I did it i wrote another chapter. Phew ..... well here it is ^-^ enjoy
Chapter 6 ~ Winter celebration!
Disclaimer~ Don't own it but would like to.
Warning~ er... Thanks to ~ I am sorry I did not write to my reviewers in my last one I kinda for got but no fear I will this time. MY BRANDY NEW BETA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Angel of wind~ Thank you and I might just have another Cleon beating. Lady me~ LMAO is all I can say about ur reviews I always enjoy reading them. Its really funny u mentioned the thing about ppl in drag because I live near cape cod where there is this place called P town and it's a gay community town I have so much fun there. Squire Kali~ as always thank you and AH HA I finely got a beta! So there =P. Lady Ashley~ Thank you and I did get a beta yay ^-^ Anastazia Silverwind~ thank you for the review! Evilstrawberry~ I am not a Cleon hater! But he just fit into my plot. And if u shoot me how will I finish my story? Starlight Princess~ Thank you!!!!! It's one of my fav pairs. Poe the Goddess~ THANK YOU. I love getting helpful reviewrs ^-^ and Kel acts out of character because she was traumatized but I do try to stick to there characters tho. I thak you for offering to be my beta but I finely got one. ^_^ silverfly ~ I am sorry but don't bother to review if that's all your going to put. It is lame to write "this not very good." Because A. I don't know what was not good about it and B. how to fix what was not good about it.
"Hey Kel, we're going into the city to get some presents for the Midwinter celebrations. Do you want to join us?" asked Neal.
"You boys - always waiting till the last minute to get everything done. I've already gotten all of the presents... plus as you all should remember I need an adult with me when I leave the castle. I was lucky enough that Wildcat took me out once, so I think I'll go practice with my glaive," replied Kel.
"I think it would be better if you worked on your studies or at the feast tonight Master Oakbridge will be very displeased," said Neal.
At this everyone groaned and remembered last year's feast, where Master Oakbridge had yelled at them all for making the smallest mistake. They all felt bad for Kel, for she had it the worst, since none of the people wanted the "Girl" as their server.
A few hours later....
"STOP laughing - it's not FUNNY," screeched about eight pale boys.
"I am sorry, but this is too funny. So let me get this right - you all come to Kel looking like crap and Kel makes things all better?" Joren asked while wiping a tear from his eye.
"Its not all that funny Joren! All I'm doing is making them look a bit more presentable, and yes, I've done this every year since the first year. And since this is my last year as a page I want to look presentable. (A/N I know that Kel and Cleon went out after Kel became a squire but I changed that because I think this way it will give Kel more time to get to know Joren better!)
At that remark Joren burst out into laughing again. Owen, who looked the worst out of all of them, conked Joren over the head with one of Kel's pillows.
"Hey look what you did! You messed up my hair!" Now it was everyone else's turn to laugh.
Kel felt bad for Joren, and walked over to him. With her comb, she fixed Joren's hair and made it look even better than it had before. By now all the boys had subsided their giggles and were looking good, but pale. Kel and Joren seemed to be the only ones who did not lose their composure (considering Joren would not have to serve any one because he was a squire).
After the festivities...
By looking at the pages while they were eating dinner, someone would think that they had been running a marathon, not serving tables. Everyone was falling asleep into their dinner. Except Joren, who sat there with mirth while making fun of his new page friends.
"You...you should have seen your faces. You looked like you were going to die if you messed up. Well, all of you but Kel. Kel, you must tell me - who ever taught you how to hide you emotions like that?"
"Yes, do tell us Kel. That way I can shove a spear up their ass! It gets so annoying! I can't tell if you're happy or if you're sad. It's frustrating to think something may be wrong but would I know anything about it? Nooo Kel won't even let her friends know what is wrong! Look Kel I am not saying this to be mean or hurtful its just. you don't have to hide things from us where your friends," said Neal.
At this they all looked at Kel to see what she would say. Although she looked fine, Joren, with his past experiences with her, could tell right away that that comment had hurt. "Oh come off it! I think that it would be useful to know how to do that. I myself would love to learn how to."
At this reply Kel smiled at Joren, silently thanking him.
The next morning...Kel
"Here you are Mi' lady," said Gower gloomily - like always - while handing Kel a bag presents.
"Oh Gower you're present is in you servant box."
"Already got it. Thank you Mi' Lady." With that Gower left Kel's room.
Kel looked over her presents. Neal gave her a book about Yamini gods and goddesses. Everyone else either got her sweets. Owen was sweet enough to get her some hair ribbons.
Then Kel came across a small beautifully done-up package. She could tell it wasn't from her mysterious gift giver, for it was not in the usual wrapping. Kel carefully opened the package. Inside was a ring! It was beautifully done. In the middle was a was a pretty twisty shape with a beautiful blue gemstone. At the bottom of the small box was a note. She picked it up and it read it.
"A beautiful ring, for a beautiful lady your truly ~ Joren"
A single tear ran down Kel's cheek. - I hope he likes my gift-
The next morning .... Joren
Joren was going through his presents he was surprised to find some odd gifts from his new friends. He was happy that he had decided to get them something. But what caught his eye was an oddly-shaped gift. He picked up the package, and was surprised at the weight of the it. He opened the box to find a long thin dagger! The craftsmanship was excellent! When he looked at the blade, he noticed one of two things engraved on the it. It read "friendship." Then he noticed the sign of a raven. Oh my! thought Joren. Even his father had not gotten him anything from the Raven Armory Shop. Then he looked at the card. It read "To a true friend~ yours truly Kel." Even though no one was there Joren, blushed - something he had not done in years.
Muse~ here it is another chappie not to long but hey I try. Oh and it took a little while to get it out because there was technical difficulty with me and my beta but its ok now I HAVE A BETA^_^ YAY.::::::: does a celebration dance:::::::::: PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!! I live only to get reviews So if u like it plz review! Well thanks if u do decide to review. How am I suppose to no if I am any good at writing if I get no reviews(this is not including my wonderful reviewers.)
Chapter 6 ~ Winter celebration!
Disclaimer~ Don't own it but would like to.
Warning~ er... Thanks to ~ I am sorry I did not write to my reviewers in my last one I kinda for got but no fear I will this time. MY BRANDY NEW BETA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Angel of wind~ Thank you and I might just have another Cleon beating. Lady me~ LMAO is all I can say about ur reviews I always enjoy reading them. Its really funny u mentioned the thing about ppl in drag because I live near cape cod where there is this place called P town and it's a gay community town I have so much fun there. Squire Kali~ as always thank you and AH HA I finely got a beta! So there =P. Lady Ashley~ Thank you and I did get a beta yay ^-^ Anastazia Silverwind~ thank you for the review! Evilstrawberry~ I am not a Cleon hater! But he just fit into my plot. And if u shoot me how will I finish my story? Starlight Princess~ Thank you!!!!! It's one of my fav pairs. Poe the Goddess~ THANK YOU. I love getting helpful reviewrs ^-^ and Kel acts out of character because she was traumatized but I do try to stick to there characters tho. I thak you for offering to be my beta but I finely got one. ^_^ silverfly ~ I am sorry but don't bother to review if that's all your going to put. It is lame to write "this not very good." Because A. I don't know what was not good about it and B. how to fix what was not good about it.
"Hey Kel, we're going into the city to get some presents for the Midwinter celebrations. Do you want to join us?" asked Neal.
"You boys - always waiting till the last minute to get everything done. I've already gotten all of the presents... plus as you all should remember I need an adult with me when I leave the castle. I was lucky enough that Wildcat took me out once, so I think I'll go practice with my glaive," replied Kel.
"I think it would be better if you worked on your studies or at the feast tonight Master Oakbridge will be very displeased," said Neal.
At this everyone groaned and remembered last year's feast, where Master Oakbridge had yelled at them all for making the smallest mistake. They all felt bad for Kel, for she had it the worst, since none of the people wanted the "Girl" as their server.
A few hours later....
"STOP laughing - it's not FUNNY," screeched about eight pale boys.
"I am sorry, but this is too funny. So let me get this right - you all come to Kel looking like crap and Kel makes things all better?" Joren asked while wiping a tear from his eye.
"Its not all that funny Joren! All I'm doing is making them look a bit more presentable, and yes, I've done this every year since the first year. And since this is my last year as a page I want to look presentable. (A/N I know that Kel and Cleon went out after Kel became a squire but I changed that because I think this way it will give Kel more time to get to know Joren better!)
At that remark Joren burst out into laughing again. Owen, who looked the worst out of all of them, conked Joren over the head with one of Kel's pillows.
"Hey look what you did! You messed up my hair!" Now it was everyone else's turn to laugh.
Kel felt bad for Joren, and walked over to him. With her comb, she fixed Joren's hair and made it look even better than it had before. By now all the boys had subsided their giggles and were looking good, but pale. Kel and Joren seemed to be the only ones who did not lose their composure (considering Joren would not have to serve any one because he was a squire).
After the festivities...
By looking at the pages while they were eating dinner, someone would think that they had been running a marathon, not serving tables. Everyone was falling asleep into their dinner. Except Joren, who sat there with mirth while making fun of his new page friends.
"You...you should have seen your faces. You looked like you were going to die if you messed up. Well, all of you but Kel. Kel, you must tell me - who ever taught you how to hide you emotions like that?"
"Yes, do tell us Kel. That way I can shove a spear up their ass! It gets so annoying! I can't tell if you're happy or if you're sad. It's frustrating to think something may be wrong but would I know anything about it? Nooo Kel won't even let her friends know what is wrong! Look Kel I am not saying this to be mean or hurtful its just. you don't have to hide things from us where your friends," said Neal.
At this they all looked at Kel to see what she would say. Although she looked fine, Joren, with his past experiences with her, could tell right away that that comment had hurt. "Oh come off it! I think that it would be useful to know how to do that. I myself would love to learn how to."
At this reply Kel smiled at Joren, silently thanking him.
The next morning...Kel
"Here you are Mi' lady," said Gower gloomily - like always - while handing Kel a bag presents.
"Oh Gower you're present is in you servant box."
"Already got it. Thank you Mi' Lady." With that Gower left Kel's room.
Kel looked over her presents. Neal gave her a book about Yamini gods and goddesses. Everyone else either got her sweets. Owen was sweet enough to get her some hair ribbons.
Then Kel came across a small beautifully done-up package. She could tell it wasn't from her mysterious gift giver, for it was not in the usual wrapping. Kel carefully opened the package. Inside was a ring! It was beautifully done. In the middle was a was a pretty twisty shape with a beautiful blue gemstone. At the bottom of the small box was a note. She picked it up and it read it.
"A beautiful ring, for a beautiful lady your truly ~ Joren"
A single tear ran down Kel's cheek. - I hope he likes my gift-
The next morning .... Joren
Joren was going through his presents he was surprised to find some odd gifts from his new friends. He was happy that he had decided to get them something. But what caught his eye was an oddly-shaped gift. He picked up the package, and was surprised at the weight of the it. He opened the box to find a long thin dagger! The craftsmanship was excellent! When he looked at the blade, he noticed one of two things engraved on the it. It read "friendship." Then he noticed the sign of a raven. Oh my! thought Joren. Even his father had not gotten him anything from the Raven Armory Shop. Then he looked at the card. It read "To a true friend~ yours truly Kel." Even though no one was there Joren, blushed - something he had not done in years.
Muse~ here it is another chappie not to long but hey I try. Oh and it took a little while to get it out because there was technical difficulty with me and my beta but its ok now I HAVE A BETA^_^ YAY.::::::: does a celebration dance:::::::::: PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!! I live only to get reviews So if u like it plz review! Well thanks if u do decide to review. How am I suppose to no if I am any good at writing if I get no reviews(this is not including my wonderful reviewers.)