Come Away With Me VERSION 2.0
Chapter 2 REVISED
By: StarlightSakura
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A/N: Hey there! Howz it goin ya'll? Well, I'm seriously sorry for all this crap. I just wasn't that happy with this story as I was when I first wrote it. Which is one main reason why I am redoing every chapter but also I think it helps me with my writing and gives me more experience with writing a decent story. Well, here's chapter 2, revised. Enjoy!!! ^.^
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"Milliardo. I'm going out for a walk. I'll be back in about an hour." Relena told her older brother as she was heading towards the door.
"Be careful Relena." Milliardo responded from where he was in the huge music room, showing the small baby he held in his arms the piano. He walked over to Relena and handed her a sweater. "It's supposed to get cold and start snowing tonight, so take this." He told at her.
Relena nodded and took the sweater from Milliardo. She kissed the small baby who smiled at her as she left.
As Relena was walking down the sidewalk, she noticed a familiar face standing next to a tree. "Heero? Is that him?" she asked. Relena ran over to the person. "Heero." She said. He turned around, saw her, and smiled.
"Hello Princess Relena. How are you?" He asked.
"Don't call me Princess Relena, Heero, you know you don't have too. I have been fine, and you?" she asked.
He nodded letting her know he was doing well.
"So, I hear that you're engaged now. I hope you like him." Heero said. After he said that, she walked closer to him and started crying on his shoulder
Heero couldn't believe what she was doing. She was crying on her. She also started talking, "Oh god Heero, it's bad, real bad. I don't like him at all. I hate him. He touches me, he hits me, he treats me as if I were a mere animal in the way, he acts nice to everyone but when he's alone with me..." she trailed off.
Heero didn't want to believe it. 'How could someone take advantage of her like that?' He thought. She put her arms around him and all he could do was hug her back. He took her chin in his hand and pulled her face up so she was looking at him. He looked into her beautiful sea-green eyes and said, "Don't worry Relena, I won't let him hurt you anymore. I'm sorry I didn't tell you earlier, I know it my seem late now but, I... I want you to know that I... I love you." Heero wrapped his arms around her waist and hugged her tightly. After a while, she hugged him back just as tight.
"It's not too late Heero, we are not married yet, he's still my fiancé, I wanted to wait until you finally came back to me. I didn't want to get married until I knew if you loved me the way I loved you. I wanted to wait for you Heero, but my brother didn't want me to. He said you would never come back and to stop waiting. Besides, I love you too." She told him.
Just then, Heero picked up her chin so she would be facing him. He leaned down a little until he could feel Relena's breath on his lips. Relena leaned forward to close the gap and the two shared their first kiss as the first snow of the season started to fall, landing in little white puffs over the both of them. As they separated, the wind also picked up. Relena shivered and put her sweater on. After a while, Heero got cold too but tried not to show it. Relena noticed him, took off her sweater and put it around him shoulders. "I don't need it. I'm used to the cold." He said, giving it back to her. She took it and sat him down under the tree they were standing next to. She sat down next to him, snuggled in close to him, and put the sweater over both of them as much as she could.
"Heero, I'm scared to go back home. Where are you going when you leave?" She asked.
Heero shrugged his shoulders and said, "I don't know, maybe Japan to go live the rest of my life there. Why?" He asked.
"Please take me with you. Please. I'm not begging to be near you, I just want to get as far away as possible from Eli. Please Heero?" She said.
Heero looked at her eyes again. "What will your brother and Noin think?" He asked.
"They won't have a clue where I am. I have wanted to run away, but I just couldn't get out of Eli's watchful eye. Please Heero, take me with you. Please!" She said. She snuggled into him more to get out of the cold wind. Heero looked at her hair blowing in the wind. 'I can't say no.' he told himself.
"Relena. Relena?" Heero looked at her. 'She's asleep.' "You can go with me Relena. I won't let anyone hurt you." He whispered. He rubbed his hand on her forehead, picked her up, and carried her to his hotel room
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A/N: Well, there ya'll go, a revised chapter 2. Heheh, I know I'm go very slowly at these things but, life gets in the way. Hell, if I could have one day where I could sit down at the computer and type and post my fanfics all day, I sure as hell would. But until that day, it's gonna be some slow movin for me. Oh yeah, and while I'm here, why not do some shameless self- promoting! If ya'll be fans of Inuyasha, I gots 2 good ones that are sad cuz they ain't gots any reviews (it's also probably cuz they only have one chapter each). One's called "Fairy Tale Within A Fairy Tale" and the other's called "Her True Identity." And I'm currently working on an AU fic and I'm hoping to have another GW fic out sometime in the next thousand years or so. Til then, go read mai Inu fics! (Por favor?) Bai!!!
~*~StarlightSakura~*~
Chapter 2 REVISED
By: StarlightSakura
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A/N: Hey there! Howz it goin ya'll? Well, I'm seriously sorry for all this crap. I just wasn't that happy with this story as I was when I first wrote it. Which is one main reason why I am redoing every chapter but also I think it helps me with my writing and gives me more experience with writing a decent story. Well, here's chapter 2, revised. Enjoy!!! ^.^
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"Milliardo. I'm going out for a walk. I'll be back in about an hour." Relena told her older brother as she was heading towards the door.
"Be careful Relena." Milliardo responded from where he was in the huge music room, showing the small baby he held in his arms the piano. He walked over to Relena and handed her a sweater. "It's supposed to get cold and start snowing tonight, so take this." He told at her.
Relena nodded and took the sweater from Milliardo. She kissed the small baby who smiled at her as she left.
As Relena was walking down the sidewalk, she noticed a familiar face standing next to a tree. "Heero? Is that him?" she asked. Relena ran over to the person. "Heero." She said. He turned around, saw her, and smiled.
"Hello Princess Relena. How are you?" He asked.
"Don't call me Princess Relena, Heero, you know you don't have too. I have been fine, and you?" she asked.
He nodded letting her know he was doing well.
"So, I hear that you're engaged now. I hope you like him." Heero said. After he said that, she walked closer to him and started crying on his shoulder
Heero couldn't believe what she was doing. She was crying on her. She also started talking, "Oh god Heero, it's bad, real bad. I don't like him at all. I hate him. He touches me, he hits me, he treats me as if I were a mere animal in the way, he acts nice to everyone but when he's alone with me..." she trailed off.
Heero didn't want to believe it. 'How could someone take advantage of her like that?' He thought. She put her arms around him and all he could do was hug her back. He took her chin in his hand and pulled her face up so she was looking at him. He looked into her beautiful sea-green eyes and said, "Don't worry Relena, I won't let him hurt you anymore. I'm sorry I didn't tell you earlier, I know it my seem late now but, I... I want you to know that I... I love you." Heero wrapped his arms around her waist and hugged her tightly. After a while, she hugged him back just as tight.
"It's not too late Heero, we are not married yet, he's still my fiancé, I wanted to wait until you finally came back to me. I didn't want to get married until I knew if you loved me the way I loved you. I wanted to wait for you Heero, but my brother didn't want me to. He said you would never come back and to stop waiting. Besides, I love you too." She told him.
Just then, Heero picked up her chin so she would be facing him. He leaned down a little until he could feel Relena's breath on his lips. Relena leaned forward to close the gap and the two shared their first kiss as the first snow of the season started to fall, landing in little white puffs over the both of them. As they separated, the wind also picked up. Relena shivered and put her sweater on. After a while, Heero got cold too but tried not to show it. Relena noticed him, took off her sweater and put it around him shoulders. "I don't need it. I'm used to the cold." He said, giving it back to her. She took it and sat him down under the tree they were standing next to. She sat down next to him, snuggled in close to him, and put the sweater over both of them as much as she could.
"Heero, I'm scared to go back home. Where are you going when you leave?" She asked.
Heero shrugged his shoulders and said, "I don't know, maybe Japan to go live the rest of my life there. Why?" He asked.
"Please take me with you. Please. I'm not begging to be near you, I just want to get as far away as possible from Eli. Please Heero?" She said.
Heero looked at her eyes again. "What will your brother and Noin think?" He asked.
"They won't have a clue where I am. I have wanted to run away, but I just couldn't get out of Eli's watchful eye. Please Heero, take me with you. Please!" She said. She snuggled into him more to get out of the cold wind. Heero looked at her hair blowing in the wind. 'I can't say no.' he told himself.
"Relena. Relena?" Heero looked at her. 'She's asleep.' "You can go with me Relena. I won't let anyone hurt you." He whispered. He rubbed his hand on her forehead, picked her up, and carried her to his hotel room
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A/N: Well, there ya'll go, a revised chapter 2. Heheh, I know I'm go very slowly at these things but, life gets in the way. Hell, if I could have one day where I could sit down at the computer and type and post my fanfics all day, I sure as hell would. But until that day, it's gonna be some slow movin for me. Oh yeah, and while I'm here, why not do some shameless self- promoting! If ya'll be fans of Inuyasha, I gots 2 good ones that are sad cuz they ain't gots any reviews (it's also probably cuz they only have one chapter each). One's called "Fairy Tale Within A Fairy Tale" and the other's called "Her True Identity." And I'm currently working on an AU fic and I'm hoping to have another GW fic out sometime in the next thousand years or so. Til then, go read mai Inu fics! (Por favor?) Bai!!!
~*~StarlightSakura~*~