Guess what? I've got Chapter 2 out!!!
Oh, I guess you knew that. Well let me tell you now.
You're in for a heavy-hitting treat!
Even while writing this I nearly broke out in tears myself. (Individual results not guaranteed.)
Disclaimer: Yo, I don't own DBZ, though it doesn't really matter too much yet, but you never know...
Claimer: Alex, Kinkilla, and any other characters I introduce belong to only two people. Me and themselves. ^.^
Alex: Why'd you put that there?
Alex Ultra: 'Cause I felt like it.
Alex: Oh.
Alex Ultra: By the way, if you don't know where chapter one ended, then you won't really know where chapter two starts. Will you?
Alex: I don't know, there are some psychics out there ya know...
Alex Ultra: -_-
Here's chapter 2, hope ya like it!
~~~~~~*** NOT FRIEZA ***~~~~~~
What in the world? Who is this guy?
I had opened the door only to find an oddity. Where before I had expected to find a cat or my brother, instead I found some strange, alien-looking creature sprawled out on some boxes.
"What's going on down there?" Oh, right, 8:30, everyone's still awake. That was my dad by the way.
"Nothing!" I tried to sound as if I had knocked that stuff over, mostly because I must have thought I was dreaming or... something...
I lowered my voice to a whisper and addressed the strange creature in front of me. "Okay, you, let's see what you look like." Flip. I turned on the light.
At first glance I didn't know what to think of him. Host of him was jet- black, except for big, blood-red areas on his shoulders that reminded me of shoulder pads, and on the sides of his head.
Strangely, his face looked familiar...
...
...
... (Don't you just love suspense?)
I know! I know who he looks like!
He looks like Frieza with a makeover!
"Unh..." The one who looks like Frieza (A/N: now I'll just call him Frieza until she (or he, whatever...) learns what his name really is... you'll see what'll come of it...) groaned as he came to, showing his long, razor- sharp, blood-red teeth.
He then opened his eyes, those cold, angry eyes. I'll never forget the eyes. Where they should be white, instead there was the same hard, jet- black color as the rest of his skin, and the irises were the same red color as his teeth. All in all, he looked more evil than scary.
It was his attitude that made him scary...
Before I even knew what had happened he stood up and angrily yelled, "Alright! Who did that!?"
"H-huh? I-I don't... know. I was just about to go to bed, I heard a crash and found you here." He only humphed, looking at me with submissive anger, somehow, he must have felt like he deserved more information.
And somehow, I felt obligated to say something. "Y-You know..." I looked him over, "you kind of look like Frieza..." Maybe that was the wrong thing to say...
Almost immediately his eyes opened wide and he (for lack of better word) spazzed out! "I AM NOT FRIEZA!!! Frieza is no more! Frieza was weak and I am strong!!!" I could tell that he was lost in his own mind. But he soon calmed down and smiled at me, which made me uncomfortable because it was that kind of smile you always see just before someone dies. "You know... I don't think I'll kill you just yet. You've managed to anger me so I think I'll kill everyone else instead. And by the way," his smile became even more scary, "my name is Kinkilla. Ha ha!!"
Oh, great! What am I going to do now!? And did I bring him here?! He's already gone through the floor to the Living room so I haven't got much time, but, what can I do to someone who's stronger than Frieza?
~~~~~~
The crack of the floor brought everyone out to where he rose through it. "No! Please!? Don't!" He looked side-eyed at me, and only snickered as he extended his hand and opened his palm.
"Now who should I kill first?" I can't remember what anyone else said, bit I'm sure it was something like "Hey! Who are you?" and, "How did you get in here?" and I think I heard the word "Kill?"
"No, stop!" I could only beg, but it didn't matter, he wasn't listening.
"Oh! Man! No way!" The only other one in the house who watched DBZ, and he knew what came next. So he was the first to die.
I was shocked, I could only manage to choke out, "No!"
Encouraged by my reaction he quickly killed them all.
Brother, sister, mother, father. All gone, right before my eyes.
He saw my reaction, snickered again, powered up (destroying the whole house) and flew into the sky, laughing loudly now.
I was left there, alone. More alone now than before. Before I was lonely. Now I was alone.
Kinkilla laughed loudly as he went to systematically destroying each house in my small town. One-by-one, each house was incinerated.
But I wasn't there, I was alone, the pictures of the houses seeming to come to me from a distance.
All Dead.
My Fault.
All Dead.
My Fault.
Why?
Then it struck me... Kinkilla would have killed them all anyway. I could see it in his eyes. Angering him only meant that he was making me live through it! He lived for the sole purpose of killing. The lives of others meant nothing to him. And it was up to me.
Suddenly all the events around me, the exploding houses, the falling trees, the people!
I heard the sirens of the police car (we only had one...) and cringed as I heard the reports of his pitiful little handgun that was his entire arsenal. I could feel the tears burning their way into my eyes. ... GEEZE!!! I hadn't cried since the fifth grade!
But this was different... this was people being senselessly killed, and totally helpless to stop it!
"AAAAHHHH!!!"
The officer's tortured scream pierced into my heart, and something told me that I had to do... well, something.
Faster than I knew I could, I stood up, and prepared to confront Kinkilla, and probably die. But the sound of an unfamiliar voice stopped me.
"Wow! Hey, can I get your autograph?"
~~~ Kinkilla's POV ~~~
Yes, I saw that boy. He wanted me to sign his notebook...
IMPUDENT DISTRACTIONS!!! I have no time to sign my name for a dead man!
Perhaps it was because I was angry with the boy. Maybe that was why I used a little too much ki. So far I had been careful not to kill the boy who had insulted me.
I looked at him as I aimed for Idiot (you know who). His wide eyes accentuated by the tears running down his ugly little face.
BOOOOOOOMM!!!
I blasted slightly too hard, judging by the power levels of these people, I thought I had killed them both.
Pity, I wasn't finished torturing him... oh, well.
~~~ Me again ~~~
"No." I could only whisper it, over and over. My anger was reaching its limit.
Perhaps that's what saved me.
BOOOOOOOMM!!!
His blast nearly killed me, but somehow, like when Gohan managed to crack Raditz's armor, my pure anger allowed me to call enough ki to protect myself. Though I didn't really realize it...
I only knew that I needed to confront him, before he killed anybody else.
"KINKILLAAAAAA!!! Does it really please you to kill everyone you SEE!!!???"
"Actually, boy, yes, it does! But it's not enough to simply kill them!"
Shocked and confused, I could only manage to ask him what he meant.
"Once I'm done with their lives. I then destroy their souls!!!" His snickers and comment struck me. Who, or what kind of monster, would deny someone their soul?!?!
~~~~~~*** END OF CHAPTER 2 ***~~~~~~
(Alex Ultra pulls out the tape recorder and presses 'Play', the tape recorder immediately chimes a pre-recorded message.) "How was it? Good, bad, could be better? I want to know. This message will self-destruct if Alex Ultra does not get any Reviews."
Did it bring tears to your eyes? Honestly, even though I had gone through it several times in my head, I nearly broke out in tears while writing it!!!
Anyway, don't be disappointed if the chapters for this story don't go one after another in postings. I wish I had that much time, but the truth is that I don't [sobs]...
Alex: WWWWAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Alex Ultra: What's wrong with you???
Alex: It-it-it's just so sad!!!
Alex Ultra: But you already knew all this stuff!!!
Alex: I know! But watching you write it and-and-and I just couldn't help it!! [Continues crying uncontrollably]
Alex Ultra: Uh, while I try to get Alex to calm down, why don't you check out her first story 'Hidden Power' and read her exploits there. I hope to get to the good stuff in both stories, it's true I've already got some good stuff in both of them, but neither one is as developed as I would like...
~~~ Preview of next chapter ~~~
"FEEDBACK!!" And suddenly, I could no longer control my own ki like I should have. I spiraled out of control, but it shouldn't have been me...
~~~ Sorry, that's it... ~~~
Oh, I guess you knew that. Well let me tell you now.
You're in for a heavy-hitting treat!
Even while writing this I nearly broke out in tears myself. (Individual results not guaranteed.)
Disclaimer: Yo, I don't own DBZ, though it doesn't really matter too much yet, but you never know...
Claimer: Alex, Kinkilla, and any other characters I introduce belong to only two people. Me and themselves. ^.^
Alex: Why'd you put that there?
Alex Ultra: 'Cause I felt like it.
Alex: Oh.
Alex Ultra: By the way, if you don't know where chapter one ended, then you won't really know where chapter two starts. Will you?
Alex: I don't know, there are some psychics out there ya know...
Alex Ultra: -_-
Here's chapter 2, hope ya like it!
~~~~~~*** NOT FRIEZA ***~~~~~~
What in the world? Who is this guy?
I had opened the door only to find an oddity. Where before I had expected to find a cat or my brother, instead I found some strange, alien-looking creature sprawled out on some boxes.
"What's going on down there?" Oh, right, 8:30, everyone's still awake. That was my dad by the way.
"Nothing!" I tried to sound as if I had knocked that stuff over, mostly because I must have thought I was dreaming or... something...
I lowered my voice to a whisper and addressed the strange creature in front of me. "Okay, you, let's see what you look like." Flip. I turned on the light.
At first glance I didn't know what to think of him. Host of him was jet- black, except for big, blood-red areas on his shoulders that reminded me of shoulder pads, and on the sides of his head.
Strangely, his face looked familiar...
...
...
... (Don't you just love suspense?)
I know! I know who he looks like!
He looks like Frieza with a makeover!
"Unh..." The one who looks like Frieza (A/N: now I'll just call him Frieza until she (or he, whatever...) learns what his name really is... you'll see what'll come of it...) groaned as he came to, showing his long, razor- sharp, blood-red teeth.
He then opened his eyes, those cold, angry eyes. I'll never forget the eyes. Where they should be white, instead there was the same hard, jet- black color as the rest of his skin, and the irises were the same red color as his teeth. All in all, he looked more evil than scary.
It was his attitude that made him scary...
Before I even knew what had happened he stood up and angrily yelled, "Alright! Who did that!?"
"H-huh? I-I don't... know. I was just about to go to bed, I heard a crash and found you here." He only humphed, looking at me with submissive anger, somehow, he must have felt like he deserved more information.
And somehow, I felt obligated to say something. "Y-You know..." I looked him over, "you kind of look like Frieza..." Maybe that was the wrong thing to say...
Almost immediately his eyes opened wide and he (for lack of better word) spazzed out! "I AM NOT FRIEZA!!! Frieza is no more! Frieza was weak and I am strong!!!" I could tell that he was lost in his own mind. But he soon calmed down and smiled at me, which made me uncomfortable because it was that kind of smile you always see just before someone dies. "You know... I don't think I'll kill you just yet. You've managed to anger me so I think I'll kill everyone else instead. And by the way," his smile became even more scary, "my name is Kinkilla. Ha ha!!"
Oh, great! What am I going to do now!? And did I bring him here?! He's already gone through the floor to the Living room so I haven't got much time, but, what can I do to someone who's stronger than Frieza?
~~~~~~
The crack of the floor brought everyone out to where he rose through it. "No! Please!? Don't!" He looked side-eyed at me, and only snickered as he extended his hand and opened his palm.
"Now who should I kill first?" I can't remember what anyone else said, bit I'm sure it was something like "Hey! Who are you?" and, "How did you get in here?" and I think I heard the word "Kill?"
"No, stop!" I could only beg, but it didn't matter, he wasn't listening.
"Oh! Man! No way!" The only other one in the house who watched DBZ, and he knew what came next. So he was the first to die.
I was shocked, I could only manage to choke out, "No!"
Encouraged by my reaction he quickly killed them all.
Brother, sister, mother, father. All gone, right before my eyes.
He saw my reaction, snickered again, powered up (destroying the whole house) and flew into the sky, laughing loudly now.
I was left there, alone. More alone now than before. Before I was lonely. Now I was alone.
Kinkilla laughed loudly as he went to systematically destroying each house in my small town. One-by-one, each house was incinerated.
But I wasn't there, I was alone, the pictures of the houses seeming to come to me from a distance.
All Dead.
My Fault.
All Dead.
My Fault.
Why?
Then it struck me... Kinkilla would have killed them all anyway. I could see it in his eyes. Angering him only meant that he was making me live through it! He lived for the sole purpose of killing. The lives of others meant nothing to him. And it was up to me.
Suddenly all the events around me, the exploding houses, the falling trees, the people!
I heard the sirens of the police car (we only had one...) and cringed as I heard the reports of his pitiful little handgun that was his entire arsenal. I could feel the tears burning their way into my eyes. ... GEEZE!!! I hadn't cried since the fifth grade!
But this was different... this was people being senselessly killed, and totally helpless to stop it!
"AAAAHHHH!!!"
The officer's tortured scream pierced into my heart, and something told me that I had to do... well, something.
Faster than I knew I could, I stood up, and prepared to confront Kinkilla, and probably die. But the sound of an unfamiliar voice stopped me.
"Wow! Hey, can I get your autograph?"
~~~ Kinkilla's POV ~~~
Yes, I saw that boy. He wanted me to sign his notebook...
IMPUDENT DISTRACTIONS!!! I have no time to sign my name for a dead man!
Perhaps it was because I was angry with the boy. Maybe that was why I used a little too much ki. So far I had been careful not to kill the boy who had insulted me.
I looked at him as I aimed for Idiot (you know who). His wide eyes accentuated by the tears running down his ugly little face.
BOOOOOOOMM!!!
I blasted slightly too hard, judging by the power levels of these people, I thought I had killed them both.
Pity, I wasn't finished torturing him... oh, well.
~~~ Me again ~~~
"No." I could only whisper it, over and over. My anger was reaching its limit.
Perhaps that's what saved me.
BOOOOOOOMM!!!
His blast nearly killed me, but somehow, like when Gohan managed to crack Raditz's armor, my pure anger allowed me to call enough ki to protect myself. Though I didn't really realize it...
I only knew that I needed to confront him, before he killed anybody else.
"KINKILLAAAAAA!!! Does it really please you to kill everyone you SEE!!!???"
"Actually, boy, yes, it does! But it's not enough to simply kill them!"
Shocked and confused, I could only manage to ask him what he meant.
"Once I'm done with their lives. I then destroy their souls!!!" His snickers and comment struck me. Who, or what kind of monster, would deny someone their soul?!?!
~~~~~~*** END OF CHAPTER 2 ***~~~~~~
(Alex Ultra pulls out the tape recorder and presses 'Play', the tape recorder immediately chimes a pre-recorded message.) "How was it? Good, bad, could be better? I want to know. This message will self-destruct if Alex Ultra does not get any Reviews."
Did it bring tears to your eyes? Honestly, even though I had gone through it several times in my head, I nearly broke out in tears while writing it!!!
Anyway, don't be disappointed if the chapters for this story don't go one after another in postings. I wish I had that much time, but the truth is that I don't [sobs]...
Alex: WWWWAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Alex Ultra: What's wrong with you???
Alex: It-it-it's just so sad!!!
Alex Ultra: But you already knew all this stuff!!!
Alex: I know! But watching you write it and-and-and I just couldn't help it!! [Continues crying uncontrollably]
Alex Ultra: Uh, while I try to get Alex to calm down, why don't you check out her first story 'Hidden Power' and read her exploits there. I hope to get to the good stuff in both stories, it's true I've already got some good stuff in both of them, but neither one is as developed as I would like...
~~~ Preview of next chapter ~~~
"FEEDBACK!!" And suddenly, I could no longer control my own ki like I should have. I spiraled out of control, but it shouldn't have been me...
~~~ Sorry, that's it... ~~~