(Rika's pov)
So this how if feels to be in high school, a regular school, a public one? It's very strange here. Everyone looking so happy, never worried, never angry, people talking, people bickering, never a sad face. everyone looks so joined. . . together. I feel so out of place here. Not like .
Even the uniforms feel strange to me; feeling the material, the blue and white ones, I dislike them very much. I prefer the ones the boys wear; if it weren't against the dress code, I'd much rather wear the black and white they wear. I'm not exactly fond of black and white, but I'd get used to it, I suppose. Black is one of my favorite colors. Black, purple I love them. But white..
I'm not look like most girls my age. Most girls like pink, or light purple, not the dark purple I wear. But then what do I know? I haven't been among a lot of kids, so how would I know?
I haven't been in a public school, not since grade school. All of the smiling faces, all the wonderful kids, running out to recess. Those are the fond memories as a child. My mother picking me up from school. The friends crowded around me, joking, playing.
There were wonderful teachers there to. I felt they understood me. They wanted to help me learn not place strict orders on me.
I've never really, I don't know, I've never felt like I was in a place where I belonged, not since second grade, not since I was taken out of that school. I've always felt so different. I wish I could go back, back to those years, relive them. But no, I don't. I wouldn't want to go back in a time machine. I'd be too afraid I'd mess up time and not be able to live them as I imagined. I would somehow mess up the future.
I guess I am a bit of a worrywart. I'm always worried, scared about stuff. Even though, people don't see that side. The one I don't share. They see the outside. They don't see the inside. They don't see the sadness. It's the tough, sarcastic mean person I allow them to see. Sometimes I guess I can be a jerk. But I can't open up. They cannot see me thy cant .No it cant be aloud to see me. They can't see inside the, my walls.
Start of Toru's POV
It seems like only a month ago that I started high school. I remember that day, everything seemed so big and I felt so little. I was so scared.
I've grown up lot, changed so much, made friends. Hanna and Uwa have always been there for me, but I've found some new friends along the way
Kio, Shiguro, Yuki what they have given me so much. They have put a rouf over my head, paid for my food, but most importantly they cared for me! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO how did I do this was better. I mean this chap had better spelling, and it was a bit longer. But I bet I will get no reviews .I neveerrrrrrrrrrrrrr GET REVIEWS!!! So review me dam you. And for all those who don't may you rot in helllllll!!!
Ok now time to answer reviews.(only 5 of them) The first one is from .......Venom's Savior Hmm..I like it. Yes, you did make spelling and grammatical errors in your writing. It's a good beginning. I'll give you a score on the next chapter. It's a rule of mine. NEVER score the first chapters no matter HOW good they are. (..or bad.)
The Critic, Savior
Venom: I'm this critic's more blunt/rude side. It's good and everything...but you honestly need a little work on Akito's POV. The grammar in the first bit was great! Akito's POV had... Savior: What did I tell you about underminding me! Venom: I'm not. I'm going behind your back and telling this person what they need to work on. Savior: ...You're actually doing something right? (blacks out) Venom: *sigh* I'll get back to you on this...(picks Savior up.)
THANK YOU Savior but Venom I HATE YOU YOU EVIL critic (BRETH) MY SPELING SUKS I KNOW BUT YOU DON'T half to (sniff) be mean .__ man y me mmmmmeeeeeeee Seriously if you have a bad comment keep it to you're self. OH and by the way I don't one any animes.
So this how if feels to be in high school, a regular school, a public one? It's very strange here. Everyone looking so happy, never worried, never angry, people talking, people bickering, never a sad face. everyone looks so joined. . . together. I feel so out of place here. Not like .
Even the uniforms feel strange to me; feeling the material, the blue and white ones, I dislike them very much. I prefer the ones the boys wear; if it weren't against the dress code, I'd much rather wear the black and white they wear. I'm not exactly fond of black and white, but I'd get used to it, I suppose. Black is one of my favorite colors. Black, purple I love them. But white..
I'm not look like most girls my age. Most girls like pink, or light purple, not the dark purple I wear. But then what do I know? I haven't been among a lot of kids, so how would I know?
I haven't been in a public school, not since grade school. All of the smiling faces, all the wonderful kids, running out to recess. Those are the fond memories as a child. My mother picking me up from school. The friends crowded around me, joking, playing.
There were wonderful teachers there to. I felt they understood me. They wanted to help me learn not place strict orders on me.
I've never really, I don't know, I've never felt like I was in a place where I belonged, not since second grade, not since I was taken out of that school. I've always felt so different. I wish I could go back, back to those years, relive them. But no, I don't. I wouldn't want to go back in a time machine. I'd be too afraid I'd mess up time and not be able to live them as I imagined. I would somehow mess up the future.
I guess I am a bit of a worrywart. I'm always worried, scared about stuff. Even though, people don't see that side. The one I don't share. They see the outside. They don't see the inside. They don't see the sadness. It's the tough, sarcastic mean person I allow them to see. Sometimes I guess I can be a jerk. But I can't open up. They cannot see me thy cant .No it cant be aloud to see me. They can't see inside the, my walls.
Start of Toru's POV
It seems like only a month ago that I started high school. I remember that day, everything seemed so big and I felt so little. I was so scared.
I've grown up lot, changed so much, made friends. Hanna and Uwa have always been there for me, but I've found some new friends along the way
Kio, Shiguro, Yuki what they have given me so much. They have put a rouf over my head, paid for my food, but most importantly they cared for me! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO how did I do this was better. I mean this chap had better spelling, and it was a bit longer. But I bet I will get no reviews .I neveerrrrrrrrrrrrrr GET REVIEWS!!! So review me dam you. And for all those who don't may you rot in helllllll!!!
Ok now time to answer reviews.(only 5 of them) The first one is from .......Venom's Savior Hmm..I like it. Yes, you did make spelling and grammatical errors in your writing. It's a good beginning. I'll give you a score on the next chapter. It's a rule of mine. NEVER score the first chapters no matter HOW good they are. (..or bad.)
The Critic, Savior
Venom: I'm this critic's more blunt/rude side. It's good and everything...but you honestly need a little work on Akito's POV. The grammar in the first bit was great! Akito's POV had... Savior: What did I tell you about underminding me! Venom: I'm not. I'm going behind your back and telling this person what they need to work on. Savior: ...You're actually doing something right? (blacks out) Venom: *sigh* I'll get back to you on this...(picks Savior up.)
THANK YOU Savior but Venom I HATE YOU YOU EVIL critic (BRETH) MY SPELING SUKS I KNOW BUT YOU DON'T half to (sniff) be mean .__ man y me mmmmmeeeeeeee Seriously if you have a bad comment keep it to you're self. OH and by the way I don't one any animes.