ATTACK OF THE JEDI
Ok hi, um this is my first fan fiction so please bear with me here.
Disclaimer: I don't own all of the characters in my fic so most belong to George Lucas And LucasFilms except for May-Lee and stuff. Enjoy, if you hate it review so I can see what I did wrong, if you love it then review so I can see what I did right! Padme
^....^ means telepathic communication *....* means thoughts to themselves (....) means my opinion.
Chapter I Attack of the Jedi
Obi Wan rushed over to his dying master's side, "Master, please don't die, please." "Train the boy," Qui Gon managed to utter. The bond between the apprentice and his master increased dramatically as Obi Wan tapped in to Qui Gon's life force signature, channelling a portion of the pain to Obi Wan while he sent soothing healing energies to the waning Qui Gon Jinn. "Hold on master...... 2 months later......... "Hey Anakin, guess what? I've been excepted to become a Jedi!" cried May- Lee excitedly. "Wow that's great!" said Anakin, "Who's training you?" "Master Obi Wan Kenobi, have you heard of him?" "Oh yes, I hear he is really powerful," said Anakin politely, not really conscious of what he was saying. "Who is your master Ani?" "Qui Gon Jinn." "Oh cool!" said May-Lee enthusiastically. "May-Lee, time to go," called a distant voice down the corridor. "Well, all the best of luck to you May-Lee, may the Force be with you." " You too Ani." The young Anakin Skywalker, kind and selfless looked out on to the horizon of Coruscant, bustling with all species wondering what the future would hold for him. 10 years later....... The Jedi master stirred fitfully in his sleep, tossing and turning as his young apprentice stared into the blank black of space dotted with stars. *Master Obi Wan hasn't been sleeping well these last couple of weeks, I wonder what's on his mind* "Ahhhh!" cried Obi Wan as he arched from his bed in a cold sweat. "Master, you need to tell me what's wrong, it kills me to see you in this state." "I'll tell you when I'm ready young padawan." "Well it's a good thing you're awake anyway because we're almost near the end of the hyper-space to Coruscant." Said May-Lee, "I wonder who are the other two Jedi we are teaming up with to protect Senator Amidala." "We'll find when we get there won't we," replied Obi Wan. The Star Cruiser carefully flew into Coruscant's atmosphere, May-Lee stared out of the cockpit window in wonder. Usually when coming into a planet the surface would look green for the forest planets or blue for the ocean planets but Coruscant was grey and metallic covering every surface. And even most planets would look beautiful in the daytime but Coruscant look far better in the dark with its many lights shining. She hadn't been here so long it seemed strange to her. She slowly hovered the cruiser onto the docking bay as Supreme Chancellor Palpatine came out to greet the new arrivals. "Welcome Obi Wan and May-Lee, we have been expecting you," greeted the Chancellor, " the two other Jedi you are to work with to protect the Senator have already arrived." The Jedi Master and his apprentice quietly followed the Senator to the lounge where the two other Jedi were waiting. As Obi Wan and May-Lee entered, May-Lee recognised the padawan sitting in the chair with his arms crossed, "Ani!" exclaimed May-Lee happily. "May- Lee!?" said Anakin. "Wow after all these years, wow you've grown so tall," said May-Lee. "And you have grown much too," said Anakin, " in beauty I mean." May-Lee blushed a deep scarlet as she said, "Thank you Ani." While this was all happening Obi Wan and Qui Gon Jinn's eyes met in silence. "Hello Obi Wan, we haven't communicated since that decade so long ago on Naboo." "Yes I know ," said Obi Wan. At that moment Senator Amidala walks in." "Padme?!" said Anakin in sheer delight. "Anakin? My how you've grown!" said Padme "So have you," replied Anakin. "I'll always remember you as that boy who saved us on Tatooine," smiled Padme Anakin frowned in slight annoyance that she would only remember him as a boy. But he wasn't, not anymore. Then the Senator turned to the Jedi "I do not need protection!" she protested." "Please senator, you're not making our job any easier," said Qui Gon. "Do remember what happpened when you landed on Coruscant," reminded Qui Gon. "Fine." The Jedi sat around the lounge extremely tensed. "She blocked the security cameras to her bedroom Master," said Anakin "She is quite stubborn isn't she, she putting her life on the line here," replied Qui Gon.
May-Lee had her mind focused at the Senator's bedroom. Suddenly her eyes widened, "I sense is too," said her master. The 4 Jedi ran into the room, Anakin jumped onto the bed, frying 2 intoxicating grubs. Meanwhile May-Lee spotted a hovering droid outside the window. Quick as a flash she smashed through the window hanging onto the droid, legs dangling as it took off. "Pardon me M'lady, please stay here where it's safe," said Anakin. "Obi Wan, your padawan is crazy," remarked Qui Gon. "She got there first," shrugged Obi Wan.
The probe droid sped through Coruscant, trying to shake off the padawan. "Give it up assassin wannabe," smirked May-Lee. The droid seemed to understand and went speeding into a speeder. "AAAAAAHHHH!" cried May-Lee quickly pulling her legs up to avoid a fatal accident. As they passed a billboard an infamous figure fired at the droid. May-Lee mutely tumbled passed the depths of Coruscant, the site flashing passed her eyes.
Ah, don't you just love it when the writer leaves you hanging on the edge of your seat for the next chapter?
REVIEW REVIEW! And get something new in the next chapter!
Signed Padme
Disclaimer: I don't own all of the characters in my fic so most belong to George Lucas And LucasFilms except for May-Lee and stuff. Enjoy, if you hate it review so I can see what I did wrong, if you love it then review so I can see what I did right! Padme
^....^ means telepathic communication *....* means thoughts to themselves (....) means my opinion.
Chapter I Attack of the Jedi
Obi Wan rushed over to his dying master's side, "Master, please don't die, please." "Train the boy," Qui Gon managed to utter. The bond between the apprentice and his master increased dramatically as Obi Wan tapped in to Qui Gon's life force signature, channelling a portion of the pain to Obi Wan while he sent soothing healing energies to the waning Qui Gon Jinn. "Hold on master...... 2 months later......... "Hey Anakin, guess what? I've been excepted to become a Jedi!" cried May- Lee excitedly. "Wow that's great!" said Anakin, "Who's training you?" "Master Obi Wan Kenobi, have you heard of him?" "Oh yes, I hear he is really powerful," said Anakin politely, not really conscious of what he was saying. "Who is your master Ani?" "Qui Gon Jinn." "Oh cool!" said May-Lee enthusiastically. "May-Lee, time to go," called a distant voice down the corridor. "Well, all the best of luck to you May-Lee, may the Force be with you." " You too Ani." The young Anakin Skywalker, kind and selfless looked out on to the horizon of Coruscant, bustling with all species wondering what the future would hold for him. 10 years later....... The Jedi master stirred fitfully in his sleep, tossing and turning as his young apprentice stared into the blank black of space dotted with stars. *Master Obi Wan hasn't been sleeping well these last couple of weeks, I wonder what's on his mind* "Ahhhh!" cried Obi Wan as he arched from his bed in a cold sweat. "Master, you need to tell me what's wrong, it kills me to see you in this state." "I'll tell you when I'm ready young padawan." "Well it's a good thing you're awake anyway because we're almost near the end of the hyper-space to Coruscant." Said May-Lee, "I wonder who are the other two Jedi we are teaming up with to protect Senator Amidala." "We'll find when we get there won't we," replied Obi Wan. The Star Cruiser carefully flew into Coruscant's atmosphere, May-Lee stared out of the cockpit window in wonder. Usually when coming into a planet the surface would look green for the forest planets or blue for the ocean planets but Coruscant was grey and metallic covering every surface. And even most planets would look beautiful in the daytime but Coruscant look far better in the dark with its many lights shining. She hadn't been here so long it seemed strange to her. She slowly hovered the cruiser onto the docking bay as Supreme Chancellor Palpatine came out to greet the new arrivals. "Welcome Obi Wan and May-Lee, we have been expecting you," greeted the Chancellor, " the two other Jedi you are to work with to protect the Senator have already arrived." The Jedi Master and his apprentice quietly followed the Senator to the lounge where the two other Jedi were waiting. As Obi Wan and May-Lee entered, May-Lee recognised the padawan sitting in the chair with his arms crossed, "Ani!" exclaimed May-Lee happily. "May- Lee!?" said Anakin. "Wow after all these years, wow you've grown so tall," said May-Lee. "And you have grown much too," said Anakin, " in beauty I mean." May-Lee blushed a deep scarlet as she said, "Thank you Ani." While this was all happening Obi Wan and Qui Gon Jinn's eyes met in silence. "Hello Obi Wan, we haven't communicated since that decade so long ago on Naboo." "Yes I know ," said Obi Wan. At that moment Senator Amidala walks in." "Padme?!" said Anakin in sheer delight. "Anakin? My how you've grown!" said Padme "So have you," replied Anakin. "I'll always remember you as that boy who saved us on Tatooine," smiled Padme Anakin frowned in slight annoyance that she would only remember him as a boy. But he wasn't, not anymore. Then the Senator turned to the Jedi "I do not need protection!" she protested." "Please senator, you're not making our job any easier," said Qui Gon. "Do remember what happpened when you landed on Coruscant," reminded Qui Gon. "Fine." The Jedi sat around the lounge extremely tensed. "She blocked the security cameras to her bedroom Master," said Anakin "She is quite stubborn isn't she, she putting her life on the line here," replied Qui Gon.
May-Lee had her mind focused at the Senator's bedroom. Suddenly her eyes widened, "I sense is too," said her master. The 4 Jedi ran into the room, Anakin jumped onto the bed, frying 2 intoxicating grubs. Meanwhile May-Lee spotted a hovering droid outside the window. Quick as a flash she smashed through the window hanging onto the droid, legs dangling as it took off. "Pardon me M'lady, please stay here where it's safe," said Anakin. "Obi Wan, your padawan is crazy," remarked Qui Gon. "She got there first," shrugged Obi Wan.
The probe droid sped through Coruscant, trying to shake off the padawan. "Give it up assassin wannabe," smirked May-Lee. The droid seemed to understand and went speeding into a speeder. "AAAAAAHHHH!" cried May-Lee quickly pulling her legs up to avoid a fatal accident. As they passed a billboard an infamous figure fired at the droid. May-Lee mutely tumbled passed the depths of Coruscant, the site flashing passed her eyes.
Ah, don't you just love it when the writer leaves you hanging on the edge of your seat for the next chapter?
REVIEW REVIEW! And get something new in the next chapter!
Signed Padme