A little note from me!
I am so sorry about the spacing! I did not realize that the spacing that I
did was not right. I am very bad at prologues ;_;. Oh and if people are
wondering about the whole Kel and Joren not being like fighting with each
other What I was doing was trying to not use the book version I am trying
to make him be like a nice type of character because I don't like the evil
portrayal of him that what I was trying to do with the whole
His father had warned him not to like the girl, women had no place fighting. Though were his father got this thought from he would never know. From what he could remember his family had, had the most female fighters not but one hundred years ago
See I was trying to make it out that he did not want to hate Kel but I guess I did not get my point across. Hmmm I will try to put more of this into my story.
Sailorcheron- I like that paring to so I might write one ok ^_^.
Oh and thank you for reviewing me I don't mind that I got some cynical reviews at least it shows u liked the story enough to tell me how to fix my writing! ( I have lots of optimism!)
SO I HOPE EVERY ONE KEEPS ON READING!
East is west and west is east. Disclaimer- Oh please. I defiantly do not own this. I don't own anything. Warning- umm this chapter is not too bad but well there is some rape but it's not graphic.
Chapter- 3 How Joren's Love started
I will always remember the day I finely started to see Kel in a new light..-
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" Here take this stick!" Kel looked at Joren with a faint bit of curiosity be for she picked up the jousting stick. "Ugh" - My is really heavy!- - She will never be able to joust with that now she will be mocked at her lack of skill-
Some odd weeks later
" Very good Mandiln I am happy to see such an improvement! Now everyone takes mandolin as an example at first she was horrid at jousting now she can do it fairly well... Though don't get cocky mandolin your still not that good."
" Yes milord"
How did she do it? Does she still use the stick I gave her ? She must still use it because no one else is complaining about there stick being too heavy. Well well well it looks like the lump has a backbone.-
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- Yes that was the first time I started to think about her. But after that I became obsessed. I would watch her from behind I started to stopped harassing her I started to be nice to her. Yet she was untrusting of me she would give me mistrusting looks and sometimes even ignore me. I didn't get it I had always been able to get anything or anyone I wanted. Yet this lump who was not even in the book of silver mocked me and ignored me and never once fell to my charm. Why I wonder! Yet if I think about it I realize that it is because well I guess I have never treated her the way I should of and even thinking back to our first in counter. Ha I was a fool I guess first impressions do mean something to her and I clearly did not make a good first impression! But why was she so keen to become my friend right after she had been... I don't even want to think about. But she just gave in to one small sentence maybe it was the way I said it I must have said it with sincerity ha sincerity I have done nothing or said anything sincerely in years. But even if she does not want me the way that I want her at least I will be able to be there for her I will even have to except her friends. Well I never really disliked Queens cove I always thought him smart and he is in the book of gold along with my family so I had to respect him for his is higher in the book than me. But lately we have been talking basically so he can find out how Kel is doing but maybe he and his friends can accept me well who cares they better anyway! Oh well I am glad she will be joining us again. I wonder how she will handle it.-
Musegurl 18 Did that explain anything for u ppl? Sorry it took so long.
His father had warned him not to like the girl, women had no place fighting. Though were his father got this thought from he would never know. From what he could remember his family had, had the most female fighters not but one hundred years ago
See I was trying to make it out that he did not want to hate Kel but I guess I did not get my point across. Hmmm I will try to put more of this into my story.
Sailorcheron- I like that paring to so I might write one ok ^_^.
Oh and thank you for reviewing me I don't mind that I got some cynical reviews at least it shows u liked the story enough to tell me how to fix my writing! ( I have lots of optimism!)
SO I HOPE EVERY ONE KEEPS ON READING!
East is west and west is east. Disclaimer- Oh please. I defiantly do not own this. I don't own anything. Warning- umm this chapter is not too bad but well there is some rape but it's not graphic.
Chapter- 3 How Joren's Love started
I will always remember the day I finely started to see Kel in a new light..-
@@@@@ Flashback@@@@
" Here take this stick!" Kel looked at Joren with a faint bit of curiosity be for she picked up the jousting stick. "Ugh" - My is really heavy!- - She will never be able to joust with that now she will be mocked at her lack of skill-
Some odd weeks later
" Very good Mandiln I am happy to see such an improvement! Now everyone takes mandolin as an example at first she was horrid at jousting now she can do it fairly well... Though don't get cocky mandolin your still not that good."
" Yes milord"
How did she do it? Does she still use the stick I gave her ? She must still use it because no one else is complaining about there stick being too heavy. Well well well it looks like the lump has a backbone.-
@@@ End@@@
- Yes that was the first time I started to think about her. But after that I became obsessed. I would watch her from behind I started to stopped harassing her I started to be nice to her. Yet she was untrusting of me she would give me mistrusting looks and sometimes even ignore me. I didn't get it I had always been able to get anything or anyone I wanted. Yet this lump who was not even in the book of silver mocked me and ignored me and never once fell to my charm. Why I wonder! Yet if I think about it I realize that it is because well I guess I have never treated her the way I should of and even thinking back to our first in counter. Ha I was a fool I guess first impressions do mean something to her and I clearly did not make a good first impression! But why was she so keen to become my friend right after she had been... I don't even want to think about. But she just gave in to one small sentence maybe it was the way I said it I must have said it with sincerity ha sincerity I have done nothing or said anything sincerely in years. But even if she does not want me the way that I want her at least I will be able to be there for her I will even have to except her friends. Well I never really disliked Queens cove I always thought him smart and he is in the book of gold along with my family so I had to respect him for his is higher in the book than me. But lately we have been talking basically so he can find out how Kel is doing but maybe he and his friends can accept me well who cares they better anyway! Oh well I am glad she will be joining us again. I wonder how she will handle it.-
Musegurl 18 Did that explain anything for u ppl? Sorry it took so long.