Warning: Yaoi. . .male male relationship. . .K?
Disclaimer:I'd be very happy if i owned Yu Yu Hakusho, 'specially Hiei, but i don't and now i'm depressed
Author's Note: I didn't really plan on adding anything to the first poem, but i got 8 comments the first day it was up, so i decided to write more. . .i think this story is just going to be a collection of poems. . . going in order from Hiei and Kurama's confessions to. . .well whatever happens. . . i'm not going to think to hard about that right now. . .
Any who. . .this particular poem is Hiei's side of the non existant relationship. . .okay how many people did i lose? K, i'll try again, first poem was about Kurama's emotions, #2 is about Hiei's. . .#3 is about them finally revealing it, #4 First Date/thingy, basically a bunch of mushy stuff, #5 First Kiss, awww, how cute, #6 maybe a Citrus Warning, i'm going have to change the rating. . .
Thats all the planning i've done. . .i hope it turns out okay. . .i've never tried to write a story in poems before, so be kind, please?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Secret Emotions*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
You walk alone and unaware
of the emotions you cause me
The slight breeze blowing your hair
as you breath in deeply
You smile happily
is it i you smile for?
i know you sense me
friends, but am i anything more?
no, no the voices say
he smiles because a friend is near
would he grin if it were Yusuke?
the answer's yes, i fear
So long i've been without
feelings, you've made me tame
and now i doubt
i'll ever be the same
i can't excape it now
and every wall i build
has come crashing down
can't deny the void you've filled
You showed me friendship
something i never had before
you showed me just the tip
now i want to see the core
I can't describe why i act,
but eveytime i see you,
i'm so cold and held back
i can't formulate the words to. . .
. . .to tell you i'm in love with you
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
So?????
I dunno, seems a little mushy for Hiei, but, what am i gonna do?
Next chappie will be when they finally tell each other. . .should be interesting. . .actually its being a thorn in my side, it might take a while to be completed. . . writer's block, i hate it. . .
!!!!!!!!Review!!!!!!!!!!
Disclaimer:I'd be very happy if i owned Yu Yu Hakusho, 'specially Hiei, but i don't and now i'm depressed
Author's Note: I didn't really plan on adding anything to the first poem, but i got 8 comments the first day it was up, so i decided to write more. . .i think this story is just going to be a collection of poems. . . going in order from Hiei and Kurama's confessions to. . .well whatever happens. . . i'm not going to think to hard about that right now. . .
Any who. . .this particular poem is Hiei's side of the non existant relationship. . .okay how many people did i lose? K, i'll try again, first poem was about Kurama's emotions, #2 is about Hiei's. . .#3 is about them finally revealing it, #4 First Date/thingy, basically a bunch of mushy stuff, #5 First Kiss, awww, how cute, #6 maybe a Citrus Warning, i'm going have to change the rating. . .
Thats all the planning i've done. . .i hope it turns out okay. . .i've never tried to write a story in poems before, so be kind, please?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Secret Emotions*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
You walk alone and unaware
of the emotions you cause me
The slight breeze blowing your hair
as you breath in deeply
You smile happily
is it i you smile for?
i know you sense me
friends, but am i anything more?
no, no the voices say
he smiles because a friend is near
would he grin if it were Yusuke?
the answer's yes, i fear
So long i've been without
feelings, you've made me tame
and now i doubt
i'll ever be the same
i can't excape it now
and every wall i build
has come crashing down
can't deny the void you've filled
You showed me friendship
something i never had before
you showed me just the tip
now i want to see the core
I can't describe why i act,
but eveytime i see you,
i'm so cold and held back
i can't formulate the words to. . .
. . .to tell you i'm in love with you
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
So?????
I dunno, seems a little mushy for Hiei, but, what am i gonna do?
Next chappie will be when they finally tell each other. . .should be interesting. . .actually its being a thorn in my side, it might take a while to be completed. . . writer's block, i hate it. . .
!!!!!!!!Review!!!!!!!!!!