Hey everybody this is MAXMAN. I want to thank the people who sent in
reviews and I will work on the formatting. The thing is I can't type long
chapters because I have school and other crap that takes up time so if you
want to read my story you are gonna have to deal with lots of short
chapters. In addition, I am going to do the speech a little differently.
Chapter 3: renegade rescue
Just as the guard was about to "poke some holes." A very fit man dressed like a Navy Seal blew the door. In and took out the guard in a frenzy of marine martial arts attacks.
Snake: and who hell are you
Otacon: why do I get the feeling your a boss
Seal: First of all don't swear, second you in the lab coat play way to many video games
Seal: I was here to guard the Patriots but I believe there are only sources of evil
Snake: what does that have to do with saving us?
Seal: well you see I thought if you were good, enough to get this island with out being spotted on your landing you help me stop the patriots. That is why you are here, I am right?
Snake: correct.
Seal: then let get you people untied.
After the Seal untied they moved to the basement were the conference room was.
Seal: Boys this is the room. However, this is the thing there not in here but I think we need to fight shadow. We should take him out easy but get ready for a fight.
End of chapter three
more to come
Chapter 3: renegade rescue
Just as the guard was about to "poke some holes." A very fit man dressed like a Navy Seal blew the door. In and took out the guard in a frenzy of marine martial arts attacks.
Snake: and who hell are you
Otacon: why do I get the feeling your a boss
Seal: First of all don't swear, second you in the lab coat play way to many video games
Seal: I was here to guard the Patriots but I believe there are only sources of evil
Snake: what does that have to do with saving us?
Seal: well you see I thought if you were good, enough to get this island with out being spotted on your landing you help me stop the patriots. That is why you are here, I am right?
Snake: correct.
Seal: then let get you people untied.
After the Seal untied they moved to the basement were the conference room was.
Seal: Boys this is the room. However, this is the thing there not in here but I think we need to fight shadow. We should take him out easy but get ready for a fight.
End of chapter three
more to come