Chapter 3 A Call for Help
Manny opened the door and felt the gust of fresh air hit her face. As she walked down the steps she could feel the tears forming in her eyes, she knew that she had to get home but her emotions were getting the best of her. As one tear slipped down her cheek, she quickly wiped it away. "Manny" a voice called from behind. Manny ran as fast as she could she had to get home before she broke down. The running made her stomach hurt even more but she ignored the pain and kept running. " Manny" the voice called out again, Manny ran faster and faster but she could still hear the voice calling her and it sounded closer every time. When Manny was positive she wasn't being followed anymore she stopped to catch her breath. As she looked around she realized she was at the park before she could take off running again she felt a cold arm grab her from behind. "Don't scream" the voice ordered.
Meanwhile Craig was trying to figure out what to do. "Man she sure was in a lot of pain, I wonder if she went to the hospital," Craig thought to himself. He decided to do the only thing he could think of doing he reached into his pocket grabbed his cell phone and dialed the only number that came into his mind.
Phone call
Emma: Hello Nelson and Simpson residence (yes in my story spike and snake are married)
Craig: Emma I need to talk to you its about Manny
Emma: (worried) what's wrong Craig?
Craig knew that if he told Emma the whole story not only would they not find Manny in time.
Craig: Emma, Manny is gone and I think you need to find her before its too late.
Once again thanks for all the great replies, and I will continue as soon as I get some feedback on this chapter.
Manny opened the door and felt the gust of fresh air hit her face. As she walked down the steps she could feel the tears forming in her eyes, she knew that she had to get home but her emotions were getting the best of her. As one tear slipped down her cheek, she quickly wiped it away. "Manny" a voice called from behind. Manny ran as fast as she could she had to get home before she broke down. The running made her stomach hurt even more but she ignored the pain and kept running. " Manny" the voice called out again, Manny ran faster and faster but she could still hear the voice calling her and it sounded closer every time. When Manny was positive she wasn't being followed anymore she stopped to catch her breath. As she looked around she realized she was at the park before she could take off running again she felt a cold arm grab her from behind. "Don't scream" the voice ordered.
Meanwhile Craig was trying to figure out what to do. "Man she sure was in a lot of pain, I wonder if she went to the hospital," Craig thought to himself. He decided to do the only thing he could think of doing he reached into his pocket grabbed his cell phone and dialed the only number that came into his mind.
Phone call
Emma: Hello Nelson and Simpson residence (yes in my story spike and snake are married)
Craig: Emma I need to talk to you its about Manny
Emma: (worried) what's wrong Craig?
Craig knew that if he told Emma the whole story not only would they not find Manny in time.
Craig: Emma, Manny is gone and I think you need to find her before its too late.
Once again thanks for all the great replies, and I will continue as soon as I get some feedback on this chapter.