Okay, for the last time, I own nothing of Harry Potter, except the plot I
made up for this story. J.K. Rowling invented this wonderful Harry Potter
universe; I'm just using it for enjoyment.
Reviews
Toxiclovel ~ Yeah, I had to put in some misery for Cho; it wouldn't be a good story otherwise.
Akira() ~ Thanks, and I'm writing more right here! Lol
I Love Cho ~ I love Cho too. Anyway, thanks. I'm hoping to get Harry's morph into the midnight unicorn in this chapter or next. Hope you like the upcoming chapters.
Joe ~ Thanks, yeah, I've kinda realized it is unbelievable, but I will make up for it a little later.
Slate07 ~ Alright, thanks, I'm a first time writer and I do truly appreciate the constructive criticism. I do know that I made it unbelievable, but it will be explained a bit later.
Indignal ~ We must think the same because that's why I put in the rape, and also because what story is good with Cho getting raped or having some kind of misery.
hehehehe, you don't know who I am. ~ anyway, yeah, here's the post
Thanks for the reviews.
And I'm sorry about the very long delay. There are a few reasons, mainly being a ton of homework and I'm rethinking the plot that is coming up.
I give you chapter 8!
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Chpt 8 ~ The Misery
Sirius and Dumbledore were walking briskly down the corridor toward the Gryffindor Common Room. Sirius was nervous; it was visibly obvious, while Dumbledore was placid as ever. Sirius was worried that Harry had already left to try and save Cho. He hoped to God that he hadn't, otherwise there could be a big problem. It could be a setup.
Dumbledore said the password and entered the Gryffindor tower, seeing Harry coming down his dormitory steps with his invisibility cloak in his hand. "Harry, we know, we're coming to help you, the order has been summoned." Dumbledore said. "How did you know?" Harry asked, slightly bewildered. Neither said anything; Sirius held up the mood pendant, and Harry understood. "We must go now, she's in a lot of pain. It has to be Voldemort!" Harry yelled, forgetting that it was the middle of the night. Dumbledore laughed, then told Harry, "Grab my robes, we're going to find her." Harry grabbed his robes and Dumbledore and Sirius apparated to a place in the forbidden forest, a place that he hadn't ventured to in his mischievous career at Hogwarts.
They walked up to a campfire, outside of a cabin. It looked almost eerily dark. It didn't look right, not at all. The curtains were all drawn closed and the door was closed. The three approached, hoping it wasn't too late. They were ten feet from the door when they heard something they didn't want to hear. They heard a voice bellow "Crucio!", then they heard the scream of a female voice, instantly recognized by Harry as Cho. Harry ran toward the door, while Dumbledore was yelling at him to stop. Harry didn't, and busted down the door, where Voldemort was more than ready. "Ahh, Mr. Potter, I see you decided to join us." Voldemort said, more like rasped. "Heh, I wouldn't join you for anything." Harry said, wondering what would happen next. He didn't think much longer. He heard the yelps of Dumbledore and Sirius as they were hit by magically floating logs. Harry was alone, against Voldemort, more than helpless, now noticing that 5 death eaters were in the corner. He was trapped, like a rat. He drew his wand, knowing it was a worthless attempt. He threw a disarming spell at one of the death eaters, but it missed. Voldemort took the unconscious Cho and levitated her and dropped her on the wood floor, causing Harry to run to her. Voldemort stopped him, beating him physically. "Is that all you got, no face", Harry said, taunting him just to keep him away from her. Voldemort knew this and put a petrifying spell on Harry, causing him to fall to the floor. Voldemort held his wand out, pointing it at Cho. Just then the Order broke in, unpetrifying Harry. He saw that Voldemort was pointing his wand at Cho. Voldemort said those fateful words that scared the hell out of Harry. "AVADA KEDAVRA" Voldemort yelled, but before he finished, Harry got up and ran and dove in front of Cho. Cho regained consciousness just before Harry dove. She saw the green light coming at her, then Harry dive in front of her. The last thing she remembered was thinking, "No, Harry, no, don't die for me, no". Then she blacked out.
Harry felt like he was hit with a ton of bricks, then, he remembered no more.
In the background, the Order was dispensing of the death eaters, while Voldemort disapparated away. Moody, with his magical eye, saw what Harry did behind him. He tried to stop him, but it was no luck.
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A/N well, there's chapter 8. Sorry about the cliffy and the short post, I'm hoping to get more reviews to continue. Thanks for reading, and spread the word.
Reviews
Toxiclovel ~ Yeah, I had to put in some misery for Cho; it wouldn't be a good story otherwise.
Akira() ~ Thanks, and I'm writing more right here! Lol
I Love Cho ~ I love Cho too. Anyway, thanks. I'm hoping to get Harry's morph into the midnight unicorn in this chapter or next. Hope you like the upcoming chapters.
Joe ~ Thanks, yeah, I've kinda realized it is unbelievable, but I will make up for it a little later.
Slate07 ~ Alright, thanks, I'm a first time writer and I do truly appreciate the constructive criticism. I do know that I made it unbelievable, but it will be explained a bit later.
Indignal ~ We must think the same because that's why I put in the rape, and also because what story is good with Cho getting raped or having some kind of misery.
hehehehe, you don't know who I am. ~ anyway, yeah, here's the post
Thanks for the reviews.
And I'm sorry about the very long delay. There are a few reasons, mainly being a ton of homework and I'm rethinking the plot that is coming up.
I give you chapter 8!
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Chpt 8 ~ The Misery
Sirius and Dumbledore were walking briskly down the corridor toward the Gryffindor Common Room. Sirius was nervous; it was visibly obvious, while Dumbledore was placid as ever. Sirius was worried that Harry had already left to try and save Cho. He hoped to God that he hadn't, otherwise there could be a big problem. It could be a setup.
Dumbledore said the password and entered the Gryffindor tower, seeing Harry coming down his dormitory steps with his invisibility cloak in his hand. "Harry, we know, we're coming to help you, the order has been summoned." Dumbledore said. "How did you know?" Harry asked, slightly bewildered. Neither said anything; Sirius held up the mood pendant, and Harry understood. "We must go now, she's in a lot of pain. It has to be Voldemort!" Harry yelled, forgetting that it was the middle of the night. Dumbledore laughed, then told Harry, "Grab my robes, we're going to find her." Harry grabbed his robes and Dumbledore and Sirius apparated to a place in the forbidden forest, a place that he hadn't ventured to in his mischievous career at Hogwarts.
They walked up to a campfire, outside of a cabin. It looked almost eerily dark. It didn't look right, not at all. The curtains were all drawn closed and the door was closed. The three approached, hoping it wasn't too late. They were ten feet from the door when they heard something they didn't want to hear. They heard a voice bellow "Crucio!", then they heard the scream of a female voice, instantly recognized by Harry as Cho. Harry ran toward the door, while Dumbledore was yelling at him to stop. Harry didn't, and busted down the door, where Voldemort was more than ready. "Ahh, Mr. Potter, I see you decided to join us." Voldemort said, more like rasped. "Heh, I wouldn't join you for anything." Harry said, wondering what would happen next. He didn't think much longer. He heard the yelps of Dumbledore and Sirius as they were hit by magically floating logs. Harry was alone, against Voldemort, more than helpless, now noticing that 5 death eaters were in the corner. He was trapped, like a rat. He drew his wand, knowing it was a worthless attempt. He threw a disarming spell at one of the death eaters, but it missed. Voldemort took the unconscious Cho and levitated her and dropped her on the wood floor, causing Harry to run to her. Voldemort stopped him, beating him physically. "Is that all you got, no face", Harry said, taunting him just to keep him away from her. Voldemort knew this and put a petrifying spell on Harry, causing him to fall to the floor. Voldemort held his wand out, pointing it at Cho. Just then the Order broke in, unpetrifying Harry. He saw that Voldemort was pointing his wand at Cho. Voldemort said those fateful words that scared the hell out of Harry. "AVADA KEDAVRA" Voldemort yelled, but before he finished, Harry got up and ran and dove in front of Cho. Cho regained consciousness just before Harry dove. She saw the green light coming at her, then Harry dive in front of her. The last thing she remembered was thinking, "No, Harry, no, don't die for me, no". Then she blacked out.
Harry felt like he was hit with a ton of bricks, then, he remembered no more.
In the background, the Order was dispensing of the death eaters, while Voldemort disapparated away. Moody, with his magical eye, saw what Harry did behind him. He tried to stop him, but it was no luck.
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A/N well, there's chapter 8. Sorry about the cliffy and the short post, I'm hoping to get more reviews to continue. Thanks for reading, and spread the word.