Hey, this is maxman I would like to thank shadowstar for the great advice.
I also would like to say the chapters are not going to to be that short
this time. That was really more of an intro. However, thanks so much it has
inspired me to do better this time. Please I need the reviews to fuel my
writing soul.
Chapter 2
"Snake cheer up." "Dave is in a better place I bet." "Yea I guess your right otacon." " I just feel awful that he is dead." "Well I suppose I should cook dinner." "Yea that's a good idea it, it could take way you stress." Otacon said he loved Snakes chicken soup. While Snake, cooked otacon saw something very interesting on the web from one of his informants. "Snake get over NOW!!" "What." Snake and Otacon saw something that gave them all the info they need to find the patriots. " OH MY GOD." "Otacon after we eat we will take my plane and fly to island X.
LATER
The sky was dark and cloudy but it didn't matter they were going to the information about the greatest conspiracy the world has ever known. "Well Snake if our man was right the meeting place for the over there." "I'll take her down."
The Island
"Well this is it." "Lets move." "Freeze!" "Before they could even look to see who held them up there were pistol wiped and knocked out. "Ahhhhhhh my head what happened." moaned snake. "I don't know." They were tied to the wall. But then out of nowhere a masked guard came in." "I do not who you are but you're on government land." blurted the guard. "He picked up drill and said in a few minutes there's gonna so many holes in you boys you will be ready to have flowers planted in you.
How will snake and otacon escape
I do not own the characters konami does so there not mine. I do not own metal gear.
Chapter 2
"Snake cheer up." "Dave is in a better place I bet." "Yea I guess your right otacon." " I just feel awful that he is dead." "Well I suppose I should cook dinner." "Yea that's a good idea it, it could take way you stress." Otacon said he loved Snakes chicken soup. While Snake, cooked otacon saw something very interesting on the web from one of his informants. "Snake get over NOW!!" "What." Snake and Otacon saw something that gave them all the info they need to find the patriots. " OH MY GOD." "Otacon after we eat we will take my plane and fly to island X.
LATER
The sky was dark and cloudy but it didn't matter they were going to the information about the greatest conspiracy the world has ever known. "Well Snake if our man was right the meeting place for the over there." "I'll take her down."
The Island
"Well this is it." "Lets move." "Freeze!" "Before they could even look to see who held them up there were pistol wiped and knocked out. "Ahhhhhhh my head what happened." moaned snake. "I don't know." They were tied to the wall. But then out of nowhere a masked guard came in." "I do not who you are but you're on government land." blurted the guard. "He picked up drill and said in a few minutes there's gonna so many holes in you boys you will be ready to have flowers planted in you.
How will snake and otacon escape
I do not own the characters konami does so there not mine. I do not own metal gear.