I'm back, and this chapter is a doozy. It's not a teary one, but good just
the same.
Alex: When am 'I' gonna change?! Huh?!
Alex Ultra: Soon! Be patient!
Alex: But I can't wait!
Alex Ultra: I said soon! Just not this chapter...
Alex: Why not?
Alex Ultra: Well, you're gonna change, just not THAT change...
Alex: ...?
Anyway, this chapter is going to be confusing. Mostly because it's going to be constantly switching between Alex's and Kinkilla's point of view. I'm mostly putting KK's comments in here in order to show how he's actually changing (him as Alex before changing).
When changing point-of-views I will use three squigglies (~~~). Just remember that it will switch directly from one to the other.
~~~~~~*** UNLOCK ***~~~~~~
~~~ Kinkilla's POV ~~~
Ah. I see the anger in his eyes. It's always so much more fun to kill a human when he's angry.
They always try to fight back when they're angry.
~~~
Impossible! How can anyone be so heartless? How can someone kill a soul?
No! I can't allow it! Even if it's the last thing I do! I will stop him! No matter what.
~~~
5... 6... 7...
His power is pathetic! But at last it's rising!
~~~
Can't let him go! This can't go on!
~~~
11... 12...13...
~~~
My anger was rising. My power was coming.
~~~
21... 25... 29...
~~~
It was starting to tingle now; I could tell it was coming.
~~~
40... 50... 60...
~~~
"Aaaaahhhhh!!" The strain was starting to catch up to me, so I tried harder.
~~~
100... 120... 145...
~~~
I still wasn't there, the closer I seemed to get to my maximum the higher it went. Which only fueled my rage.
~~~
190... 275... 350...
~~~
My power kept rising, I knew it was.
~~~
500... 600... 700...
~~~
The pain was starting, now more severe. My anger was growing.
~~~
950... 1075... 1200... Still nothing to worry about.
~~~
{Ahhh!} Every joint in my body was burning!
~~~
1400... 1800... 2200...
~~~
But even if it killed me! I would not give up!
~~~
2900... 35000... 4400...
~~~
I just know my eyes must have been glowing bright white about now. My ki was flaring around me in menacing flames.
~~~
5700... 7300... 9800...
~~~
The pain was everywhere now, every fiber of my being was screaming! BUT I WILL NOT STOP!!!
~~~
11600... 13400... 15200...
~~~
{No... they were... innocent people...} Now I was shaking uncontrollably, my ki rising ever more quickly.
~~~
How!? 17400... 19600... 21800...
~~~
{... they are... innocent souls!} And my anger rose... the pain taking back seat.
~~~
24100... 27200... 30300... !
~~~
{Kinkilla! I swear that I will not rest until ONE OF US IS DEAD!!!}
~~~
34000... 38000... 42000...
~~~
I couldn't go much farther, my body simply couldn't take it! That's what I get for working my ki but not my body....
~~~
{He's reaching his limit.} His ki finally stopped at 68,343. Which is still a rather meager number. Though I must admit, I hadn't seen power like this coming from a human since baldy watched me kill his daughter!
Ha Ha! What fun that was!
But it looks like his body can't control his own power!
All the more pathetic! This shouldn't take long.
~~~
"Hehe... Ahh!" Despite my failing body, I still had a trump-card. No matter HOW much power he had, he couldn't defend against this! That is, if it worked...
"Well, here goes!" I pulled my energy into a white ball around me.
~~~
The structure of his energy was changing! {Preparing to attack?! I'D LIKE TO SEE MIM TRY!!!}
~~~
"Alright... NOW!!!" I flexed my burning muscles, "FEEDBACK!!!" And my ki started expanding outward.
~~~~~~ Sorry ~~~~~~
Sorry, but I have to interrupt here. I just want to describe how Feedback is supposed to work.
An attack that locks-on to the first energy source it encounters then causes a feedback loop with varied results. Which means that almost anything could happen, at this point, Alex had never actually used it before...
~~~~~~ Back to Alex's POV ~~~~~~
"Get him! Get him!" This was a one-shot deal, I had used all my ki to make this attack, if it failed, I would be dead...
"What!? What's going on?!! My energy simply stopped expanding. But it was only halfway there! It had another 25 feet left!
Then I turned around, and gawked in horror.
My ki seemed to be getting sucked away!
It was then that I realized why... when Kinkilla came here, he must have come through some kind of gate, and it must still be there!
And now my Feedback was locked onto it, pulling my ki, and me as well, back through it.
I could only help to laugh. My one consolation being that I was going to the home world of Goku and the others, if nothing else, at least I could make allies... or even, a new family.
I could only laugh harder as my body and my ki was sucked through the portal, sealing it.
Oh, well. I didn't stand a chance against him anyway.
~~~
I watched as he was sucked away. Oh, well.
I'll get to him eventually.
But until then, I think I'll continue my killing spree...
After-all, I never forget a soul...
~~~~~~*** End of Chapter 3 ***~~~~~~
(Alex Ultra pulls out the tape recorder and presses 'Play', the tape recorder immediately chimes a pre-recorded message.) "How was it? Good, bad, could be better? I want to know. This message will self-destruct if Alex Ultra does not get any Reviews."
Well, that was murder. On my fingers I mean. All those numbers really hurt!
It shouldn't take TOO long before I update again, I really like this story and want to keep going. By the way, I know where this is going, but guessing can't hurt can it? If you want to guess what happens next, go ahead.
Alex decided to leave... somewhere. So I can't put our witty banter here for this chapter. Sorry! ;)
(Alex enters carrying 6 boxes of pizza.)
Alex: I'm back!!
Alex Ultra: O_0 Uh... do you need any help?
Alex: Nope! I'll just put them on the table here...
Alex Ultra: \-/ But why so many!!??
Alex: ^.^ 'Cause I invited Goku over!! And some of his friends!
Alex Ultra: [AAAHHH!!!] But that's not enough for them!!!
Alex: I know! [Points to window] Look outside...
Alex Ultra: [Looks out window and sees line of semis carrying pizza.] 0_O Uhhhhh... I think I need a bigger house...
Alex: [Looks around, then smiles innocently] Yeah! And you could do with some better furniture too!!
Goku: WE'RE HERE!!
Alex Ultra: [Sigh] Oh, noooo.
While I try to deal with Goku, why don't you review and tell me what you think...
Alex: When am 'I' gonna change?! Huh?!
Alex Ultra: Soon! Be patient!
Alex: But I can't wait!
Alex Ultra: I said soon! Just not this chapter...
Alex: Why not?
Alex Ultra: Well, you're gonna change, just not THAT change...
Alex: ...?
Anyway, this chapter is going to be confusing. Mostly because it's going to be constantly switching between Alex's and Kinkilla's point of view. I'm mostly putting KK's comments in here in order to show how he's actually changing (him as Alex before changing).
When changing point-of-views I will use three squigglies (~~~). Just remember that it will switch directly from one to the other.
~~~~~~*** UNLOCK ***~~~~~~
~~~ Kinkilla's POV ~~~
Ah. I see the anger in his eyes. It's always so much more fun to kill a human when he's angry.
They always try to fight back when they're angry.
~~~
Impossible! How can anyone be so heartless? How can someone kill a soul?
No! I can't allow it! Even if it's the last thing I do! I will stop him! No matter what.
~~~
5... 6... 7...
His power is pathetic! But at last it's rising!
~~~
Can't let him go! This can't go on!
~~~
11... 12...13...
~~~
My anger was rising. My power was coming.
~~~
21... 25... 29...
~~~
It was starting to tingle now; I could tell it was coming.
~~~
40... 50... 60...
~~~
"Aaaaahhhhh!!" The strain was starting to catch up to me, so I tried harder.
~~~
100... 120... 145...
~~~
I still wasn't there, the closer I seemed to get to my maximum the higher it went. Which only fueled my rage.
~~~
190... 275... 350...
~~~
My power kept rising, I knew it was.
~~~
500... 600... 700...
~~~
The pain was starting, now more severe. My anger was growing.
~~~
950... 1075... 1200... Still nothing to worry about.
~~~
{Ahhh!} Every joint in my body was burning!
~~~
1400... 1800... 2200...
~~~
But even if it killed me! I would not give up!
~~~
2900... 35000... 4400...
~~~
I just know my eyes must have been glowing bright white about now. My ki was flaring around me in menacing flames.
~~~
5700... 7300... 9800...
~~~
The pain was everywhere now, every fiber of my being was screaming! BUT I WILL NOT STOP!!!
~~~
11600... 13400... 15200...
~~~
{No... they were... innocent people...} Now I was shaking uncontrollably, my ki rising ever more quickly.
~~~
How!? 17400... 19600... 21800...
~~~
{... they are... innocent souls!} And my anger rose... the pain taking back seat.
~~~
24100... 27200... 30300... !
~~~
{Kinkilla! I swear that I will not rest until ONE OF US IS DEAD!!!}
~~~
34000... 38000... 42000...
~~~
I couldn't go much farther, my body simply couldn't take it! That's what I get for working my ki but not my body....
~~~
{He's reaching his limit.} His ki finally stopped at 68,343. Which is still a rather meager number. Though I must admit, I hadn't seen power like this coming from a human since baldy watched me kill his daughter!
Ha Ha! What fun that was!
But it looks like his body can't control his own power!
All the more pathetic! This shouldn't take long.
~~~
"Hehe... Ahh!" Despite my failing body, I still had a trump-card. No matter HOW much power he had, he couldn't defend against this! That is, if it worked...
"Well, here goes!" I pulled my energy into a white ball around me.
~~~
The structure of his energy was changing! {Preparing to attack?! I'D LIKE TO SEE MIM TRY!!!}
~~~
"Alright... NOW!!!" I flexed my burning muscles, "FEEDBACK!!!" And my ki started expanding outward.
~~~~~~ Sorry ~~~~~~
Sorry, but I have to interrupt here. I just want to describe how Feedback is supposed to work.
An attack that locks-on to the first energy source it encounters then causes a feedback loop with varied results. Which means that almost anything could happen, at this point, Alex had never actually used it before...
~~~~~~ Back to Alex's POV ~~~~~~
"Get him! Get him!" This was a one-shot deal, I had used all my ki to make this attack, if it failed, I would be dead...
"What!? What's going on?!! My energy simply stopped expanding. But it was only halfway there! It had another 25 feet left!
Then I turned around, and gawked in horror.
My ki seemed to be getting sucked away!
It was then that I realized why... when Kinkilla came here, he must have come through some kind of gate, and it must still be there!
And now my Feedback was locked onto it, pulling my ki, and me as well, back through it.
I could only help to laugh. My one consolation being that I was going to the home world of Goku and the others, if nothing else, at least I could make allies... or even, a new family.
I could only laugh harder as my body and my ki was sucked through the portal, sealing it.
Oh, well. I didn't stand a chance against him anyway.
~~~
I watched as he was sucked away. Oh, well.
I'll get to him eventually.
But until then, I think I'll continue my killing spree...
After-all, I never forget a soul...
~~~~~~*** End of Chapter 3 ***~~~~~~
(Alex Ultra pulls out the tape recorder and presses 'Play', the tape recorder immediately chimes a pre-recorded message.) "How was it? Good, bad, could be better? I want to know. This message will self-destruct if Alex Ultra does not get any Reviews."
Well, that was murder. On my fingers I mean. All those numbers really hurt!
It shouldn't take TOO long before I update again, I really like this story and want to keep going. By the way, I know where this is going, but guessing can't hurt can it? If you want to guess what happens next, go ahead.
Alex decided to leave... somewhere. So I can't put our witty banter here for this chapter. Sorry! ;)
(Alex enters carrying 6 boxes of pizza.)
Alex: I'm back!!
Alex Ultra: O_0 Uh... do you need any help?
Alex: Nope! I'll just put them on the table here...
Alex Ultra: \-/ But why so many!!??
Alex: ^.^ 'Cause I invited Goku over!! And some of his friends!
Alex Ultra: [AAAHHH!!!] But that's not enough for them!!!
Alex: I know! [Points to window] Look outside...
Alex Ultra: [Looks out window and sees line of semis carrying pizza.] 0_O Uhhhhh... I think I need a bigger house...
Alex: [Looks around, then smiles innocently] Yeah! And you could do with some better furniture too!!
Goku: WE'RE HERE!!
Alex Ultra: [Sigh] Oh, noooo.
While I try to deal with Goku, why don't you review and tell me what you think...