Hey everyone. I'd just like to say that my other story (That's what you get
for leaving!) is partly the freaky weirdo's cos she helped me so so so
much. Thank you to her! Read her stories.
Here goes. Hope you guys like it.
Arrival at the palace and a curious boy!
"Come on honey. We've got to leave." Yelled Marisa's mum.
"Coming, coming." She groaned as she threw on her backpack and picked up a small bag.
"That's all your taking?" said her mother in shock.
"It's only a week." Marisa said and jumped in the back of the car.
It had been a long two-hour journey before they arrived. Passing fields and more fields.
"We're here!" said her mum enthusiastically. Marisa grunted as she looked at the huge old castle. Her mother looked at her with a sad expression, knowing Marisa was going to make this lace into a living hell. Her mother sighed.
"Like you said, it's only a week." Said her mother as she encouraged Marisa to go in.
"Whatever!" she said as she slowly walked up to the creepy building. She looked around her. There it was. A tall building that she thought must have been the stadium.
[It's amazing!]
'Yeah, all the tournaments we've been in have had tiny stadiums.'
[Do you think anyone here can blade?]
'No! At least not as well as us.' Missy laughed at this statement. Marisa pushed open the heavy iron doors.
'This isn't camp. This is a palace.' She stared in amazement. It was fit for a queen. (Notice I'm not using the word king. Some people can be so sexist these days. Especially when people say god is a man. Something for you guys to think about. Oh well back to the story.) On one of the walls was a mirror at least five metres long.
"Wow!" she whispered. She looked at herself. She was wearing a black leather mini skirt, black leather knee high boots and a red leather sleeveless top. (Sorry for all the cows out there. Mooooooooo.) Her purple hair (which came just below her shoulders) swayed as a draft came through the doors.
"Please come with me young lady." Said a lady in uniform. Marisa shot around and stared angrily at he with her blue eyes. She hated that name, young lady. She got called that by her parents when she was naughty, so she called that a lot.
"Please come into the hall with the others miss." Marisa slowly walked into the massive room. She stood there, amazed at the size of the room. She had lived in a small house her whole life so she wasn't used to this. She went and sat down with around two thousand other people. She was right at he back.
"Thank you and welcome to camp Shandella." Said a man standing on the stage at the front of the hall. "I hope you all have a wonderful time here and enjoy yourself. I will let you go out line by line to get the key for your room. Some of you may have to share. Just go to the desk and state your name." He sent the back line to go get their keys. Marisa was the first to get her key. Luckily she wasn't sharing with anyone. She was on the second floor in room 214. She walked up the steep golden stairs and walked along a corridor until she reached her room. She put her key in and turned it to the right. As soon as she saw inside her room her mouth dropped open because everything in the bedroom was gold. EVERYTHING!
[Wow]
'Is that all you can say?'
[Wow, y?]
'God. Look at that.' Marisa laid her eyes on a golden basket filled with golden coloured fruits. She sat down on her golden bed and just looked around her room. She got up and went onto her balcony. She admired the view for about an half an hour, then she heard a voice coming from her left.
"Nice view isn't it." Said a boy. She looked over to the balcony on her left and saw a boy staring at the sunset as well. He had black hair and a Chinese style outfit.
"My names Ray." Said the boy. "Well?" he asked.
"Well what?" Marisa questioned back.
"What's your name?"
"Why would you want to know?" Ray just stared at her. "Ok, it's Marisa"
"I guess I'll see you around, Marisa. Marisa just stared back at the sunset.
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Well there you go. Please r&r. If you could be so kind. Thanks to everyone who reviewed me. I'm so touched. *Begins to cry* Sniffle sniffle. Ok, I'm ok now. I'm going to leave you guessing at whether Ray and her are going to fall in love. Mwahaha! I'm so evil.
Here goes. Hope you guys like it.
Arrival at the palace and a curious boy!
"Come on honey. We've got to leave." Yelled Marisa's mum.
"Coming, coming." She groaned as she threw on her backpack and picked up a small bag.
"That's all your taking?" said her mother in shock.
"It's only a week." Marisa said and jumped in the back of the car.
It had been a long two-hour journey before they arrived. Passing fields and more fields.
"We're here!" said her mum enthusiastically. Marisa grunted as she looked at the huge old castle. Her mother looked at her with a sad expression, knowing Marisa was going to make this lace into a living hell. Her mother sighed.
"Like you said, it's only a week." Said her mother as she encouraged Marisa to go in.
"Whatever!" she said as she slowly walked up to the creepy building. She looked around her. There it was. A tall building that she thought must have been the stadium.
[It's amazing!]
'Yeah, all the tournaments we've been in have had tiny stadiums.'
[Do you think anyone here can blade?]
'No! At least not as well as us.' Missy laughed at this statement. Marisa pushed open the heavy iron doors.
'This isn't camp. This is a palace.' She stared in amazement. It was fit for a queen. (Notice I'm not using the word king. Some people can be so sexist these days. Especially when people say god is a man. Something for you guys to think about. Oh well back to the story.) On one of the walls was a mirror at least five metres long.
"Wow!" she whispered. She looked at herself. She was wearing a black leather mini skirt, black leather knee high boots and a red leather sleeveless top. (Sorry for all the cows out there. Mooooooooo.) Her purple hair (which came just below her shoulders) swayed as a draft came through the doors.
"Please come with me young lady." Said a lady in uniform. Marisa shot around and stared angrily at he with her blue eyes. She hated that name, young lady. She got called that by her parents when she was naughty, so she called that a lot.
"Please come into the hall with the others miss." Marisa slowly walked into the massive room. She stood there, amazed at the size of the room. She had lived in a small house her whole life so she wasn't used to this. She went and sat down with around two thousand other people. She was right at he back.
"Thank you and welcome to camp Shandella." Said a man standing on the stage at the front of the hall. "I hope you all have a wonderful time here and enjoy yourself. I will let you go out line by line to get the key for your room. Some of you may have to share. Just go to the desk and state your name." He sent the back line to go get their keys. Marisa was the first to get her key. Luckily she wasn't sharing with anyone. She was on the second floor in room 214. She walked up the steep golden stairs and walked along a corridor until she reached her room. She put her key in and turned it to the right. As soon as she saw inside her room her mouth dropped open because everything in the bedroom was gold. EVERYTHING!
[Wow]
'Is that all you can say?'
[Wow, y?]
'God. Look at that.' Marisa laid her eyes on a golden basket filled with golden coloured fruits. She sat down on her golden bed and just looked around her room. She got up and went onto her balcony. She admired the view for about an half an hour, then she heard a voice coming from her left.
"Nice view isn't it." Said a boy. She looked over to the balcony on her left and saw a boy staring at the sunset as well. He had black hair and a Chinese style outfit.
"My names Ray." Said the boy. "Well?" he asked.
"Well what?" Marisa questioned back.
"What's your name?"
"Why would you want to know?" Ray just stared at her. "Ok, it's Marisa"
"I guess I'll see you around, Marisa. Marisa just stared back at the sunset.
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Well there you go. Please r&r. If you could be so kind. Thanks to everyone who reviewed me. I'm so touched. *Begins to cry* Sniffle sniffle. Ok, I'm ok now. I'm going to leave you guessing at whether Ray and her are going to fall in love. Mwahaha! I'm so evil.