The Savior goes to NGE
By:Savior of Time
Disclaimer: As alway's I do not own Neon Genesis Evangelion although I wish I did anyways,Neon Genesis evangelion is owned by Hideaki Anno and Gainax.I also do not own the character of serge because he is the same serge from chrono cross.
Notes- Big thanks to those who reviewed because it is really helping me out with my writing,and I will also try not to rush.I would also like to add japanese phrases,because I see people putting them in their stories,but I have no idea what they mean.If someone could give me a couple of words and their meaning it would be most appreciated.From now on I will use this // to represent what a person is thinking.
I have also decided not to make serge an eva pilot due to the fact that eva unit 3 will still be piloted by touji and be desroyed,unit 4 will dissapear like in the anime and the MP evas all look bizzar.
I would also like to pair him up with someone so if anyone has an idea of who the lucky girl should be please tell me,The girls that are acceptable are in the following:
Mana Kirishima
Asuka Langley Sohryu
Rei Ayanami
Hikari Horaki
Anyways on to chapter Three of "Savior goes to NGE"
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Chapter 3- Conundrums & Revelations
As serge was getting near his new home he was trying to figure out how to get back to his own world.
"Wer'e here" said mai.As they came into the apartment serge could see that her apartment room was very clean and that she liked to clean.
"You really like to clean don't you Mai" said serge with a big grin on his face.
"Great I am sooo glad that you coul state the obvious" she said.As serge watched her,he could clearly see that she was ticked off.
"Ok ok no need to get all angry at me,I was just complementing you on your home and how nice it looks since my room is really messy."
"Anyways i'm gonna go change and no peeking got it!" mai said as she left the room.
//Yeah whatever... I wonder if there's anything to eat// Serge thought to himself.//Well at least she has the same taste in food as I do.//
As mai stepped out of her room she was wearing a T-shirt and a pair of shorts,seeing this serge started to blush heavely and thinking some perverted thoughts.
"Well that's a surprise,I didn't knoe you liked older women" mai said teasingly.Still blushing serge saw her laughing and he didn't like anyone to laugh at him,so he decided to get his revenge.
"Naa your'e not my type and I had no idea that you liked younger guys, maybe I should introduce you to some guys my age".Now it was serge's turn to laugh,//Ha Ha HA that'll
teach her to mess with me.//
"Well that's enough for today,so what should we eat?" asked mai
"Hmmm it's getting kind of late to cook something so why don't we order take out...they do have that here don't they?"he asked desperately.
"Of Course they have takeout,so what would you like?"mai asked.
"I really don't know what the food taste like so I guess i'll have anything" said serge hoping that the food would at least be edible.
When the food arrived they started eating "well enjoy" said mai.
"yeah",//Well here goes// he then started tasting the food bit by bit//,Wow this stuff is really good// in no time at all serge finished his meal that he enjoyed.
"So how was it?" mai asked.
"It was delicous,thanks mai" serge responded.
"Thanks I knew youd love it" said mai.
After they finished mia started telling serge about how tokyo was uninhabitable,tokyo two&tokyo three and about Second Impact.
"So your'e telling me that in the year 200?(A/N forgot when second impact happened so if anyone can tell me please do)A giant meteor came crashing to earth and that most of the population was destroyed" said serge.
"Yeah that's basically it" mai said with a sad expression on her face.
Serge could not believe that something like this happened,first he was transported to another world where most of it's population perished,He also could not understand how he knew how to speak,talk&read japanese since he only watched japanese animation.
"Well It's getting kind of late so you should go to sleep since you have to go to school tommorow" mai said.
"Sss..SCHOOL!" said serge frantically.
"yeah well we'll talk more tommorow,good night" mai said as she went to the bathroom.
"Yeah good night" said serge,//Damn why do I have to go to school for, back home summer vacation was just starting and now i have to go back to school//.
As serge was processing this into his mind, the same force that was in him when he was in the hospital returned.//Ahhh my head is starting to hurt again,but..why?//
When mai got out of the bathroom hid pain went away.//I wonder what happened// as serge was thinking about this he felt another force but this time it was different.
//Ahhh man the kid's still in there,guess he didn't take the news too well,hope he fits in tommorow well I have alot to do so I better catch some zzzzz//thinking this mai went to sleep.
As she left, serge could feel his roommate's emotions in his mind and the the only thing that he could feel is hpoe and sadness combined into one.
//Ok that was freaky,well I better go to sleep too,I have school in the morning after all//with that thought beside him he went inside his new room."Well at least it's friday and tommorow is a half a day",//Aww man I can't believe that they have school on a saturday//.
With that final thought he drifted into sleep awaiting what would come next,little did he know that he was about to play a major role in this world.
To Be Continued...
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Authors Notes-There you have it the third chapter of "Savior goes to NGE" as always I look foward to any reviews and comments.About that force I wrote about it is an ability transfer to give him an edge in this world and the ability that I gave him is known as empathy(it is the ability to feel what another person is feeling).As the story progresses I shall give him more abilitys.
P.S. I should be able to update by tommorow if not then by thursday since im still thinking of new ideas and i'd like to know if you have any good ones thanks.
By:Savior of Time
Disclaimer: As alway's I do not own Neon Genesis Evangelion although I wish I did anyways,Neon Genesis evangelion is owned by Hideaki Anno and Gainax.I also do not own the character of serge because he is the same serge from chrono cross.
Notes- Big thanks to those who reviewed because it is really helping me out with my writing,and I will also try not to rush.I would also like to add japanese phrases,because I see people putting them in their stories,but I have no idea what they mean.If someone could give me a couple of words and their meaning it would be most appreciated.From now on I will use this // to represent what a person is thinking.
I have also decided not to make serge an eva pilot due to the fact that eva unit 3 will still be piloted by touji and be desroyed,unit 4 will dissapear like in the anime and the MP evas all look bizzar.
I would also like to pair him up with someone so if anyone has an idea of who the lucky girl should be please tell me,The girls that are acceptable are in the following:
Mana Kirishima
Asuka Langley Sohryu
Rei Ayanami
Hikari Horaki
Anyways on to chapter Three of "Savior goes to NGE"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 3- Conundrums & Revelations
As serge was getting near his new home he was trying to figure out how to get back to his own world.
"Wer'e here" said mai.As they came into the apartment serge could see that her apartment room was very clean and that she liked to clean.
"You really like to clean don't you Mai" said serge with a big grin on his face.
"Great I am sooo glad that you coul state the obvious" she said.As serge watched her,he could clearly see that she was ticked off.
"Ok ok no need to get all angry at me,I was just complementing you on your home and how nice it looks since my room is really messy."
"Anyways i'm gonna go change and no peeking got it!" mai said as she left the room.
//Yeah whatever... I wonder if there's anything to eat// Serge thought to himself.//Well at least she has the same taste in food as I do.//
As mai stepped out of her room she was wearing a T-shirt and a pair of shorts,seeing this serge started to blush heavely and thinking some perverted thoughts.
"Well that's a surprise,I didn't knoe you liked older women" mai said teasingly.Still blushing serge saw her laughing and he didn't like anyone to laugh at him,so he decided to get his revenge.
"Naa your'e not my type and I had no idea that you liked younger guys, maybe I should introduce you to some guys my age".Now it was serge's turn to laugh,//Ha Ha HA that'll
teach her to mess with me.//
"Well that's enough for today,so what should we eat?" asked mai
"Hmmm it's getting kind of late to cook something so why don't we order take out...they do have that here don't they?"he asked desperately.
"Of Course they have takeout,so what would you like?"mai asked.
"I really don't know what the food taste like so I guess i'll have anything" said serge hoping that the food would at least be edible.
When the food arrived they started eating "well enjoy" said mai.
"yeah",//Well here goes// he then started tasting the food bit by bit//,Wow this stuff is really good// in no time at all serge finished his meal that he enjoyed.
"So how was it?" mai asked.
"It was delicous,thanks mai" serge responded.
"Thanks I knew youd love it" said mai.
After they finished mia started telling serge about how tokyo was uninhabitable,tokyo two&tokyo three and about Second Impact.
"So your'e telling me that in the year 200?(A/N forgot when second impact happened so if anyone can tell me please do)A giant meteor came crashing to earth and that most of the population was destroyed" said serge.
"Yeah that's basically it" mai said with a sad expression on her face.
Serge could not believe that something like this happened,first he was transported to another world where most of it's population perished,He also could not understand how he knew how to speak,talk&read japanese since he only watched japanese animation.
"Well It's getting kind of late so you should go to sleep since you have to go to school tommorow" mai said.
"Sss..SCHOOL!" said serge frantically.
"yeah well we'll talk more tommorow,good night" mai said as she went to the bathroom.
"Yeah good night" said serge,//Damn why do I have to go to school for, back home summer vacation was just starting and now i have to go back to school//.
As serge was processing this into his mind, the same force that was in him when he was in the hospital returned.//Ahhh my head is starting to hurt again,but..why?//
When mai got out of the bathroom hid pain went away.//I wonder what happened// as serge was thinking about this he felt another force but this time it was different.
//Ahhh man the kid's still in there,guess he didn't take the news too well,hope he fits in tommorow well I have alot to do so I better catch some zzzzz//thinking this mai went to sleep.
As she left, serge could feel his roommate's emotions in his mind and the the only thing that he could feel is hpoe and sadness combined into one.
//Ok that was freaky,well I better go to sleep too,I have school in the morning after all//with that thought beside him he went inside his new room."Well at least it's friday and tommorow is a half a day",//Aww man I can't believe that they have school on a saturday//.
With that final thought he drifted into sleep awaiting what would come next,little did he know that he was about to play a major role in this world.
To Be Continued...
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Authors Notes-There you have it the third chapter of "Savior goes to NGE" as always I look foward to any reviews and comments.About that force I wrote about it is an ability transfer to give him an edge in this world and the ability that I gave him is known as empathy(it is the ability to feel what another person is feeling).As the story progresses I shall give him more abilitys.
P.S. I should be able to update by tommorow if not then by thursday since im still thinking of new ideas and i'd like to know if you have any good ones thanks.