyes snapped open. She blinked a few times to adjust her eyes to the streaming sunlight that pennetrated her eyes as soon as she opened them. *Did I forget to close my window last night?* she pondered while she took in her surroundings.
But what she saw took her by surprise.
If she could have she would have screamed from the shock of waking up to the sight of trees above her although she remembered clearly that she had fallen asleep 'in her bed'. She lay on her back in a soft but slightly damp moss hollow staring unbelievingly at the treetops above her.
*Where the hell am I and how the hell did I get here??* she thought franticly as she scrambeled to her feet and eyed her surroundings warily. There were trees as far as she looked. A clearing. In a forest. *Great. Just great. Get transported into a forest god knows where why don't we.* she thought angrily. When she looked down her body she ralized that she was still in her favourite pyjama and barefeeted, like yesterday evening. A chilly breeze made her shiver. Her pyjama consisted in a shortsleeved shirt and short pants that reached her mid tight; not exactly your clothing of choice in a forest.
At this Em frowned. This was really freaky. If this was one of this weird dreams she had from time to time she would be clad in some luxerious dress or at least some pants, shirts or something ...longer....anything but her bedwear! *So this isn't one of my dreams ....but it has to be. I mean people just don't wake up in a forest in no-man's-land. Right?*
Suddenly the bushes to her right moved, well something 'inside' of them moved, shaking the leaves of it's hideout. *Oh, ouh...* nervously she looked at them, scrutinizing them for any hit of their inhabitant. They moved again....the rusteling noise pennetrated the peaceful silence of the woods.Withher heart beating in her throat she backed away carefully. After some agonizingly slow steps backwards she had finally put enough distance between her and the thicket to let out the breath she didn't realize she'd been holding. But her heart continued to beat a million miles a second despite her struggle for a calmer pace.
What could it be? Did there exist wolves or bears in this wood? *If only I knew where I am ....perhaps then I would know which wild animals stroll through this place.*
Perhaps she should just turn around and run. Run away from this forest and it's creatures. After all there had to be people around her somewhere. She would give anything to be not alone right now. Just somebody...anybody would be welcome if only she wouldn't be alone right now. Then again....she didn't know where she was. It would surely prove to be incautious and careless to threw herself into the -dubious safe -arms of the next best stranger he met. So what is a lost girl in a unknown place to do? Normally one should just stay where he is and wait for rescue, but 'she' didn't know if somebody already missed her, so she couldn't be sure if they even searched for her. *And I'm sure that I already established that I have no clue where I am,....so how would they know where to search for me if I do not know for myself?*
A repeated noise from the bushes shook her out of her reverie. Em could swear that it grew louder every time she heard it. Conclusion -whatever it was that was hidden between it's twigs to move in the thicket, it drew near. Much to close for her liking anyway. *So dude, what if it's only a little rabbit you are scared of ...and you run panicking through the forest....well that will look silly to any passersby for sure!!* Em loathed embarassing herself or drawing attention to her in any form. She was a little shy as one would say.
On the other hand...one was better safe than sorry...
*I'd rather look stupid than have a wolf breath down my neck!* So she decided to run. She nodded to herself in contentment at her desicion when several things happend in fast order.
She was just about to turn around to push of, when a hideous beast broke out of the bushes, throwing itself at her direction with a horrifying scream that froze the blood in her veins and made her heard miss a few beats. For a brief moment all she could do was stare. In all her life she had never -ever -seen something even remotely ugly, terrifying, abominable, disgusting and repulsive. She couldn't even find the fitting words to describe ...'it'. The 'Thing' that attacked her bore a slight resemblance to a human for it was a little taller than a man and moved on two legs. But that was it already. It's skin was dark and dirty, almost black, an partly rotting.The arms, legs and trunk were muscled and bulky ending in big feet and hand, if one could even call them that....they were more like claws. The creature was clad in old, sickening rugs which spread a rotten stench that knocked her nearly of her feet. The mouth was filled with rotten dark fangs. Sharp fangs, ideal to tear the flesh of humans into pieces. But the most scaring part were it's eyes. These eyes would haunt her in her dreams to come; dark red, menacing and full with hatred at every living being in this world. It were those two hatefull orbs which brought her back to the present. Without thinking she spun around to flee when an arrow whizzed past her, missing her right ear by an inch. That made her bolt awy to the right afraid that the next arrow would hit her.
She ran through the forest as if the devil was after her and -in a way -he was for she could hear more of the beasts come out of their hideouts to chase her through the forest. The angry roars and commanding yells nearly made her falter. She ran and ran never looking behind her, to scared that when her eyes fell on the monsters again it would be so shocking she wouldn't be able to continue.
After a few minutes her breathing became ragged, but she didn't slow down for them to catch her. She couldn't have stopped if she wanted to but carried on shooting over the ground dodging trees, stumbling over roots and holes in the ground; scratching, cutting her legs and arms in the process. But Em didn't take notice of this, she just continued running for her life. Even after her knees nearly buckled under her weight the adrenaline and fear in her wouldn't let her body slow down.
Inside her mind was flooded with questions. What the hell had that been? There didn't exist any creature even close to what she'd seen ....of that she was sure. They would have been hunted down as soon as they were discovered. So 'what' was it? Aliens? Acctually Em didn't believe in them but this...
Or had it been a failed experiment? A gene experiment perhaps? Well it certainly looked failed! But why did they let it hunt in the wilderness, away from his cell where it belonged??? Could anyone be that irresponsible?
Through her frantic thoughts the girl slowed down because she just couldn't take more. Her lungs burned from lack of oxygen and she greedily gulped for air. She stopped next to a decayed log and sank to her knees leaning aggainst it. She closed her eyes, her breathig still heavy and ragged, when she heard a noise behind her. It wasn't much but it send her leaping to her feet dashing forward again. Her heart hammered inside of her chest because of exhaustion and cold fear. They were still following her! The fear grew with every step she made sending her thoughts twirling senseless in her head. She could only think of one thing. Running. Away. Away from these creatures, the srange forest, flying arrows....and these eyes! She quickly shut her eyes aggainst the terror inside her but hot tears found their way down her cheeks and neck, blurring her vision.
Suddenly she tripped over something and at once hot pain streamed trough her left ankle and made her gasp. Looking back she saw that she had tripped over a root. Carefully the girl touched the hurt limb wincing when a new wave of pain made her way through her body, inviting more tears. There was no way that she would be able to continue her path with a sprained (if she was lucky) ankle.
Just then, out of nowhere, a man dropped from a low branch a few feet away....
...And scared her half to death.
Again her exausted heart failed a few beats before beating even faster. Her fear was nearly choking her now making her shiver uncontrollably. That was when she noticed the bow in his hand.
Bow.
Arrows!
Images of the incident back in the clearing came rushing back to her, flashing before her eyes and doubling her fear. With pure panic in her eyes she scrambled to her feet, stumbling backwards and whimpering faintly as the burning pain remembered her of her wounded ankle. She fell back to the ground still crawling backwards until her back came up aggainst a tree trunk.
The man made one step toward her, preparing to speak, but stopped as soon as he saw her reaction. Em whimpered again and rolled herself into a tight ball, her back still aggainst the trunk. Fearful she closed her eyes, still crying , waiting for the inevitable....
Well what do you think? Any possibility that this story might please somebody? Tell me! I have already written some of the next chapters, but I would like some feedback first. This way I know what I can improve and you get a better story.
Thanks, NightLight4
Summary: Again one of those 'Girl gets dropped into M.E.' fics. Two girls wake up in everybody`s favourite world and have no clue how they got there. They have to set in there because nobody knows how to bring them homeand a visit at Rivendell brings along some surprises. Somebody wants to find out about true love. H/OC; Elrohir/OC +Elladan/OC; perhaps L/OC
Author's Note: Hello everybody! This is my first FanFic and my first LotR Fic so please bear with me. I am totally aware that these kind of fic (Girl falls into ME- yadahh, yaddahh...) isn't new, but rather often used. But like I said please bear with me for I like them this way and I promise to make it a little more different ; ....one cannot do more than try. I would be very happy if I got some reviews or/ and critics. I can't make it better when no one tells me what I do wrong. Okay?
P.S. I appologize for possible grammatical mistakes as well errors in language...English is not my mother tongue so I am not that good at it.
1. Chapter: Fear and Confusion
As soon as she came back to the land of the living after a night of restful sleep Em knew that something wasn't right. And not, like 'I'm going to be late'-not right, but *really* not right. *Well that sounds pathetic.* she thought to herself while she tried to figure out why she felt so out of place. That was when she took notice of the rustleling leaves and happy chirping of birds around her. Her eyes snapped open. She blinked a few times to adjust her eyes to the streaming sunlight that pennetrated her eyes as soon as she opened them. *Did I forget to close my window last night?* she pondered while she took in her surroundings.
But what she saw took her by surprise.
If she could have she would have screamed from the shock of waking up to the sight of trees above her although she remembered clearly that she had fallen asleep 'in her bed'. She lay on her back in a soft but slightly damp moss hollow staring unbelievingly at the treetops above her.
*Where the hell am I and how the hell did I get here??* she thought franticly as she scrambeled to her feet and eyed her surroundings warily. There were trees as far as she looked. A clearing. In a forest. *Great. Just great. Get transported into a forest god knows where why don't we.* she thought angrily. When she looked down her body she ralized that she was still in her favourite pyjama and barefeeted, like yesterday evening. A chilly breeze made her shiver. Her pyjama consisted in a shortsleeved shirt and short pants that reached her mid tight; not exactly your clothing of choice in a forest.
At this Em frowned. This was really freaky. If this was one of this weird dreams she had from time to time she would be clad in some luxerious dress or at least some pants, shirts or something ...longer....anything but her bedwear! *So this isn't one of my dreams ....but it has to be. I mean people just don't wake up in a forest in no-man's-land. Right?*
Suddenly the bushes to her right moved, well something 'inside' of them moved, shaking the leaves of it's hideout. *Oh, ouh...* nervously she looked at them, scrutinizing them for any hit of their inhabitant. They moved again....the rusteling noise pennetrated the peaceful silence of the woods.Withher heart beating in her throat she backed away carefully. After some agonizingly slow steps backwards she had finally put enough distance between her and the thicket to let out the breath she didn't realize she'd been holding. But her heart continued to beat a million miles a second despite her struggle for a calmer pace.
What could it be? Did there exist wolves or bears in this wood? *If only I knew where I am ....perhaps then I would know which wild animals stroll through this place.*
Perhaps she should just turn around and run. Run away from this forest and it's creatures. After all there had to be people around her somewhere. She would give anything to be not alone right now. Just somebody...anybody would be welcome if only she wouldn't be alone right now. Then again....she didn't know where she was. It would surely prove to be incautious and careless to threw herself into the -dubious safe -arms of the next best stranger he met. So what is a lost girl in a unknown place to do? Normally one should just stay where he is and wait for rescue, but 'she' didn't know if somebody already missed her, so she couldn't be sure if they even searched for her. *And I'm sure that I already established that I have no clue where I am,....so how would they know where to search for me if I do not know for myself?*
A repeated noise from the bushes shook her out of her reverie. Em could swear that it grew louder every time she heard it. Conclusion -whatever it was that was hidden between it's twigs to move in the thicket, it drew near. Much to close for her liking anyway. *So dude, what if it's only a little rabbit you are scared of ...and you run panicking through the forest....well that will look silly to any passersby for sure!!* Em loathed embarassing herself or drawing attention to her in any form. She was a little shy as one would say.
On the other hand...one was better safe than sorry...
*I'd rather look stupid than have a wolf breath down my neck!* So she decided to run. She nodded to herself in contentment at her desicion when several things happend in fast order.
She was just about to turn around to push of, when a hideous beast broke out of the bushes, throwing itself at her direction with a horrifying scream that froze the blood in her veins and made her heard miss a few beats. For a brief moment all she could do was stare. In all her life she had never -ever -seen something even remotely ugly, terrifying, abominable, disgusting and repulsive. She couldn't even find the fitting words to describe ...'it'. The 'Thing' that attacked her bore a slight resemblance to a human for it was a little taller than a man and moved on two legs. But that was it already. It's skin was dark and dirty, almost black, an partly rotting.The arms, legs and trunk were muscled and bulky ending in big feet and hand, if one could even call them that....they were more like claws. The creature was clad in old, sickening rugs which spread a rotten stench that knocked her nearly of her feet. The mouth was filled with rotten dark fangs. Sharp fangs, ideal to tear the flesh of humans into pieces. But the most scaring part were it's eyes. These eyes would haunt her in her dreams to come; dark red, menacing and full with hatred at every living being in this world. It were those two hatefull orbs which brought her back to the present. Without thinking she spun around to flee when an arrow whizzed past her, missing her right ear by an inch. That made her bolt awy to the right afraid that the next arrow would hit her.
She ran through the forest as if the devil was after her and -in a way -he was for she could hear more of the beasts come out of their hideouts to chase her through the forest. The angry roars and commanding yells nearly made her falter. She ran and ran never looking behind her, to scared that when her eyes fell on the monsters again it would be so shocking she wouldn't be able to continue.
After a few minutes her breathing became ragged, but she didn't slow down for them to catch her. She couldn't have stopped if she wanted to but carried on shooting over the ground dodging trees, stumbling over roots and holes in the ground; scratching, cutting her legs and arms in the process. But Em didn't take notice of this, she just continued running for her life. Even after her knees nearly buckled under her weight the adrenaline and fear in her wouldn't let her body slow down.
Inside her mind was flooded with questions. What the hell had that been? There didn't exist any creature even close to what she'd seen ....of that she was sure. They would have been hunted down as soon as they were discovered. So 'what' was it? Aliens? Acctually Em didn't believe in them but this...
Or had it been a failed experiment? A gene experiment perhaps? Well it certainly looked failed! But why did they let it hunt in the wilderness, away from his cell where it belonged??? Could anyone be that irresponsible?
Through her frantic thoughts the girl slowed down because she just couldn't take more. Her lungs burned from lack of oxygen and she greedily gulped for air. She stopped next to a decayed log and sank to her knees leaning aggainst it. She closed her eyes, her breathig still heavy and ragged, when she heard a noise behind her. It wasn't much but it send her leaping to her feet dashing forward again. Her heart hammered inside of her chest because of exhaustion and cold fear. They were still following her! The fear grew with every step she made sending her thoughts twirling senseless in her head. She could only think of one thing. Running. Away. Away from these creatures, the srange forest, flying arrows....and these eyes! She quickly shut her eyes aggainst the terror inside her but hot tears found their way down her cheeks and neck, blurring her vision.
Suddenly she tripped over something and at once hot pain streamed trough her left ankle and made her gasp. Looking back she saw that she had tripped over a root. Carefully the girl touched the hurt limb wincing when a new wave of pain made her way through her body, inviting more tears. There was no way that she would be able to continue her path with a sprained (if she was lucky) ankle.
Just then, out of nowhere, a man dropped from a low branch a few feet away....
...And scared her half to death.
Again her exausted heart failed a few beats before beating even faster. Her fear was nearly choking her now making her shiver uncontrollably. That was when she noticed the bow in his hand.
Bow.
Arrows!
Images of the incident back in the clearing came rushing back to her, flashing before her eyes and doubling her fear. With pure panic in her eyes she scrambled to her feet, stumbling backwards and whimpering faintly as the burning pain remembered her of her wounded ankle. She fell back to the ground still crawling backwards until her back came up aggainst a tree trunk.
The man made one step toward her, preparing to speak, but stopped as soon as he saw her reaction. Em whimpered again and rolled herself into a tight ball, her back still aggainst the trunk. Fearful she closed her eyes, still crying , waiting for the inevitable....
Well what do you think? Any possibility that this story might please somebody? Tell me! I have already written some of the next chapters, but I would like some feedback first. This way I know what I can improve and you get a better story.
Thanks, NightLight4