Warning: Guess what its a lemon. . .and not just any lemon, its a Yaoi lemon. . .don't like, too bad, leave!
Disclaimer: I own nada, zip, nothing. . .Ha, right, to think my mind could come up with such great characters to write about. . .don't sue me, i don't exaggerate, i have all of $2.50 to my name.
Author's Note: Lemme just say to write this (and the next chapter) was one of the weirdest experiences of my life. . . i was blessed with an over active imagination and after reading a suggestion someone sent me the idea itched the back of my mind until i finally gave up and let it out on paper. . .
I warn you this is my first and, so far, only attempt at a lemon. . .well actually its a lime, i think. . .wait I THINK?. . .sorry it amazed me *ahem* anywho, i have no idea if its good, I've never read a lemon in the form of a poem so i have nothing to judge it against
This is written in Hiei's pt. of view as he. . .well ya get the picture. I wrote it this way due to the simple fact it was a lot easier for me to write about being the inexperienced one. . . not that i know anything at all either way. . . otay, now that i've said WAY too much, please read and review.
Oh quick note, the words in ::'s are what Hiei says outloud. . .Kurama's words are in "". . .and i apologize on how i spelled certain grunts. . . just use your imagination
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~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Nothing Yet *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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::Show me::
Soft flesh touching flesh
gentle and yet harsh
you skilled tongue ravaging me
emitting in gasps, breath
unknowingly i held.
::Ahhn::
I lay frozen in a state of bliss
unable to move or breath
as sensations flow from your fingertips
caressing skin, before untouched
and heating my fire within.
::Kurama::
Moan in disappointment
as your mouth and hands grow still
open my eyes to emerald pools
hazed by lust and need. . .
without warning you go down on me.
::K-ah. . .::
Quick intake of breath
My voice cut short
as nerves and thoughts go berserk
involuntarily arch my back
almost too much to take
::...mmh::
Smiled at my lose of words
me, reduced to grunts and moans
losing myself to this pleasure
you so readily present
need, want, more
::Please::
in response, change your pace
creating new vibrant waves
pleasure shooting to every limb
like heaven and hell combine
too much, too good
::AUHHHH::
Grin and lick the remaining drops
sighing sensually
lying back,
i shiver from intensity
limp and content.
::You're so good::
Green eyes dance mischeviously
Leaning foward, face to face
in quick whispery breath
"but you've seen nothing, yet"
you smile deviously.
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a\n: Sorry about cutting this poem short. . .te he, just a good place to stop and let your imaginations soar, eh? *Mwahahahah*
Ahem. . .any who next chapter will be more...um, conclusive?
!!!!!!Review!!!!!!!!
Disclaimer: I own nada, zip, nothing. . .Ha, right, to think my mind could come up with such great characters to write about. . .don't sue me, i don't exaggerate, i have all of $2.50 to my name.
Author's Note: Lemme just say to write this (and the next chapter) was one of the weirdest experiences of my life. . . i was blessed with an over active imagination and after reading a suggestion someone sent me the idea itched the back of my mind until i finally gave up and let it out on paper. . .
I warn you this is my first and, so far, only attempt at a lemon. . .well actually its a lime, i think. . .wait I THINK?. . .sorry it amazed me *ahem* anywho, i have no idea if its good, I've never read a lemon in the form of a poem so i have nothing to judge it against
This is written in Hiei's pt. of view as he. . .well ya get the picture. I wrote it this way due to the simple fact it was a lot easier for me to write about being the inexperienced one. . . not that i know anything at all either way. . . otay, now that i've said WAY too much, please read and review.
Oh quick note, the words in ::'s are what Hiei says outloud. . .Kurama's words are in "". . .and i apologize on how i spelled certain grunts. . . just use your imagination
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Nothing Yet *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
::Show me::
Soft flesh touching flesh
gentle and yet harsh
you skilled tongue ravaging me
emitting in gasps, breath
unknowingly i held.
::Ahhn::
I lay frozen in a state of bliss
unable to move or breath
as sensations flow from your fingertips
caressing skin, before untouched
and heating my fire within.
::Kurama::
Moan in disappointment
as your mouth and hands grow still
open my eyes to emerald pools
hazed by lust and need. . .
without warning you go down on me.
::K-ah. . .::
Quick intake of breath
My voice cut short
as nerves and thoughts go berserk
involuntarily arch my back
almost too much to take
::...mmh::
Smiled at my lose of words
me, reduced to grunts and moans
losing myself to this pleasure
you so readily present
need, want, more
::Please::
in response, change your pace
creating new vibrant waves
pleasure shooting to every limb
like heaven and hell combine
too much, too good
::AUHHHH::
Grin and lick the remaining drops
sighing sensually
lying back,
i shiver from intensity
limp and content.
::You're so good::
Green eyes dance mischeviously
Leaning foward, face to face
in quick whispery breath
"but you've seen nothing, yet"
you smile deviously.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
a\n: Sorry about cutting this poem short. . .te he, just a good place to stop and let your imaginations soar, eh? *Mwahahahah*
Ahem. . .any who next chapter will be more...um, conclusive?
!!!!!!Review!!!!!!!!