Hello everyone. I would like an opinion. I'm debating on whether or not rewriting this story so that Sofia's age is more consistent and I can add in more details. I've reread my work on this story and feel like it's hard to tell what Sofia's age really is as the story progresses.
I feel as if the story could have a bit more depth to it than just a random really deep chapter and go to a really light chapter that kinda skips over the deep stuff.
Comment what you would like to see. If I should continue on in the style I like from this moment forward and continue this story as is, just adding in the parts I want to. Or rewrite it completely so it's not a confusing jump in chapters.
Thank you all who read this story and I am happy that those who do are happy with how I put it together.
~Immortalshark
