Okay everyone, announcement time.
The Young Stag will be undergoing a pretty heavy revision process for the next three to four weeks to try and fix some things in the earlier chapters. Looking back, not much of it made sense and there was some pretty bad writing in it on my part. Most of said revisions will occur in the first thirty chapters, and there will likely be no serious alterations to the story as a whole. We will still end up at the same point the story is right now, just with some details changed.
I will notify you as soon as the revisions are completed; hopefully the story will make more sense when they're done.