The Spider Evolves
Part II
(Authors note:Set afew weeks after chapter one.I know it doesn't make much sense yet, but bare with. )
Peter walked down the street towards the Daily Bugle, his school Midtown High, had been closed due to a battle Spider-man had against the Green Goblin, Peter felt guilty for wrecking half the school, but at least no one got hurt.
(Well almost no one, poor Professor Warren is still in a coma, thanks to you Pete.) He thought to himself.
Peter walked along in a daze, unconsciously using his spider-sense to avoid being knocked down, then it went into over drive, screaming 'DANGER FROM ABOVE!!' in his head, glancing up, Peter barely got a glimpse of a man dressed in red and black, ducking into an ally he began to change into his Spider-man costume.
Magneto was ready to make his move; he raised a piece of metal off a building and made it into a make-shift microphone.
"PEOPLE OF NEW YORK CITY!" he yelled, "I AM A MUTANT, YOUR NEW MASTER! MY NAME IS...."
Suddenly Magneto couldn't speak, he had some kind of grayish-white substance stuck to his mouth.
"Wait wait, lemme guess..." said a costumed hero in red and blue, the red was covered with webs and had a spider in the middle of his chest.
"You must be 'Revengeful Red', no, no..." he paused "Super Scarlet? um..I know it's the 'Flying Flunk-' OOF!"
The costumed clown was hit in the back by a chunk of metal, he stuck to the side of the building.
"Oooh" he said 'knowingly' "You must be 'Magnet Man'!!, me I'm the amazing..." jump, swing. "The incredible.." dive, punch, swing. "The astonishing Spider-man! or Spidey for short. But that's only to my friends."
Ripping the webbing from his face, Magneto roared, obviously this 'Spider-man' didn't know who he was dealing with.
"You stupid insect!!" Magneto roared "I am Magneto, master of magnetism!"
Spider-man was being bombarded with chunks of very sharp, flying pieces of Metal, but dodging them with ease.
"You know Mags..." Spider-man paused "Can I call you Mags? Anyway Mags, technically it's 'Arachnid' not 'Insect'."
Spider-man jumped from building to building to the roof where he jumped into a wall of solid fat.
"Blubber Boy?" asked Spider-man
Fred Dukes, the blob wasn't impressed, instead he was very angry and he just let himself fall forward yelling, Spider-man dived out the way just in time.
(This is getting stupid.) Thought Peter (First Magneto then this, this...Blob.)
All of a sudden Peter felt the roof begin to shake, and a long slimey tounge wrapped round his arm.
"Hey!" yelled Peter "This is dry clean only!"
Peter pulled the owner of the tounge towards him, it was a scruffy unshaven, unwashed kid who resembled some sort of frog, Peter lifted him up, pulling back a fist.
"Uh...Wazzup yo?" said frog-boy.
"Put Toad down, before Gambit dishes out some real punishment."
"Toad, Gambit and Magneto?" Peter asked still holding up 'The Toad'
"What about Blubber Boy there?"
"His name's The Blob." said a guy with a see-through helmit. "And I'm Avalanche."
Alalanche pointed to a kid in red and yellow "And this is Pyro."
Peter sighed, he had no way out but he was heavily over powered, he was scared and wanted to go home,so he turned to the Blob and said.
"Hey, hey hey!! Say 'I'm gonna crush you like a bug!!' it cracks me up when you bad guys say that!"
Suddenly he could feel his web shooters get lifted into the air, and him along with it.
"I think I've seen your helmet before, Maggy!" Peter said "Now where do you shop? I think I was going to buy one but it didn't go with the rest of my outfit."
"Now Spider-man!" yelled an enraged Magnteo "You will die for your lack of respect, you foolish child!"
Suddenly Magneto was hit by a orange power beam and Peter was freed. He looked to where the beam had come from nad he saw a guy, with blonde hair, in black with a white circle on his chest, he was stood to the left of a guy in orange and black, who was wearing a mask. On the masked mans right was a blue furry guy with a tail and a red V-shape on his black uniform. To the right of blue boy was a girl with brown hair with a white streak at the front dressed in green and black, and to left of the blonde haired kid, was a brown haired girl in blue and black.
The guy in the mask nodded to the blonde kid, "Nice shot Havoc."
Peter was thankful, he had no idea who they where but he decided they were on his side, as he Spider-sense didn't react to them. They all had 'X's on their uniforms somewhere or another.
The masked guy looked up "Now Storm!"
Peter followed his gaze to an african woman with white hair. The skys grew clouded and dark, Peter turned around to face Magnteo now feeling alot more confident.
Magnteo rasied part of the roof right of the building and with hate and vengfulness in his voice he roared. "We'll meet again Wolverine! Tell Charles he can never acomplish his worthless dream!"
And with that he retreated with his lackies riding on the floating roof.
"Uh, thanks." said Peter nervously "Um...um..so what are you guys? the X-Squad or something?"
"We're the X-men, Peter Parker." said the guy in a mask "And we've got an offer for you."
To be continued....
Well what do you think? Is it good, oh and you who likes X-Factor I'm sorry I forgot your pen name... I'll think about doing some stories, who would like to see the Spider-man evolution's adventures. They'll include how Spider-man came to be and the battle before this adventure. But I'll only put them up by demand, so until next time Make Mine Marvel. (I love saying that.)
Part II
(Authors note:Set afew weeks after chapter one.I know it doesn't make much sense yet, but bare with. )
Peter walked down the street towards the Daily Bugle, his school Midtown High, had been closed due to a battle Spider-man had against the Green Goblin, Peter felt guilty for wrecking half the school, but at least no one got hurt.
(Well almost no one, poor Professor Warren is still in a coma, thanks to you Pete.) He thought to himself.
Peter walked along in a daze, unconsciously using his spider-sense to avoid being knocked down, then it went into over drive, screaming 'DANGER FROM ABOVE!!' in his head, glancing up, Peter barely got a glimpse of a man dressed in red and black, ducking into an ally he began to change into his Spider-man costume.
Magneto was ready to make his move; he raised a piece of metal off a building and made it into a make-shift microphone.
"PEOPLE OF NEW YORK CITY!" he yelled, "I AM A MUTANT, YOUR NEW MASTER! MY NAME IS...."
Suddenly Magneto couldn't speak, he had some kind of grayish-white substance stuck to his mouth.
"Wait wait, lemme guess..." said a costumed hero in red and blue, the red was covered with webs and had a spider in the middle of his chest.
"You must be 'Revengeful Red', no, no..." he paused "Super Scarlet? um..I know it's the 'Flying Flunk-' OOF!"
The costumed clown was hit in the back by a chunk of metal, he stuck to the side of the building.
"Oooh" he said 'knowingly' "You must be 'Magnet Man'!!, me I'm the amazing..." jump, swing. "The incredible.." dive, punch, swing. "The astonishing Spider-man! or Spidey for short. But that's only to my friends."
Ripping the webbing from his face, Magneto roared, obviously this 'Spider-man' didn't know who he was dealing with.
"You stupid insect!!" Magneto roared "I am Magneto, master of magnetism!"
Spider-man was being bombarded with chunks of very sharp, flying pieces of Metal, but dodging them with ease.
"You know Mags..." Spider-man paused "Can I call you Mags? Anyway Mags, technically it's 'Arachnid' not 'Insect'."
Spider-man jumped from building to building to the roof where he jumped into a wall of solid fat.
"Blubber Boy?" asked Spider-man
Fred Dukes, the blob wasn't impressed, instead he was very angry and he just let himself fall forward yelling, Spider-man dived out the way just in time.
(This is getting stupid.) Thought Peter (First Magneto then this, this...Blob.)
All of a sudden Peter felt the roof begin to shake, and a long slimey tounge wrapped round his arm.
"Hey!" yelled Peter "This is dry clean only!"
Peter pulled the owner of the tounge towards him, it was a scruffy unshaven, unwashed kid who resembled some sort of frog, Peter lifted him up, pulling back a fist.
"Uh...Wazzup yo?" said frog-boy.
"Put Toad down, before Gambit dishes out some real punishment."
"Toad, Gambit and Magneto?" Peter asked still holding up 'The Toad'
"What about Blubber Boy there?"
"His name's The Blob." said a guy with a see-through helmit. "And I'm Avalanche."
Alalanche pointed to a kid in red and yellow "And this is Pyro."
Peter sighed, he had no way out but he was heavily over powered, he was scared and wanted to go home,so he turned to the Blob and said.
"Hey, hey hey!! Say 'I'm gonna crush you like a bug!!' it cracks me up when you bad guys say that!"
Suddenly he could feel his web shooters get lifted into the air, and him along with it.
"I think I've seen your helmet before, Maggy!" Peter said "Now where do you shop? I think I was going to buy one but it didn't go with the rest of my outfit."
"Now Spider-man!" yelled an enraged Magnteo "You will die for your lack of respect, you foolish child!"
Suddenly Magneto was hit by a orange power beam and Peter was freed. He looked to where the beam had come from nad he saw a guy, with blonde hair, in black with a white circle on his chest, he was stood to the left of a guy in orange and black, who was wearing a mask. On the masked mans right was a blue furry guy with a tail and a red V-shape on his black uniform. To the right of blue boy was a girl with brown hair with a white streak at the front dressed in green and black, and to left of the blonde haired kid, was a brown haired girl in blue and black.
The guy in the mask nodded to the blonde kid, "Nice shot Havoc."
Peter was thankful, he had no idea who they where but he decided they were on his side, as he Spider-sense didn't react to them. They all had 'X's on their uniforms somewhere or another.
The masked guy looked up "Now Storm!"
Peter followed his gaze to an african woman with white hair. The skys grew clouded and dark, Peter turned around to face Magnteo now feeling alot more confident.
Magnteo rasied part of the roof right of the building and with hate and vengfulness in his voice he roared. "We'll meet again Wolverine! Tell Charles he can never acomplish his worthless dream!"
And with that he retreated with his lackies riding on the floating roof.
"Uh, thanks." said Peter nervously "Um...um..so what are you guys? the X-Squad or something?"
"We're the X-men, Peter Parker." said the guy in a mask "And we've got an offer for you."
To be continued....
Well what do you think? Is it good, oh and you who likes X-Factor I'm sorry I forgot your pen name... I'll think about doing some stories, who would like to see the Spider-man evolution's adventures. They'll include how Spider-man came to be and the battle before this adventure. But I'll only put them up by demand, so until next time Make Mine Marvel. (I love saying that.)