Hello Everyone,
I wrote "Consummation" as a two chapter smutlet, and began a longer story
to accompany it. I will begin posting those chapters today. I may write
more smutty interludes, because they're a great deal of fun, but they will
most likely be posted as stand alones unless they work as a continuation of
"consummation".
Last spring, "consummation" and the first eight chapters were posted
together as one story. All of the chapters have been revised very slightly,
but they have only undergone a quick edit by yours truly. I received one
honest but aggressive post about the editing for this story, so I would
like to put out a request for a volunteer beta. I can be reached via email
at violentvi @ hotmail . com if anyone is interested.
I feel that I should address J.S. Sumner's review simply because it irked
me. I welcome constructive criticism, but have no wish to read anything
that is aggressively or rudely phrased. Furthermore, when writing
complaints about an author's technical skills, it is always wise to check
your own message for errors.
Lastly, the story that accompanies 'consummation" will be posted as
"Consummation pt II", but I would very much appreciate suggestions for a
different title.
Thanks for reading, and for the reviews!
-Violet
