Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ/GT so please don't sue me.
Author's Notes: This fic is based upon real life situations which have happened
to my friends and I. It was written awhile ago w/out the dbz character's in it.
I just added the character's where i thought they best fit. This story isn't suitable
for anyone under the age of 15 or 16. If you have constuctive critisim in your reviews
that's fine, i do write for my readers as well as myself. As for the flamer's refrane yourself
from reviewing, i don't enjoy seeing profanity or someone telling me that i'm not talented
enough to be writing fics. Other than that enjoy!!! :p-----
Chapter one
Pan hugged herself trying to keep the nights bitter wind from nipping at her soft pale
skin. She looked beside her at her two bestfriends Bura and Marron, both of their
skin had turned a pinkish color and their blue eyes were watering from the wind.
"Are you guys cold?" Pan asked
Bura rolled her eyes
"Well duh, it's in the mid-forties who wouldn't be cold?"
Marron chuckled at Bura's remark. She was being the royal smart-ass tonight and
had successfully made Pan stop asking such obvious questions.
Bura sighed and stopped walking causing the other two to run into her, knocking her down.
She got up, brushing herself off and pointed to the totaled hover car, tears threatening
to escape her soft blue eyes.
"Isn't that uncle goten's car?" Pan asked
"I think so,"
"Well go find out!" Pan barked causing her friend to jog toward the accident
"Why would Goten be all the way over here?" Marron asked under her breath
"He was suppose to come visit Bura and me today." Pan snapped unattentionally.
She started to walk over to Bura when she heard a blood curdling shriek. Marron ran past
Pan over to Bura, when she saw what had gotten Bura hysterical she turned away to vomit
in a near by bush.
Cautiously Pan continued walking over to the accident, she looked at Bura and who she had in her lap.
She was crying uncontrollably rocking with him back and forth.
"Bura?" she whispered gently as she knelt down beside her placing a hand on
her friend's shoulder, and looked down at her uncle.
"Is he alive?"
"barely." Bura choked "This is all my fault, if i never would have asked him
to come see us he wouldn't be on the brink of death!"
"How's it your fault Bura? Your not the one who wrecked into his car!" Pan said angrily through
clenched teeth.
Bura ignored Pan and took Goten's cell phone out of his pocket only to have a
hand grasp her wrist tightly.
"You're...trying...to...rob...me?" Goten said weakly
Bura screamed and jumped away from him hiding behind Marron .
Pan smirked and looked at him
"No we're not trying to rob you. Leave it to you to crack a joke when you're
lying on the ground seconds from death. Can we use your phone to call an ambulance
for you?"
He looked at his cell phone that laid several feet from his head and gazed at his neice then at
Bura who was slowly making her way back over to him.
Grasping his phone he threw it at Bura hitting her in the head.
"Asshole." Bura muttered while dialing 911.
Within minuets the ambulance arrived and was about to take goten away when one
of the younger paramedic's turned to the girls.
"Which one of you girls, would like to accompany the young man in the ambulance.?"
Pan and Marron both pointed to Bura who was muttering how Goten could be such an
asshole at times.
"Bura!!" Pan yelled "ride with my uncle to the hospital while i fly home to
let me grandpa and dad what has happened."
Bura simply nodded and hopped in the back of the ambulance. She sat on the medical stretcher
with him running her fingers through his unruly, ebony locks. She always had a crush
on Goten ever since she was little, but it wasn't until that moment that she truly realized
exactly how handsome he really was.
Nakaru: so what'd ya think? As i said i revised a bit so i hope it's not too complicated
for ya'll to understand. Ch 2 will come shortly. Please review!!!
Author's Notes: This fic is based upon real life situations which have happened
to my friends and I. It was written awhile ago w/out the dbz character's in it.
I just added the character's where i thought they best fit. This story isn't suitable
for anyone under the age of 15 or 16. If you have constuctive critisim in your reviews
that's fine, i do write for my readers as well as myself. As for the flamer's refrane yourself
from reviewing, i don't enjoy seeing profanity or someone telling me that i'm not talented
enough to be writing fics. Other than that enjoy!!! :p-----
Chapter one
Pan hugged herself trying to keep the nights bitter wind from nipping at her soft pale
skin. She looked beside her at her two bestfriends Bura and Marron, both of their
skin had turned a pinkish color and their blue eyes were watering from the wind.
"Are you guys cold?" Pan asked
Bura rolled her eyes
"Well duh, it's in the mid-forties who wouldn't be cold?"
Marron chuckled at Bura's remark. She was being the royal smart-ass tonight and
had successfully made Pan stop asking such obvious questions.
Bura sighed and stopped walking causing the other two to run into her, knocking her down.
She got up, brushing herself off and pointed to the totaled hover car, tears threatening
to escape her soft blue eyes.
"Isn't that uncle goten's car?" Pan asked
"I think so,"
"Well go find out!" Pan barked causing her friend to jog toward the accident
"Why would Goten be all the way over here?" Marron asked under her breath
"He was suppose to come visit Bura and me today." Pan snapped unattentionally.
She started to walk over to Bura when she heard a blood curdling shriek. Marron ran past
Pan over to Bura, when she saw what had gotten Bura hysterical she turned away to vomit
in a near by bush.
Cautiously Pan continued walking over to the accident, she looked at Bura and who she had in her lap.
She was crying uncontrollably rocking with him back and forth.
"Bura?" she whispered gently as she knelt down beside her placing a hand on
her friend's shoulder, and looked down at her uncle.
"Is he alive?"
"barely." Bura choked "This is all my fault, if i never would have asked him
to come see us he wouldn't be on the brink of death!"
"How's it your fault Bura? Your not the one who wrecked into his car!" Pan said angrily through
clenched teeth.
Bura ignored Pan and took Goten's cell phone out of his pocket only to have a
hand grasp her wrist tightly.
"You're...trying...to...rob...me?" Goten said weakly
Bura screamed and jumped away from him hiding behind Marron .
Pan smirked and looked at him
"No we're not trying to rob you. Leave it to you to crack a joke when you're
lying on the ground seconds from death. Can we use your phone to call an ambulance
for you?"
He looked at his cell phone that laid several feet from his head and gazed at his neice then at
Bura who was slowly making her way back over to him.
Grasping his phone he threw it at Bura hitting her in the head.
"Asshole." Bura muttered while dialing 911.
Within minuets the ambulance arrived and was about to take goten away when one
of the younger paramedic's turned to the girls.
"Which one of you girls, would like to accompany the young man in the ambulance.?"
Pan and Marron both pointed to Bura who was muttering how Goten could be such an
asshole at times.
"Bura!!" Pan yelled "ride with my uncle to the hospital while i fly home to
let me grandpa and dad what has happened."
Bura simply nodded and hopped in the back of the ambulance. She sat on the medical stretcher
with him running her fingers through his unruly, ebony locks. She always had a crush
on Goten ever since she was little, but it wasn't until that moment that she truly realized
exactly how handsome he really was.
Nakaru: so what'd ya think? As i said i revised a bit so i hope it's not too complicated
for ya'll to understand. Ch 2 will come shortly. Please review!!!