Ok, I have to say a few things!
Choco Taco: Thank you for the review! I can't wait to read your fanfic (as soon as I finish this chapter!) I love how JK Rowling sticks names in so that I can think up characters for them!
Jenn: I hate it when they take the love/hate thing too fast.thanx so much for reviewing!
Sugar cherries: Thanks for the review, Im working on the updating!
TSL: What, did the story disappear? Thanks for reviewing!!!
Met19: Here's James' reaction, Narcissa is soooo fun to hate and ruin (evil laugh)
Note: Due to a vacation, I probably won't be able to update for 8 days.los sientos
As always, email me if you want to mizpoatatahead@cox.net! (though I may not check it very often while I am on Vacation!) Love! Lily B
Oh, and sorry for the little bit of stupidity on my part, I have to use my Moms computer until mine is fixed, and I uploaded the same chapter!
James
James heard the creak of the stairs and his eyes drifted lazily open. He glanced at the clock on the wall, which had a quaffle as the hour hand, and groaned.
Just then, the face of his father appeared in the doorway, smiling sleepily.
"James, we have a guest, one of your friends from school. It would be nice to come down and say hello at least!"
James jumped out of bed, eager to see Sirius or Remus. He pulled on some pants from the floor and bounded downstairs, eager to see someone he knew.
"Dorcas, you are right in time! I just made sausages and toast. Honestly, you know the early bird really does get the-"
Lily stopped when she looked up from the pan and saw James' face. James took one glance at her and stopped in his tracks. He turned and ran back up the stairs, with every intention of going back to bed. He wanted to wake up from this nightmare.
He thought
With that, he flung himself into bed, pants and all, and tried to fall back to sleep.
After half an hour of tossing and turning, trying to make himself fall back to sleep, he sat up in bed and glanced at the clock again. He strode over to his closet and pulled it open, letting most of the contents fall onto the floor. He found what he was searching for, his Shooting Star, and set it under his arm.
"Dad, I'm going out to the quidditch pitch, alright?" He called to his stunned looking father, "I probably won't be back for a while."
He appeared right next to one of the giant hoops. He had passed his apparation test with flying colours. He threw a quaffle up into the air with such force that he had to speed up in the air to catch it before it broke the invisibility barrier. That was all he needed, to have a muggle get suspicious! He caught the quaffle and threw it towards the other post. He imagined he was aiming for Lily's head, and a bell rang as it soared through.
He thought to himself angrily,
Suddenly, a figure appeared down below him, and he sped down towards it. It was the beautiful but snobby face of Narcissa Black. Could this day get any worse? She shot up in the air, holding a snitch that she released into the air. It sped off, and she followed. James looked at her with a feeling of disgust. She was only trying to show off.
"I'll race you to it," she called out in a sneering voice after James, "You don't want to lose to a girl."
James sped off after her, cursing himself for not following her sooner. She zoomed not too far ahead, but James had more talent. Her broom was fast and expensive, but James could turn and dive on a knut. They were soon tied, but as they raced to the ground, Narcissa lost control and swerved.
James took hold of the snitch easily, and Narcissa landed neatly on the ground. He jumped off his broom in midair, and fell to the ground, landing on his feet. His broom landed right beside him.
"Well, James, I see you have still got a lot of talent on that broom, but the Slytherins may have a nice shot at the cup, with me as Seeker."
"I don't know, Black, I did catch it first, and I am a chaser, not a seeker."
Narcissa got all huffy after that, but she soon calmed down enough to try and flirt with James.
"You are, James, without a doubt, the best Gryffindor captain I have ever seen," She told him countless times, " You always seem to shine out of the unpolished gem that is your team."
Just then, both Sirius and Lily appeared in the Quidditch pitch. Narcissa glared at Lily, who glared right back.
"Lo' James," Sirius said with his usual friendly voice "Narcissa, Aunt Morwen says that if you aren't back in 10 minutes, you are going to be in for toil and trouble."
"Alright, I suppose she needs more help with that potion,"Narcissa replied, "But, what is the mudblood doing here?"
"I am just here to tell James that we have to go to Diagon Alley now," Lily retorted, "You see, Black, I am staying with James for the rest of the summer."
Narcissa looked back in horror. James saw this, and had to fight hard to hold back a smile. Sirius seemed mildly amused, though whether about his cousin's or James' rage was not clear. Only Lily remained the same. James said "Bye" to Sirius and Narcissa, who looked too shocked to reply.
"You know, Lily, why did they have to send you?" James asked bewildered, " I mean, why couldn't Dorcas come?"
"Dorcas and your father are at work," Lily explained, "We have to go to Diagon Alley by ourselves."
Choco Taco: Thank you for the review! I can't wait to read your fanfic (as soon as I finish this chapter!) I love how JK Rowling sticks names in so that I can think up characters for them!
Jenn: I hate it when they take the love/hate thing too fast.thanx so much for reviewing!
Sugar cherries: Thanks for the review, Im working on the updating!
TSL: What, did the story disappear? Thanks for reviewing!!!
Met19: Here's James' reaction, Narcissa is soooo fun to hate and ruin (evil laugh)
Note: Due to a vacation, I probably won't be able to update for 8 days.los sientos
As always, email me if you want to mizpoatatahead@cox.net! (though I may not check it very often while I am on Vacation!) Love! Lily B
Oh, and sorry for the little bit of stupidity on my part, I have to use my Moms computer until mine is fixed, and I uploaded the same chapter!
James
James heard the creak of the stairs and his eyes drifted lazily open. He glanced at the clock on the wall, which had a quaffle as the hour hand, and groaned.
Just then, the face of his father appeared in the doorway, smiling sleepily.
"James, we have a guest, one of your friends from school. It would be nice to come down and say hello at least!"
James jumped out of bed, eager to see Sirius or Remus. He pulled on some pants from the floor and bounded downstairs, eager to see someone he knew.
"Dorcas, you are right in time! I just made sausages and toast. Honestly, you know the early bird really does get the-"
Lily stopped when she looked up from the pan and saw James' face. James took one glance at her and stopped in his tracks. He turned and ran back up the stairs, with every intention of going back to bed. He wanted to wake up from this nightmare.
He thought
With that, he flung himself into bed, pants and all, and tried to fall back to sleep.
After half an hour of tossing and turning, trying to make himself fall back to sleep, he sat up in bed and glanced at the clock again. He strode over to his closet and pulled it open, letting most of the contents fall onto the floor. He found what he was searching for, his Shooting Star, and set it under his arm.
"Dad, I'm going out to the quidditch pitch, alright?" He called to his stunned looking father, "I probably won't be back for a while."
He appeared right next to one of the giant hoops. He had passed his apparation test with flying colours. He threw a quaffle up into the air with such force that he had to speed up in the air to catch it before it broke the invisibility barrier. That was all he needed, to have a muggle get suspicious! He caught the quaffle and threw it towards the other post. He imagined he was aiming for Lily's head, and a bell rang as it soared through.
He thought to himself angrily,
Suddenly, a figure appeared down below him, and he sped down towards it. It was the beautiful but snobby face of Narcissa Black. Could this day get any worse? She shot up in the air, holding a snitch that she released into the air. It sped off, and she followed. James looked at her with a feeling of disgust. She was only trying to show off.
"I'll race you to it," she called out in a sneering voice after James, "You don't want to lose to a girl."
James sped off after her, cursing himself for not following her sooner. She zoomed not too far ahead, but James had more talent. Her broom was fast and expensive, but James could turn and dive on a knut. They were soon tied, but as they raced to the ground, Narcissa lost control and swerved.
James took hold of the snitch easily, and Narcissa landed neatly on the ground. He jumped off his broom in midair, and fell to the ground, landing on his feet. His broom landed right beside him.
"Well, James, I see you have still got a lot of talent on that broom, but the Slytherins may have a nice shot at the cup, with me as Seeker."
"I don't know, Black, I did catch it first, and I am a chaser, not a seeker."
Narcissa got all huffy after that, but she soon calmed down enough to try and flirt with James.
"You are, James, without a doubt, the best Gryffindor captain I have ever seen," She told him countless times, " You always seem to shine out of the unpolished gem that is your team."
Just then, both Sirius and Lily appeared in the Quidditch pitch. Narcissa glared at Lily, who glared right back.
"Lo' James," Sirius said with his usual friendly voice "Narcissa, Aunt Morwen says that if you aren't back in 10 minutes, you are going to be in for toil and trouble."
"Alright, I suppose she needs more help with that potion,"Narcissa replied, "But, what is the mudblood doing here?"
"I am just here to tell James that we have to go to Diagon Alley now," Lily retorted, "You see, Black, I am staying with James for the rest of the summer."
Narcissa looked back in horror. James saw this, and had to fight hard to hold back a smile. Sirius seemed mildly amused, though whether about his cousin's or James' rage was not clear. Only Lily remained the same. James said "Bye" to Sirius and Narcissa, who looked too shocked to reply.
"You know, Lily, why did they have to send you?" James asked bewildered, " I mean, why couldn't Dorcas come?"
"Dorcas and your father are at work," Lily explained, "We have to go to Diagon Alley by ourselves."