Hey again, thanks if you reviewed the first chapter, please R&R the second too (^_^)
O.o I just realised how short these chapters actually are so I'll deffinetely post two chapters everytime I update (^_^)
Oh, and Natahlia was raised by Voldemort and his followers was what I meant to say. He used the death eaters etc and well if you've read book four then you'll know that Voldemort still was in contact with his followers, giving them orders, thanks to Lady Feylene for pointing out that I hadn't explained properly (^_^)
Any feedback is good, I really want to improve my writing as much as possible so good and bad willbe good O.o if that makes sense
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Chapter 2: The Difference Between You and I
A small hooded figure snuck around corners, it was Natahlia, ducking into each small space that she would fit, she kept well-hidden from the thousands of muggles that wondered around the platforms catching other trains. Finally she walked through that barrier that hid platform 9 and 3/4 from the muggle world. This platform was full of Witches and Wizards that would be going to Hogwarts as well.
"Natahlia!" A voice called, the hooded girl turned around to face the Malfoys, they had been waiting for her. Natahlia lowered her hood, her silky hair fell off of her shoulders, she bowed to Mr. Malfoy.
"Hello Lucius, Narcissa, Draco" She said, she then stood up properly,'There are so many muggles around here...' Natahlia looked around, any ordinary Witch or wizard could pick out a muggle born from a mile away, they stood out a fair bit.
'Yes, it's rediculouse. Anyway' Draco Malfoy said as he turned to face his father,'Father we should be on the train, it leaves in exactly one minute'
'Yes Draco, off you go. Natahlia, good luck with your task, it is going to be difficult with Dumbledore keeping a close watch but the other Slytherins will help you' Lucius Malfoy said.
'Thank you.' Natahlia said, she then turned and followed Draco onto the train.
Just as soon as Natahlia, Draco and his friends, Crabbe and Goyle had found a compartment on the train, it began to start the journey towards Hogwarts.
Draco flopped into his chair with a sigh and slouched, but Natahlia sat uncomfortably on the seat, her back very straight. Draco took note of this at once, yes, he was like this around his father but certainly no more than he had to be.
"He's not around you know, you can relax" Draco said as he took a sip of the butter beer he had brought with him.
"I am here on orders, I am to fofill them, everything has an order, the order must be obeyed" Natahlia said, Draco was rather shocked at this.
"But...that's not normal"
"People have different opinions of what is normal, I have trained all my life for this year, you on the other hand, have had everything offered to you on a silver platter, that is the difference between you and I" Natahlia said, she then turned and faced outside her window, she did not say another word to anyone the rest of the way.
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Woohoo! Please review! (^_^) ...that rhymed hehe!
O.o I just realised how short these chapters actually are so I'll deffinetely post two chapters everytime I update (^_^)
Oh, and Natahlia was raised by Voldemort and his followers was what I meant to say. He used the death eaters etc and well if you've read book four then you'll know that Voldemort still was in contact with his followers, giving them orders, thanks to Lady Feylene for pointing out that I hadn't explained properly (^_^)
Any feedback is good, I really want to improve my writing as much as possible so good and bad willbe good O.o if that makes sense
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Chapter 2: The Difference Between You and I
A small hooded figure snuck around corners, it was Natahlia, ducking into each small space that she would fit, she kept well-hidden from the thousands of muggles that wondered around the platforms catching other trains. Finally she walked through that barrier that hid platform 9 and 3/4 from the muggle world. This platform was full of Witches and Wizards that would be going to Hogwarts as well.
"Natahlia!" A voice called, the hooded girl turned around to face the Malfoys, they had been waiting for her. Natahlia lowered her hood, her silky hair fell off of her shoulders, she bowed to Mr. Malfoy.
"Hello Lucius, Narcissa, Draco" She said, she then stood up properly,'There are so many muggles around here...' Natahlia looked around, any ordinary Witch or wizard could pick out a muggle born from a mile away, they stood out a fair bit.
'Yes, it's rediculouse. Anyway' Draco Malfoy said as he turned to face his father,'Father we should be on the train, it leaves in exactly one minute'
'Yes Draco, off you go. Natahlia, good luck with your task, it is going to be difficult with Dumbledore keeping a close watch but the other Slytherins will help you' Lucius Malfoy said.
'Thank you.' Natahlia said, she then turned and followed Draco onto the train.
Just as soon as Natahlia, Draco and his friends, Crabbe and Goyle had found a compartment on the train, it began to start the journey towards Hogwarts.
Draco flopped into his chair with a sigh and slouched, but Natahlia sat uncomfortably on the seat, her back very straight. Draco took note of this at once, yes, he was like this around his father but certainly no more than he had to be.
"He's not around you know, you can relax" Draco said as he took a sip of the butter beer he had brought with him.
"I am here on orders, I am to fofill them, everything has an order, the order must be obeyed" Natahlia said, Draco was rather shocked at this.
"But...that's not normal"
"People have different opinions of what is normal, I have trained all my life for this year, you on the other hand, have had everything offered to you on a silver platter, that is the difference between you and I" Natahlia said, she then turned and faced outside her window, she did not say another word to anyone the rest of the way.
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Woohoo! Please review! (^_^) ...that rhymed hehe!