This Blog is where I jot notes down on the chapters and what I try to bring out of the charactors and plot in the chapters. If you're a good writer, read the blog too and review on whether i'm able to bring out what I'm trying to. Yep.
10 09 03
- Hhhmmm... seems that Chapters 1, 2, and 3 went quite well without a hitch. Mostly still unfamiliar with the formatting problems but getting used to it!
Chapter 1 was meant as an introduction to show IceRenamon's nature whilst she lived without Ray, always putting up a front and not letting many draw near to her. Heck she even keeps a distance from her seccond-in-command.
Chapter 2 was meant to show her ego and how hurt she was over a simple defeat. COrny yea but the new portal seemed to be less useful than normal portals since it sucks energy from the travellor.
But still we see the 'don't back down from a battle' side of Renamon and the pride she has in her achievements... before getting discouraged that is. Behold, crabby Pokomon!
Chapter 3... not much to say but Renamon realises that during her time away from Ray she has lost trust in her creator's decision making skills. But soon she regains the trust. Also to show how dreadful the monsters can be that Ray resorts to living underground. A bit of Ray's background, and who knows where she gets the money from. A small simple episode with the snake. Mostly Rena... okay Pokomon's desire to protect Ray.
That's about it for now. I really wish I could see some consructive comments and reviews. ANd if it isn't obvious enough, this time they're dealing not with another digimon threat, but a biological threat. AM I screaming for attention? Well sorta.
11 09 03
- Well, I really am supposed to be studying, but just uploaded one chapter.
Chapter 4, Gyo is introduction and IcePokomon doesn't like him. She starts to feel that he is barging on her relationship between Ray and herself. She still doesn't like being a Pokomon and again we see that she bravely tries to defend Ray. By now she isn't so crabby and almost reverting back to her normal personality.
Still no reviews? I'm disappointed. Planning for the next chapter already. Ta...
22 09 03
-PHEW! Most of my exam papers are over save for one paper tomorrow. MCQ, multiple choice questions. I should be able to pass without much difficulty... I think. oh dear. *starts thinking about situation if I fail* fail= die. Anyways, 5th chapter up.
Chapter 5, the three of them march into the disgusting building. I didn't even know my vocab could describe such a revolting place. She ALMOST back to normal. She bravely tries to fight the spaghetti monster but can't find its weakness. Gyo's bullets don't work agaisnt the monster. We see Ray actually recalling her childhood days of battling digimon with Renamon and is able to use cards to aid IcePokomon in battle. Not much of a battle scene yet with the main charactor still in pokomon form. A small vistory but a victory none the less. But still the question remains. Just what monster disappears into dust if it isn't digimon? or is it just a new type of digimon?
25 09 03
Chapter 6, just a chapter on the three of them at Ray's house. A small glimpse of IcePokomon's love for Ray. That sweeling feeling of love actually amkes IcePokomon digivolve suddenly but it catches both of them off guard getting Ray accidentally hurt. Still no idea of how Ray got the smell of blood. But We see the tension between Gyo and IceRenamon rise as they vie for Ray's attention. So happens she wants to be alone when she's hurt, even physically.
10 09 03
- Hhhmmm... seems that Chapters 1, 2, and 3 went quite well without a hitch. Mostly still unfamiliar with the formatting problems but getting used to it!
Chapter 1 was meant as an introduction to show IceRenamon's nature whilst she lived without Ray, always putting up a front and not letting many draw near to her. Heck she even keeps a distance from her seccond-in-command.
Chapter 2 was meant to show her ego and how hurt she was over a simple defeat. COrny yea but the new portal seemed to be less useful than normal portals since it sucks energy from the travellor.
But still we see the 'don't back down from a battle' side of Renamon and the pride she has in her achievements... before getting discouraged that is. Behold, crabby Pokomon!
Chapter 3... not much to say but Renamon realises that during her time away from Ray she has lost trust in her creator's decision making skills. But soon she regains the trust. Also to show how dreadful the monsters can be that Ray resorts to living underground. A bit of Ray's background, and who knows where she gets the money from. A small simple episode with the snake. Mostly Rena... okay Pokomon's desire to protect Ray.
That's about it for now. I really wish I could see some consructive comments and reviews. ANd if it isn't obvious enough, this time they're dealing not with another digimon threat, but a biological threat. AM I screaming for attention? Well sorta.
11 09 03
- Well, I really am supposed to be studying, but just uploaded one chapter.
Chapter 4, Gyo is introduction and IcePokomon doesn't like him. She starts to feel that he is barging on her relationship between Ray and herself. She still doesn't like being a Pokomon and again we see that she bravely tries to defend Ray. By now she isn't so crabby and almost reverting back to her normal personality.
Still no reviews? I'm disappointed. Planning for the next chapter already. Ta...
22 09 03
-PHEW! Most of my exam papers are over save for one paper tomorrow. MCQ, multiple choice questions. I should be able to pass without much difficulty... I think. oh dear. *starts thinking about situation if I fail* fail= die. Anyways, 5th chapter up.
Chapter 5, the three of them march into the disgusting building. I didn't even know my vocab could describe such a revolting place. She ALMOST back to normal. She bravely tries to fight the spaghetti monster but can't find its weakness. Gyo's bullets don't work agaisnt the monster. We see Ray actually recalling her childhood days of battling digimon with Renamon and is able to use cards to aid IcePokomon in battle. Not much of a battle scene yet with the main charactor still in pokomon form. A small vistory but a victory none the less. But still the question remains. Just what monster disappears into dust if it isn't digimon? or is it just a new type of digimon?
25 09 03
Chapter 6, just a chapter on the three of them at Ray's house. A small glimpse of IcePokomon's love for Ray. That sweeling feeling of love actually amkes IcePokomon digivolve suddenly but it catches both of them off guard getting Ray accidentally hurt. Still no idea of how Ray got the smell of blood. But We see the tension between Gyo and IceRenamon rise as they vie for Ray's attention. So happens she wants to be alone when she's hurt, even physically.