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From Merry's point of view:
As I ran angrily through the tall trees of Hobbiton edge all thoughts raced through my mind. mostly about Pippin. How could he do that? It was unfair and Pippin knew it. though the main thought that raced through Merry's mind was. if he deserved it.?
I slumped down besides a tree, panting heavily. Looking wide - eyed at the distance I had covered. I had run approximately 1 mile. which was very impressive for a small hobbit like himself. wait till he tell the adults! No! Wait. this is what is wrong with me, I . I keep thinking about ME! No wonder Pippin is going out with Pearl, it's all of my making, it's all my fault. mine.
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Merry sat gazed over the Brandy Buck lake. he picked up a stone beside him without removing his eyes. If any were to see him. it would look as if Merry were to be under a spell. A slight glaze had spread over Merry's eyes. A sorrowful pain coloured his perfect hobbit face. A sudden movement made Merry snap out of the enchantment and his head turned around sharply. A pained expression followed when Merry saw no one to follow the sound. It was clear that Merry was in a deep thought and wanted to be left alone.
From Merry's point of view:
As I ran angrily through the tall trees of Hobbiton edge all thoughts raced through my mind. mostly about Pippin. How could he do that? It was unfair and Pippin knew it. though the main thought that raced through Merry's mind was. if he deserved it.?
I slumped down besides a tree, panting heavily. Looking wide - eyed at the distance I had covered. I had run approximately 1 mile. which was very impressive for a small hobbit like himself. wait till he tell the adults! No! Wait. this is what is wrong with me, I . I keep thinking about ME! No wonder Pippin is going out with Pearl, it's all of my making, it's all my fault. mine.
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Merry sat gazed over the Brandy Buck lake. he picked up a stone beside him without removing his eyes. If any were to see him. it would look as if Merry were to be under a spell. A slight glaze had spread over Merry's eyes. A sorrowful pain coloured his perfect hobbit face. A sudden movement made Merry snap out of the enchantment and his head turned around sharply. A pained expression followed when Merry saw no one to follow the sound. It was clear that Merry was in a deep thought and wanted to be left alone.