Thanks for all the reviews guys. Even though most of them were from my
friends. Hehe. Oh well, I still feel really good about myself. It's going
to get more to the point in this chapter.
I've started to write another story so keep a look out.
"Speaking" 'People thinking' [Bitbeasts thinking]
Beyblade miricales and missing teams!
"We, we, drew! That's never happened to me before." Said Marisa surprised.
"Really? Same hear." Said the blonde. "My names Kira."
"Nice to meet you Kira." Said Marisa.
"Well, I'll see you later." Kira said as she walked off waving.
'Wow. That's never happened to us Missy! Maybe I'll meet some new bladers at camp. No! I'm not going to enjoy it.'
[I think you should try and enjoy the camp.]
'Sorry, no can do.'
[Ok. But we could get a lot of practice done without any disturbances.]
'Maybe.' Marisa and her bit beast Missy had been able to talk to each other in their minds ever since Marisa got Missy. Marisa let out a huge sigh, which could only mean one thing. She was thinking about Mundian. She got her laptop out of her rucksack. She may have had a laptop but she was no computer geek. She typed in a message and e-mailed it to Mundian. She waited in the middle of the park for a reply. She waited around half an hour and still no answer. She sighed once more and walked back to her house to pack. Her parents were in the kitchen.
"How are you honey?" asked her mum. There was no reply. Marisa just stormed up the stairs and into her room.
'He hasn't replied to any of my e-mails.' She had been sending him e-mails ever since he moved to Japan eight months ago. Mundian hadn't contacted her in anyway. She sighed one last time and opened up her laptop. She went on the Internet and typed into the address bar the name of her favourite beyblade website. She loved the Internet nearly as much as she loved to blade. She looked on the News page. In front of her flashing in huge capitals said TORNEMENT! This is what Marisa lived for.
"A tournament, a tournament, a tournament!" she sang as she skipped round her bedroom. She sat down on her bed again and scrolled down the page to find a date. 20th July.
"OH NO!" Marisa screamed. The tournament was on the third day of camp.
'I could sneak out.'
[You'll probably need a diversion.] Marisa looked at the pocket in her red leather mini skirt. She saw a faint glow illuminating it. She reached into her pocket and pulled out Missy.
'Why? Why that day?'
[You'll need to make friends to get a diversion.] Missy was trying so hard to make Marisa happy when she went ton camp.
At the bottom of the page on the website she saw an application form. She entered her details and submitted them.
[You're entering?]
'Of course! How could I miss a tournament.'
[I think you missed one insy little detail. You need a team!]
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Well there you go. And thank you kouga's gurl for reviewing me. Thanks for the advice. Hope you like this chappy. This chap is dedicated to my mates, white-fang123, pink pussy cat and the freaky weirdo. Read their stories as well.
I've started to write another story so keep a look out.
"Speaking" 'People thinking' [Bitbeasts thinking]
Beyblade miricales and missing teams!
"We, we, drew! That's never happened to me before." Said Marisa surprised.
"Really? Same hear." Said the blonde. "My names Kira."
"Nice to meet you Kira." Said Marisa.
"Well, I'll see you later." Kira said as she walked off waving.
'Wow. That's never happened to us Missy! Maybe I'll meet some new bladers at camp. No! I'm not going to enjoy it.'
[I think you should try and enjoy the camp.]
'Sorry, no can do.'
[Ok. But we could get a lot of practice done without any disturbances.]
'Maybe.' Marisa and her bit beast Missy had been able to talk to each other in their minds ever since Marisa got Missy. Marisa let out a huge sigh, which could only mean one thing. She was thinking about Mundian. She got her laptop out of her rucksack. She may have had a laptop but she was no computer geek. She typed in a message and e-mailed it to Mundian. She waited in the middle of the park for a reply. She waited around half an hour and still no answer. She sighed once more and walked back to her house to pack. Her parents were in the kitchen.
"How are you honey?" asked her mum. There was no reply. Marisa just stormed up the stairs and into her room.
'He hasn't replied to any of my e-mails.' She had been sending him e-mails ever since he moved to Japan eight months ago. Mundian hadn't contacted her in anyway. She sighed one last time and opened up her laptop. She went on the Internet and typed into the address bar the name of her favourite beyblade website. She loved the Internet nearly as much as she loved to blade. She looked on the News page. In front of her flashing in huge capitals said TORNEMENT! This is what Marisa lived for.
"A tournament, a tournament, a tournament!" she sang as she skipped round her bedroom. She sat down on her bed again and scrolled down the page to find a date. 20th July.
"OH NO!" Marisa screamed. The tournament was on the third day of camp.
'I could sneak out.'
[You'll probably need a diversion.] Marisa looked at the pocket in her red leather mini skirt. She saw a faint glow illuminating it. She reached into her pocket and pulled out Missy.
'Why? Why that day?'
[You'll need to make friends to get a diversion.] Missy was trying so hard to make Marisa happy when she went ton camp.
At the bottom of the page on the website she saw an application form. She entered her details and submitted them.
[You're entering?]
'Of course! How could I miss a tournament.'
[I think you missed one insy little detail. You need a team!]
-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'-'
Well there you go. And thank you kouga's gurl for reviewing me. Thanks for the advice. Hope you like this chappy. This chap is dedicated to my mates, white-fang123, pink pussy cat and the freaky weirdo. Read their stories as well.