Everybody is fifteen years old. I would like to apologize about my last
story "The Prophocy". Sorry it took me so long to update it and about the
last chapter. So I will try to make this story better.
"So class," said a very old teacher named Ms. Allen "the way plants produce are..." She was cut off there. The bell rang at Retroville High School and Jimmy and Cindy was rushing to their next class.
"You are not going to beat me this time Neutron," said Cindy running down the hall.
"Yes I'm am Vortex just like last time," said Jimmy about five feet ahead of her. Just then Jimmy slipped on a wet floor and hit his head hard. Cindy ran towards him.
"Jimmy are you all right?" she asked, "Can someone get an ambulance here."
Jimmy was knocked out cold. After five minutes the ambulance came and put Jimmy on a stretcher and put him in the ambulance. Cindy rode with him. The arrived at the hospital very quickly. They put him in a hospital bed on the seventh floor. Cindy was with him the whole time. After half a day in being in a comma, Jimmy woke up. When Cindy saw this she hugged him tight and started talking.
"Don't scare me like that again, Neutron."
"Whose Neutron?"
"You're Neutron."
"No I'm not," said Jimmy angrily "I'm Charles. Charles Johnson and I'm from Paris, France."
"No you are not you are James Isaac Neutron and you are from Retroville, Colorado. Oh my god, you must have amnesia."
So how so you like the first chapter. Good or bad. Please review.
"So class," said a very old teacher named Ms. Allen "the way plants produce are..." She was cut off there. The bell rang at Retroville High School and Jimmy and Cindy was rushing to their next class.
"You are not going to beat me this time Neutron," said Cindy running down the hall.
"Yes I'm am Vortex just like last time," said Jimmy about five feet ahead of her. Just then Jimmy slipped on a wet floor and hit his head hard. Cindy ran towards him.
"Jimmy are you all right?" she asked, "Can someone get an ambulance here."
Jimmy was knocked out cold. After five minutes the ambulance came and put Jimmy on a stretcher and put him in the ambulance. Cindy rode with him. The arrived at the hospital very quickly. They put him in a hospital bed on the seventh floor. Cindy was with him the whole time. After half a day in being in a comma, Jimmy woke up. When Cindy saw this she hugged him tight and started talking.
"Don't scare me like that again, Neutron."
"Whose Neutron?"
"You're Neutron."
"No I'm not," said Jimmy angrily "I'm Charles. Charles Johnson and I'm from Paris, France."
"No you are not you are James Isaac Neutron and you are from Retroville, Colorado. Oh my god, you must have amnesia."
So how so you like the first chapter. Good or bad. Please review.